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7/13/2009 c1 
908RoxiusGod...I wish I could write as well as you...
7/12/2009 c1 26TuumeThis was deep and intriguing. You painted the characters well and described Kallen's envy flawlessly. I hope to see a sequal to this.
7/4/2009 c1 1chimerasVery nice story, especially in the areas of characterization and realism. ^^
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