2/27 c2 grandetiopaco
Pins and needles. Still digging the story but I can't wait to see how you tie things up.

10/16/2012 c3 3s-david-m
What a wickedly demented premise! I wouldn't be able to resist finding out the truth. I almost hate this open ending, but you can't really end it any other way can you?

3/2/2012 c3 13Nephite
Omg! I freakin love this story! In the first chapter I was thinking, please oh please just ignore it and stay together. I think you ended it perfectly and beautifully. I thought it would have been interesting to show the lab results in the scientists hands. But I'm fine not knowing. Either way I don't care. Great job, absolutely loved it, instant favorite.

I hope this doesn't make me sound like a sikko. Lol.

11/27/2009 c3 chucksara4ever
not very keen on open ended stories particularly one that suggests that this realationship is so wrong. Very well written up to that point. and loved that they talked and Sarah waiting for him to wake up in ch 2

8/21/2009 c3 4truthseekr
MSB,

I meant to review this months ago and I'm sorry that I haven't until now. Better late than never, I hope.

I really enjoyed the characterization especially in the first two chapters. I thought it was spot-on there. In the final chapter, I thought it was questionable as to whether Chuck would accept not knowing the results of the test...BUT I understand that it's necessary to bring the theme to fruition and I really enjoyed the execution of the theme.

Sure some may not understand why you left this story as you did (I've been the victim of this argument before in the way I ended my first story). However, I like your voice and the way that you ended it was very interesting. In fact, I think it made the piece what it is-very clever.

The way you did and did not answer the question of whether Chuck and Sarah were related or not was a nice allusion to the Much Ado theme. (My personal favorite bit of Shakespeare by the way).

What is purely fascinating to me and perhaps the reason that I couldn't let this go without reviewing it was something that was probably not intended by you. I get that your message is that the scare was all Much Ado About Nothing. The question that I keep wondering is could this be much ado about nothing meaning that they were not related and it's no big deal? OR... it is much ado about nothing meaning that being related and still in a relationship is no big deal? :D It's the last one that really turns the meaning of your cleverness on its head.

Okay, please don't kill me for suggesting this...cause I truly enjoyed the story. It's just when I get allusions in my head, they just won't leave me be.

Thank you so much for writing this story.

7/21/2009 c1 21Batwoman
pretty fun.

I did notice something that I forgot about in revelations. it's minor, but I thought I'd mention it so you can correct it for future fics. knew is the past tens of know, as in, "hew knew something was wrong." where new is is the opposite of old.

ok, shutting up now.

7/15/2009 c3 2jagged1
Not at all what I suspected to have happen ; ), but I'll go with the Shakespeare title "Much Ado..." as the meaning; if I don't, it will make me queazy to think of the alternatives..:)

A fun story - thanks.