for Rough Seas11/9/2012 c3 
8Maureen Thomas
I was reading this in the bathroom waiting for the tub to fill up... I looked over and it was almost overflowing! Another great chapter. Write more and I'd love to read it!
8Maureen ThomasI was reading this in the bathroom waiting for the tub to fill up... I looked over and it was almost overflowing! Another great chapter. Write more and I'd love to read it!
11/7/2012 c2 Maureen Thomas
I'm so confused... Parts of this sounded familiar, but not all of it... Was this a one shot at one point?
Loved the chapter and so happy the boys are in love! So sweet. And the sex was hot!
I'm so confused... Parts of this sounded familiar, but not all of it... Was this a one shot at one point?
Loved the chapter and so happy the boys are in love! So sweet. And the sex was hot!
11/5/2012 c1 Maureen Thomas
I read this and always review... But couldn't find my review.. ? At any rate, I reread it and still love it and am so looking forward to more!
I read this and always review... But couldn't find my review.. ? At any rate, I reread it and still love it and am so looking forward to more!
11/2/2012 c3 beanothercullen
I enjoyed this story so much. Loved them getting ring tatoo's sooo perfect for them. You created some great characters here. Thanks!
I enjoyed this story so much. Loved them getting ring tatoo's sooo perfect for them. You created some great characters here. Thanks!
11/1/2012 c2 beanothercullen
Ok i thouggt the first chapter was good but ong this was even better! Great job. I loved how patient edward was. He was just what Jasper needed. Great story thanks!
Ok i thouggt the first chapter was good but ong this was even better! Great job. I loved how patient edward was. He was just what Jasper needed. Great story thanks!
11/1/2012 c3 crosunshine
this was really a great ride! loved reading this short story!
thanks for writing and sharing
this was really a great ride! loved reading this short story!
thanks for writing and sharing
11/1/2012 c2 crosunshine
that was a great 2nd chapter! so full of love ...
and i have to look for this tattoos, i am always reading about them, but never saw them
that was a great 2nd chapter! so full of love ...
and i have to look for this tattoos, i am always reading about them, but never saw them
11/1/2012 c1 crosunshine
Thanks for the explanation for the tattoos :)
cant wait to find out what will happen next
Thanks for the explanation for the tattoos :)
cant wait to find out what will happen next
11/1/2012 c1 beanothercullen
That was soooo good. I can't wait to read more. I hope we get to see bellas reaction to his tats. Abd his decision. And defiantly more Jasper. Thanks
That was soooo good. I can't wait to read more. I hope we get to see bellas reaction to his tats. Abd his decision. And defiantly more Jasper. Thanks
6/15/2012 c3 BlueCat69
Even though Edward seems like the “together” one, apparently Jasper’s earlier actions cut deeply because it’s still Jasper, despite his personality and apprehension, who makes all the first moves and it’s really interesting to read both sides of the story and get both their thoughts. I hope it made sense…
Thank you so much for sharing.
Even though Edward seems like the “together” one, apparently Jasper’s earlier actions cut deeply because it’s still Jasper, despite his personality and apprehension, who makes all the first moves and it’s really interesting to read both sides of the story and get both their thoughts. I hope it made sense…
Thank you so much for sharing.
6/15/2012 c2 BlueCat69
Such a great chapter and finally Jasper realized that it’s the person, not the gender.
Such a great chapter and finally Jasper realized that it’s the person, not the gender.
6/15/2012 c1 BlueCat69
Such a brilliant first chapter! I love your writing style and the characters – it’s really amazing how you can make me feel like I know them without telling that much about them. You make me feel Edward’s pain and his numbness, just as I understand Jasper’s fear, denial and frustration.
Such a brilliant first chapter! I love your writing style and the characters – it’s really amazing how you can make me feel like I know them without telling that much about them. You make me feel Edward’s pain and his numbness, just as I understand Jasper’s fear, denial and frustration.