for 254 AM Somewhere east of Liberal, Kansas12/5/2009 c1 
2Kay8abc
I was very confused till I got to the end, then I could not stop laughing.
-Kate
2Kay8abcI was very confused till I got to the end, then I could not stop laughing.
-Kate
8/7/2009 c1 3He-will-knock-4-times
Ok that was an unexpected totally amazingful ending! If only they could put this in an episode :D
3He-will-knock-4-timesOk that was an unexpected totally amazingful ending! If only they could put this in an episode :D
7/30/2009 c1 ryn
AHAHAHHA... that was AMAZING. =] You're brilliant, and this was a very, very delightful piece of travesty. Bravo, bravo! You should totally write more! :D
AHAHAHHA... that was AMAZING. =] You're brilliant, and this was a very, very delightful piece of travesty. Bravo, bravo! You should totally write more! :D
7/30/2009 c1 dumblonde2008
I loved it!
BTW I used to live in Liberal! lol
I loved it!
BTW I used to live in Liberal! lol
7/30/2009 c1 24pen.paper.green.day
Wow! This was great! It was very clever, funny, and Marshall is completely in character. I really like the build up to finding out what's going on.
Oh, and this part had me in stitches!
"But now Marshall knew the truth about their Office Administrator. And the truth was more scary than anything Mary had imagined.
And now it was down to Marshall to kill her.
For he alone knew the truth.
Eleanor was Satan."
Awesome job! =]
24pen.paper.green.dayWow! This was great! It was very clever, funny, and Marshall is completely in character. I really like the build up to finding out what's going on.
Oh, and this part had me in stitches!
"But now Marshall knew the truth about their Office Administrator. And the truth was more scary than anything Mary had imagined.
And now it was down to Marshall to kill her.
For he alone knew the truth.
Eleanor was Satan."
Awesome job! =]
7/30/2009 c1 4yankee306
So great! You've got perfect pacing for gradually revealing what's going on. I especially like the bit about calling Mary.
(Typos:
breath s/b breathe
so not s/b so as not
period missing after mind
wondering s/b wandering
passed s/b past
fall out s/b fallout
Yes, I do a lot of copy editing.)
4yankee306So great! You've got perfect pacing for gradually revealing what's going on. I especially like the bit about calling Mary.
(Typos:
breath s/b breathe
so not s/b so as not
period missing after mind
wondering s/b wandering
passed s/b past
fall out s/b fallout
Yes, I do a lot of copy editing.)
7/30/2009 c1 7PollyCrackers
I enjoyed this a lot. Marshall felt true to character - I could easily envision him shifting between mortal terror and unthinking affection.
7PollyCrackersI enjoyed this a lot. Marshall felt true to character - I could easily envision him shifting between mortal terror and unthinking affection.
7/30/2009 c1 1dreamtramp1974
OMG this was a great story. Marshall's voice was spot on.
He'd been awake just twenty minutes and he was already prepared to reveal the locations of several of his witnesses. Only the annoying ones of course, but still...
LOVE!
1dreamtramp1974OMG this was a great story. Marshall's voice was spot on.
He'd been awake just twenty minutes and he was already prepared to reveal the locations of several of his witnesses. Only the annoying ones of course, but still...
LOVE!