for Wisdom4/21 c1 
12esmeralda kitty cat
love this O.o nothing more for me to say cause i don't know how to put it into words but...i love this :D
12esmeralda kitty catlove this O.o nothing more for me to say cause i don't know how to put it into words but...i love this :D
2/2 c1 Watanabe Maya
Wonderful job :) i especially loved your headcanon about why japan uses a sword instead of a gun, and the way you worded it out was amazing :D
Wonderful job :) i especially loved your headcanon about why japan uses a sword instead of a gun, and the way you worded it out was amazing :D
12/20/2012 c1 1xiao mu dan
This is amazing. I love how you portrayed the characters, the situation, just everything! I feel like I'm actually the characters sometimes. Just wonderful.
1xiao mu danThis is amazing. I love how you portrayed the characters, the situation, just everything! I feel like I'm actually the characters sometimes. Just wonderful.
10/17/2012 c1 21KnowledgeandImagination
This is so beautiful, so sad, and yet so hopeful at the same time. I loved it all
thank you for this wonderful story!
21KnowledgeandImaginationThis is so beautiful, so sad, and yet so hopeful at the same time. I loved it all
thank you for this wonderful story!
10/18/2011 c1 Hegeg
Really beautiful work... I've been brought to tears, and maybe it's the time of the night, 3AM, but...this was incredibly touching.
Honestly...I'm not a big fan of reading about the Axis during WWII, because let's face it; they were on the side of injustice. But the way you wrote Germany's want for defiance, Italy simply trying to disengage himself from the situation made sense in my eyes. You made it work. Not to mention the main meat of the story, the interaction and feeling between Japan and China; it felt like all they needed to do would be have that talk, but the line at the end there struck me; when China explained why he didn't stop him...it made sense. Sorry for ranting about how well you kept them in character; it just doesn't happen enough. You've done amazingly.
I love the way the scenes flowed into one another smoothly as water, as well. There wasn't a single break in the images in my mind, it flowed constantly, which is a testament to a well-written piece of work.
Really beautiful work... I've been brought to tears, and maybe it's the time of the night, 3AM, but...this was incredibly touching.
Honestly...I'm not a big fan of reading about the Axis during WWII, because let's face it; they were on the side of injustice. But the way you wrote Germany's want for defiance, Italy simply trying to disengage himself from the situation made sense in my eyes. You made it work. Not to mention the main meat of the story, the interaction and feeling between Japan and China; it felt like all they needed to do would be have that talk, but the line at the end there struck me; when China explained why he didn't stop him...it made sense. Sorry for ranting about how well you kept them in character; it just doesn't happen enough. You've done amazingly.
I love the way the scenes flowed into one another smoothly as water, as well. There wasn't a single break in the images in my mind, it flowed constantly, which is a testament to a well-written piece of work.
9/20/2011 c1 38Melody Syper Carston
Yao and Kiku are so perfectly described here. Especially Yao's personality and the way Japan is always interpreting him.
This is One of the best fics I've read with this pairing. The plot line was so straight-forward and I could read each emotion that was being portrayed. The way everything was described was excellent as well.
Lovely
~Melody Syper Carston
38Melody Syper CarstonYao and Kiku are so perfectly described here. Especially Yao's personality and the way Japan is always interpreting him.
This is One of the best fics I've read with this pairing. The plot line was so straight-forward and I could read each emotion that was being portrayed. The way everything was described was excellent as well.
Lovely
~Melody Syper Carston
2/19/2011 c1 19Pyrahus
Bleh, I realized I faved without leaving a review so I apologize for being so late xD.
This story seriously made me cry; you established this beautifully poignant tone and maintained it throughout.
The little actions you took the time to describe, the little descriptions brought this story to life, it's fantastic!
I definitely sniffled abit reading this, awesome job!
Thanks for writing this lovely piece 3.
19PyrahusBleh, I realized I faved without leaving a review so I apologize for being so late xD.
This story seriously made me cry; you established this beautifully poignant tone and maintained it throughout.
The little actions you took the time to describe, the little descriptions brought this story to life, it's fantastic!
I definitely sniffled abit reading this, awesome job!
Thanks for writing this lovely piece 3.
6/3/2010 c1 5blind-alchemist
Breathlessly beautiful imagery; haunting and sad acount of the long, long history of China / Japan. Your prose flowed efficaciously and captured the angst and emotion between these two. I am enamored of Kiku X Yao, and you did them justice. Wonderful work.
5blind-alchemistBreathlessly beautiful imagery; haunting and sad acount of the long, long history of China / Japan. Your prose flowed efficaciously and captured the angst and emotion between these two. I am enamored of Kiku X Yao, and you did them justice. Wonderful work.
5/7/2010 c1 1death-bakes
This was an extremely beautiful story and moved me to tears. You really captured the bittersweet and sad relationship between the two countries. Great job!
1death-bakesThis was an extremely beautiful story and moved me to tears. You really captured the bittersweet and sad relationship between the two countries. Great job!
2/5/2010 c1 27sweetpea12767
holy crap that was one of the better china/japan fics ive read! lol XD loved it!
27sweetpea12767holy crap that was one of the better china/japan fics ive read! lol XD loved it!
11/27/2009 c1 Theshakermaker
It was a lovely story.
I loved the characterization of the characters and the end was particularly good!
It was a lovely story.
I loved the characterization of the characters and the end was particularly good!