for Labyrinth1/10/2010 c4 outinritefield1
Geesh, Jareth just threatened to throw Hoggle into the bog of eternal stench if Sarah kissed him, he didn't threaten to kill him. But then again I guess Eric would be a little more ruthless then the Goblin king. Although I can picture Eric in those tights, I do not see him singing and dancing with all the little goblins.
Love the story! Can't wait for more!
Geesh, Jareth just threatened to throw Hoggle into the bog of eternal stench if Sarah kissed him, he didn't threaten to kill him. But then again I guess Eric would be a little more ruthless then the Goblin king. Although I can picture Eric in those tights, I do not see him singing and dancing with all the little goblins.
Love the story! Can't wait for more!
1/9/2010 c4 RevelryGirl
I love this! Please more more more... It's been too long i've been waiting for the update. I like the twist you've put on the story.
I love this! Please more more more... It's been too long i've been waiting for the update. I like the twist you've put on the story.
1/9/2010 c4 racecz5
I haven't watched the movie in at least a decade so if you vary from the story I will not mind. Your story is fantastic so far. Update soon.
I haven't watched the movie in at least a decade so if you vary from the story I will not mind. Your story is fantastic so far. Update soon.
12/25/2009 c1 
2Rin Is The Grudge Lady
[This is a review for ch. 3]
Ya know I totally get it! Quinn is a beast! *applause*
Also-to stroke your ego- You don't need a beta! This was almost flawless! There was one thing I noticed-
He was glaring at me once more with his moth (mouth) shut tightly.
-That's usually what a beta leaves out! Good job.
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
(update soon)
2Rin Is The Grudge Lady[This is a review for ch. 3]
Ya know I totally get it! Quinn is a beast! *applause*
Also-to stroke your ego- You don't need a beta! This was almost flawless! There was one thing I noticed-
He was glaring at me once more with his moth (mouth) shut tightly.
-That's usually what a beta leaves out! Good job.
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
(update soon)
12/20/2009 c3 2brittbug
So...Amazing! I love that you incorporated Quinn! I just love this story so much since it blends two things I absolutely love! You are an amazing author and I love your style! Keep it up! ;)
2brittbugSo...Amazing! I love that you incorporated Quinn! I just love this story so much since it blends two things I absolutely love! You are an amazing author and I love your style! Keep it up! ;)
12/20/2009 c2 outinritefield1
So for some odd reason FanFiction moved my review of chapter 2 to chapter 3. I don't even know how that happened. So this is my review for chapter 3. I don't have much to say but I loved that chapter. I can't tell you how much I love this story. And you are doing a great job combining both worlds! Also, I don't mind the inclusion of Lafayette. He is one of my favorite characters in the show. It is almost too bad he isn't in the books. So glad you updated and I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next update.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
So for some odd reason FanFiction moved my review of chapter 2 to chapter 3. I don't even know how that happened. So this is my review for chapter 3. I don't have much to say but I loved that chapter. I can't tell you how much I love this story. And you are doing a great job combining both worlds! Also, I don't mind the inclusion of Lafayette. He is one of my favorite characters in the show. It is almost too bad he isn't in the books. So glad you updated and I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next update.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
12/16/2009 c3 2Rin Is The Grudge Lady
Who could be Ludo you ask?
well one name does come to mind (screaming I might add)-
BUBBA!(loves)
btw I love this story so much and me and friend talk about how perfect it is and how it is the answer to our Labyrinth X SVM prayers. Please continue so me and my friend can continue to giggle about Bill being Hoggle XD.
2Rin Is The Grudge LadyWho could be Ludo you ask?
well one name does come to mind (screaming I might add)-
BUBBA!(loves)
btw I love this story so much and me and friend talk about how perfect it is and how it is the answer to our Labyrinth X SVM prayers. Please continue so me and my friend can continue to giggle about Bill being Hoggle XD.
12/14/2009 c3 outinritefield1
I think you've got a great idea with this story. I am sure we can all picture Eric dressed like David Bowie. I also love the movie the Labyrinth so to see it rewritten like this is greatly entertaining. Your doing a great job and I would hate to see you abandon the story all together, especially if you enjoy writing it. If you do decide to continue I will be waiting!
I think you've got a great idea with this story. I am sure we can all picture Eric dressed like David Bowie. I also love the movie the Labyrinth so to see it rewritten like this is greatly entertaining. Your doing a great job and I would hate to see you abandon the story all together, especially if you enjoy writing it. If you do decide to continue I will be waiting!
12/13/2009 c3 RevelryGirl
I love the original labyrinth and having Eric and Sookie in it make it so much better. Please keep writing I love the way this story is going. :D
I love the original labyrinth and having Eric and Sookie in it make it so much better. Please keep writing I love the way this story is going. :D
12/12/2009 c3 Lina0504
Hi, don't get discouraged, its a very interesting take on SVM and I would like to see more!
Hi, don't get discouraged, its a very interesting take on SVM and I would like to see more!