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Why is Harry talking like Dumbledore? I don't think he ever said 'shall' in his life.
Why is Harry talking like Dumbledore? I don't think he ever said 'shall' in his life.
11/9/2011 c6 SheWhoMustNotBeNamed
I gave up reading this FF at this point, even though there are 10 more chapters. Not meaning to be nasty, but you need to improve it and make it more interesting.
You-Know-Her
I gave up reading this FF at this point, even though there are 10 more chapters. Not meaning to be nasty, but you need to improve it and make it more interesting.
You-Know-Her
5/15/2011 c8 chat noire
And now Lily's a muggleborn again? Honestly your fic's interesting but you have got to get your facts straight. And Remus and Hermione? Seriously? That's just sooo wrong on sooo many levels, 1) he used to be her teacher 2) Hermione understands better than anyone that you can't mess with time, yet by dating Remus that's exactly what she's doing
And now Lily's a muggleborn again? Honestly your fic's interesting but you have got to get your facts straight. And Remus and Hermione? Seriously? That's just sooo wrong on sooo many levels, 1) he used to be her teacher 2) Hermione understands better than anyone that you can't mess with time, yet by dating Remus that's exactly what she's doing
5/15/2011 c7 chat noire
Okay there are a few mistakes in this chapter. . . 1) Lily's mum going to Hogwarts, which would make her a witch, with would make Petunia a witch
2) Lily wouldn't have been a muggle, she is however a muggleborn, but with you making her mum a witch Lily would therefore become a halfblood.
Okay there are a few mistakes in this chapter. . . 1) Lily's mum going to Hogwarts, which would make her a witch, with would make Petunia a witch
2) Lily wouldn't have been a muggle, she is however a muggleborn, but with you making her mum a witch Lily would therefore become a halfblood.
8/25/2009 c16 
4Hocapontas
I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! When they go back will anything have changed? Did they change anything in the past? And I love that Sirius (adult) is in this story.
4HocapontasI'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! When they go back will anything have changed? Did they change anything in the past? And I love that Sirius (adult) is in this story.
6/7/2009 c8 Leah
First she was a muggle-born then a half-blood then a muggle-born.
WTF?
Someone clearly has ADD with Lily Evans.
First she was a muggle-born then a half-blood then a muggle-born.
WTF?
Someone clearly has ADD with Lily Evans.
6/7/2009 c7 Leah
LILY WAS A MUGGLEBORN! Says so in book one! Heck why am I still reading this crap!
LILY WAS A MUGGLEBORN! Says so in book one! Heck why am I still reading this crap!
6/7/2009 c5 Leah
Over-done cliched Hermione! Who I'm sorry to inform you is not so gorgeous men would be talking about her. She's only average maybe slightly less.
Over-done cliched Hermione! Who I'm sorry to inform you is not so gorgeous men would be talking about her. She's only average maybe slightly less.
6/7/2009 c4 Leah
Kay it's getting harder to read this story with every scene with Lily being
'I wish I could slap her.'
Kay it's getting harder to read this story with every scene with Lily being
'I wish I could slap her.'