for Hangout with a criminal1/4 c1 Guest
i loved it a lot :)
i loved it a lot :)
1/2 c6 
27azab
ok but will you change it from chapter one?
when you do if you do please can you not me?
27azabok but will you change it from chapter one?
when you do if you do please can you not me?
11/15/2012 c5 tripp
kickass story i love the idea you should finnish it
kickass story i love the idea you should finnish it
2/27/2011 c3 Manager Of The Abyss
I don't have a problem with adult themes. I have a problem with the fact that you can't take a few seconds out of your oh so busy time to correct a simple summary. K,T,M, rating it does not matter. That's no my point. ALL fics must play by the same rules.
All you have to do is indicate this fic will contain Shounen-ai,the lesser form of yaoi. That is all I am asking. Is that really too difficult? All other stories on this site comply with this simple demand. Why are you so defiant and confrontational?
Stacey is generally accepted as a female name,but that does not mean that guys cannot have that name. Just as Billy can also be used for women,so your argument there fails. I'm sure there exist women using Ace as a name.
I also do not take too kindly to use of that r word. It's offensive and downright unacceptable. I'm sure the disabled and people who know have friends like that are not forgiving of such an ugly word.
I haven't seen all of the Hellsing OVAs nor do I know that much on the anime,but I still love crossovers with the two.
It's easier to get caught up and research Devil May Cry than One Piece.
Well guess what hotshot you can get reported for failing to provide an accurate account of a summary. It is mandatory so I am not doing this to be such a hardass.
For the writers that can't write a decent summary,their stories get ignored as a result.
Ah the good old "everyone's doing it so it must mean I should too" excuse. I'm sure the cops that pull you over for speeding haven't heard that one before.
I'm done trying to point out the errors. Don't bother e-mailing me as I will delete it.
I don't have a problem with adult themes. I have a problem with the fact that you can't take a few seconds out of your oh so busy time to correct a simple summary. K,T,M, rating it does not matter. That's no my point. ALL fics must play by the same rules.
All you have to do is indicate this fic will contain Shounen-ai,the lesser form of yaoi. That is all I am asking. Is that really too difficult? All other stories on this site comply with this simple demand. Why are you so defiant and confrontational?
Stacey is generally accepted as a female name,but that does not mean that guys cannot have that name. Just as Billy can also be used for women,so your argument there fails. I'm sure there exist women using Ace as a name.
I also do not take too kindly to use of that r word. It's offensive and downright unacceptable. I'm sure the disabled and people who know have friends like that are not forgiving of such an ugly word.
I haven't seen all of the Hellsing OVAs nor do I know that much on the anime,but I still love crossovers with the two.
It's easier to get caught up and research Devil May Cry than One Piece.
Well guess what hotshot you can get reported for failing to provide an accurate account of a summary. It is mandatory so I am not doing this to be such a hardass.
For the writers that can't write a decent summary,their stories get ignored as a result.
Ah the good old "everyone's doing it so it must mean I should too" excuse. I'm sure the cops that pull you over for speeding haven't heard that one before.
I'm done trying to point out the errors. Don't bother e-mailing me as I will delete it.
2/26/2011 c4 Manager Of The Abyss
It does not matter if this story here has gay sex or not, you still need to warn people of what exactly the pairing entails.
Like I said before,you can't go on assuming everyone knows about One Piece or its characters. It is your responsibility to let the readers know if the pairing is a straight,yuri,or yaoi one.
Well duh the readers do give a crap about the summaries. What kind of half assed answer is that? When you can't be bothered to provide an adequate summary of what one can expect to read about in a story,then why should anyone bother to read your story?
And please do correct your sentence. You can't seem to find a single good one in this dumb what?
Now you just come off as being arrogant,foolish and unable to be told legitimate criticism.
It does not matter if this story here has gay sex or not, you still need to warn people of what exactly the pairing entails.
Like I said before,you can't go on assuming everyone knows about One Piece or its characters. It is your responsibility to let the readers know if the pairing is a straight,yuri,or yaoi one.
Well duh the readers do give a crap about the summaries. What kind of half assed answer is that? When you can't be bothered to provide an adequate summary of what one can expect to read about in a story,then why should anyone bother to read your story?
And please do correct your sentence. You can't seem to find a single good one in this dumb what?
Now you just come off as being arrogant,foolish and unable to be told legitimate criticism.
2/25/2011 c5 Manager Of The Abyss
Dude where are the warnings? Since this is a slash fanfic,you need to let the readers know about it in the summary. i.e. this is a yaoi fanfiction. This fanfiction contains yaoi. See ? Was that too freaking hard?
Al you did was list DanteXAce. I don't know who the hell is this Ace is and whether it is a man or woman or both.
Never ever put "don't like don't read" in the summary. That makes you come off as someone unable to take flak of any kind and
rude.
Was that really the best summary you can come up with?
Dude where are the warnings? Since this is a slash fanfic,you need to let the readers know about it in the summary. i.e. this is a yaoi fanfiction. This fanfiction contains yaoi. See ? Was that too freaking hard?
Al you did was list DanteXAce. I don't know who the hell is this Ace is and whether it is a man or woman or both.
Never ever put "don't like don't read" in the summary. That makes you come off as someone unable to take flak of any kind and
rude.
Was that really the best summary you can come up with?