for In Between7/2/2012 c1 Guest
That was so, so, sweet. The geek in me is rejoicing. I've never read any Mario fanfics before, so it was actually kinda weird to imagine him saying anything other than 'Mamma mia!' and 'Wahoo!' - oh god please tell me he would NOT say that during kinky times...
But I think you portrayed their personalities really well. 3 such a cute fanfic!
That was so, so, sweet. The geek in me is rejoicing. I've never read any Mario fanfics before, so it was actually kinda weird to imagine him saying anything other than 'Mamma mia!' and 'Wahoo!' - oh god please tell me he would NOT say that during kinky times...
But I think you portrayed their personalities really well. 3 such a cute fanfic!
6/29/2012 c1 Clemy-sensei
Wow... That was really cute, I never thought I'd giggle while reading a fic about peach and mario '
Wow... That was really cute, I never thought I'd giggle while reading a fic about peach and mario '
8/3/2009 c1 
1Foxeaf
Hahaha! Funny, in-character and really well written. XD (oh, and it wasn't that corny either ;D )
Great job! ^^
1FoxeafHahaha! Funny, in-character and really well written. XD (oh, and it wasn't that corny either ;D )
Great job! ^^
7/26/2009 c1 34Walkazo
Good story. The characters were pretty accurate, and the awkwardness of the whole exchange was also quite realistic. And funny.
34WalkazoGood story. The characters were pretty accurate, and the awkwardness of the whole exchange was also quite realistic. And funny.
7/14/2009 c1 Wouldn't u like 2 no
i don't think mario calls peach,princess.because luigi only called peach,princess in super paper mario(which was crap),the rest of the time,luigi calls her peach,so if luigi calls her peach,i really think mario would call her peach since he's closer 2 her.i love that line"she knew bowser would kidnapped by the end of the week.friday or saturday depends on the weather."
i don't think mario calls peach,princess.because luigi only called peach,princess in super paper mario(which was crap),the rest of the time,luigi calls her peach,so if luigi calls her peach,i really think mario would call her peach since he's closer 2 her.i love that line"she knew bowser would kidnapped by the end of the week.friday or saturday depends on the weather."