for Help from Below7/13/2012 c7 Sarl2799
Please continue this. I love this so much.
Please continue this. I love this so much.
5/12/2012 c7
3Cleas-1
O_O I loveeee your story!
Awww Zelink story! With Pitty! I love that little angel its' so cute
Please continue the sorry! I really like it!
3Cleas-1O_O I loveeee your story!
Awww Zelink story! With Pitty! I love that little angel its' so cute
Please continue the sorry! I really like it!
7/15/2011 c3 TLoZfantic44
Uhhh I hate Link and Zelda pairings...but your story is good i just really dislike this pairing. :/ I liked the humor
Uhhh I hate Link and Zelda pairings...but your story is good i just really dislike this pairing. :/ I liked the humor
7/15/2011 c5 TLoZfantic44
Uhhh still dislike this pairing but I liked the part when link asked do you need CPR? pit said yeah you wish haha
Uhhh still dislike this pairing but I liked the part when link asked do you need CPR? pit said yeah you wish haha
7/15/2011 c3 TLoZfantic44
Uhhh I hate Link and Zelda pairings...but your story is good i just really dislike this pairing. :/ I liked the humor
Uhhh I hate Link and Zelda pairings...but your story is good i just really dislike this pairing. :/ I liked the humor
5/8/2010 c7 Roseilie
I think it would be really cool if you said something like:
"I...i think i'm in love with her" links voice trailed off. He braced him self for pit's out burst of laughter but none came.
"Don't worry," pit said looking into links blue eyes "We won't let her die."
I think it would be really cool if you said something like:
"I...i think i'm in love with her" links voice trailed off. He braced him self for pit's out burst of laughter but none came.
"Don't worry," pit said looking into links blue eyes "We won't let her die."
5/8/2010 c5 Roseilie
I like how he finds Zelda there but you never mentioned him taking her to his house.
I like how he finds Zelda there but you never mentioned him taking her to his house.
5/8/2010 c4 Roseilie
It's really good so far but there's one small issue. In the last chapter you said that link realized that pit was reading his diary. In this chapter, link was oblivious to it. Maybe you should make link take it away from pit and then maybe pit gets it when link is distracted with ilia.
It's really good so far but there's one small issue. In the last chapter you said that link realized that pit was reading his diary. In this chapter, link was oblivious to it. Maybe you should make link take it away from pit and then maybe pit gets it when link is distracted with ilia.
2/14/2010 c7 zelda fan
i like it
i like it
