for Counterpoint5/17 c54 Emmalin3
Your story-telling ability is staggering; the character depth in each player in the story carry through from AA5 right through to the end, and on, expanding into and through Counterpoint - without a flaw, amazing piece of work! The Eastcoast Intellectualism and banter is a pure delight. I've learned so much from reading and hitting the dictionary to make sure I understand the implications spoken of...and meditating on Esme's evaluation of what she feels is going on with Bella when the breakup occurs and on throughout the story. There were so many places I found myself tearing up and downright sobbing at Edwards loss of his beloved father/friend. Experienced all over again the anguish my own mother suffered when told of my dad's quick and unexpected death at 52y/o...you were able to pull all the emotion of the human experience without making it maudlin.
I will, no doubt, return to your beautiful love story again and again...
Thank you so much.
Your story-telling ability is staggering; the character depth in each player in the story carry through from AA5 right through to the end, and on, expanding into and through Counterpoint - without a flaw, amazing piece of work! The Eastcoast Intellectualism and banter is a pure delight. I've learned so much from reading and hitting the dictionary to make sure I understand the implications spoken of...and meditating on Esme's evaluation of what she feels is going on with Bella when the breakup occurs and on throughout the story. There were so many places I found myself tearing up and downright sobbing at Edwards loss of his beloved father/friend. Experienced all over again the anguish my own mother suffered when told of my dad's quick and unexpected death at 52y/o...you were able to pull all the emotion of the human experience without making it maudlin.
I will, no doubt, return to your beautiful love story again and again...
Thank you so much.
2/20 c39 daleyllewey
Not many stories make me cry. In the five or so years I've been in the fic universe I think I've only cried twice due to words I've read. This chapter had me bawling like a baby. Your words evoked emotion in me like not much else can. Thank you :)
I love losing myself in a story and I've lost myself so completely in this one I feel like I just lost my own dad. I'm taking your advice & telling him I love him as soon as possible.
Not many stories make me cry. In the five or so years I've been in the fic universe I think I've only cried twice due to words I've read. This chapter had me bawling like a baby. Your words evoked emotion in me like not much else can. Thank you :)
I love losing myself in a story and I've lost myself so completely in this one I feel like I just lost my own dad. I'm taking your advice & telling him I love him as soon as possible.
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4Postapocalypticdepository
Hands down this is one of my all time favorites. It's even better the second time around
4PostapocalypticdepositoryHands down this is one of my all time favorites. It's even better the second time around
12/2/2012 c54 Guest
So beautiful. And the to have and to blow was hilarious! ;-P
So beautiful. And the to have and to blow was hilarious! ;-P
12/2/2012 c53 Guest
Oh so sweet! And so glad she said yes and it was easy for her. Edward shouldn't have worried so much that she would say no.
And I love that she loved getting Esme's ring. So special. :-)
Oh so sweet! And so glad she said yes and it was easy for her. Edward shouldn't have worried so much that she would say no.
And I love that she loved getting Esme's ring. So special. :-)
12/2/2012 c52 Guest
So sweet him tailing those things to his dad. And the answer of the singers singing his favorite Edward. He got his answer that his dad approves and is with him always.
So sweet him tailing those things to his dad. And the answer of the singers singing his favorite Edward. He got his answer that his dad approves and is with him always.
12/2/2012 c51 Guest
So glad I came back to the AA5 world from being gone. I enjoyed reading Edward's POV of AA5. Now on to the rest of the outtakes and final words.
So glad I came back to the AA5 world from being gone. I enjoyed reading Edward's POV of AA5. Now on to the rest of the outtakes and final words.
12/1/2012 c47 2Twink423
Such a beautiful reunion for them. Bella truly feeling love and telling Edward. And making love together for the first time and not just f*cking.
2Twink423Such a beautiful reunion for them. Bella truly feeling love and telling Edward. And making love together for the first time and not just f*cking.
12/1/2012 c44 Twink423
Bella declaring Edward as the love of life was a huge step to moving forward. And her feelings are real and Edward believes her now.
Bella declaring Edward as the love of life was a huge step to moving forward. And her feelings are real and Edward believes her now.
12/1/2012 c43 Twink423
Glad E&B are starting over and slow. And his dad would be happy for him being with Bella again because she makes him happy.
Glad E&B are starting over and slow. And his dad would be happy for him being with Bella again because she makes him happy.
12/1/2012 c41 Twink423
Loving the slow rebuilding of trust. And Bella and Esme getting along cooking was sweet.
Loving the slow rebuilding of trust. And Bella and Esme getting along cooking was sweet.
12/1/2012 c40 Twink423
So heartbreaking with him showing up at Bella's house sobbing. He's so hurt and alone from losing his dad. He can't lose her again and make it through.
So heartbreaking with him showing up at Bella's house sobbing. He's so hurt and alone from losing his dad. He can't lose her again and make it through.
12/1/2012 c39 Twink423
Such a painful time for them all. But I'm glad Bella is there for Edward when he needs her most.
Such a painful time for them all. But I'm glad Bella is there for Edward when he needs her most.