for Moonlight Rose3/26 c55 raerae
Holy buckets i read this thing in two days! Love, wish there was more of a grand finale where Sess actually marks her as his mate but thats just my hopeless romantic and perv coming in. Best wishes
Holy buckets i read this thing in two days! Love, wish there was more of a grand finale where Sess actually marks her as his mate but thats just my hopeless romantic and perv coming in. Best wishes
3/16 c10 The Frau
Story is great, spelling is not. It seems like you typed so fast your fingers got ahead of your thoughts. There are many misspelled words and phrases...along with twisted sentences.
Despite these faults, I am enjoying your story...it would be much easier to read if not for these problems.
Keep writing, you might want to see about a good beta to help with this...it also helps to read the chapters aloud before publishing, that way your ear can pick up many mistakes...that's how GenkaiFan and I do it!
Story is great, spelling is not. It seems like you typed so fast your fingers got ahead of your thoughts. There are many misspelled words and phrases...along with twisted sentences.
Despite these faults, I am enjoying your story...it would be much easier to read if not for these problems.
Keep writing, you might want to see about a good beta to help with this...it also helps to read the chapters aloud before publishing, that way your ear can pick up many mistakes...that's how GenkaiFan and I do it!
2/11 c55 
3lunabloodmoon666
omg this is so amazing please do many many more like this as they are truly some of the best writing skills and characters ive ever seen :)
3lunabloodmoon666omg this is so amazing please do many many more like this as they are truly some of the best writing skills and characters ive ever seen :)
1/9 c55 Angel
what happened to sesshou's mom?
what happened to sesshou's mom?
1/7 c55 QuickSilverPrincess
I have to say, I truly enjoyed this story. I thought it was delightful and I didn't want to stop until it was over! There were only a couple of things that I didn't like; one, Kagome and Setsuke's back story confused me a lot. I couldn't tell if the were reincarnations, possessed by souls, or actually daughters of the goddess. The other thing was how quickly Kagome was ready to kill anyone who simply disrespected her. I understand she needed to assert her authority as the Future Lady of the West, but it just seemed to take her out of character. One thing I did truly enjoy though (besides the cutesyness of Sesshomaru's transformation) was being able to watch your writing style change from chapter to chapter. You really are very talented and I look forward to reading more of your work
I have to say, I truly enjoyed this story. I thought it was delightful and I didn't want to stop until it was over! There were only a couple of things that I didn't like; one, Kagome and Setsuke's back story confused me a lot. I couldn't tell if the were reincarnations, possessed by souls, or actually daughters of the goddess. The other thing was how quickly Kagome was ready to kill anyone who simply disrespected her. I understand she needed to assert her authority as the Future Lady of the West, but it just seemed to take her out of character. One thing I did truly enjoy though (besides the cutesyness of Sesshomaru's transformation) was being able to watch your writing style change from chapter to chapter. You really are very talented and I look forward to reading more of your work
1/6 c8 5Himawari-no-Ichizoku
*reads last line*
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*stan up from rollie (sp?) chair and flips desk w/laptop*
THE RETARD!
5Himawari-no-Ichizoku*reads last line*
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*stan up from rollie (sp?) chair and flips desk w/laptop*
THE RETARD!
1/4 c4 xiaolinfan17
im sorry but her beast is AWSOME! i wonder just how nuts shell drive kagome. and kagomes reaction, priceless
im sorry but her beast is AWSOME! i wonder just how nuts shell drive kagome. and kagomes reaction, priceless
12/25/2012 c55 Devilgirl4
It was a very good story. Took me 21 hours to read it all lol woke up read the first chapter and didn't sleep till I was done. :3 You should keep writing your great at it.
It was a very good story. Took me 21 hours to read it all lol woke up read the first chapter and didn't sleep till I was done. :3 You should keep writing your great at it.
12/13/2012 c55 Guest
It was good but can you please do some grammar and spelling revision? That will make it even better. And are you going to do a sequel? Because if you are can you include everybody having kids, well except the kids :)
It was good but can you please do some grammar and spelling revision? That will make it even better. And are you going to do a sequel? Because if you are can you include everybody having kids, well except the kids :)
12/11/2012 c3 Guest
Like the plot except for one thing. Kagome sounds like suck up and walk all over me kind of girl. She needs more back bone and fire. That's what she's known for. Also typical demonesses are not usually subservient.
Like the plot except for one thing. Kagome sounds like suck up and walk all over me kind of girl. She needs more back bone and fire. That's what she's known for. Also typical demonesses are not usually subservient.
12/10/2012 c55 2tigerangel123
i loved it from beginning to end it kept me on my toes and at the edge of my seat. you are a great writer. keep it up.
2tigerangel123i loved it from beginning to end it kept me on my toes and at the edge of my seat. you are a great writer. keep it up.
12/8/2012 c55 3valasaurus
Omg I just fell in love with this story I hope that maybe possibly there will be a sequel chapter where the couples have kids either way this story was amazing and I'm so glad that you stuck with it and finished the story
3valasaurusOmg I just fell in love with this story I hope that maybe possibly there will be a sequel chapter where the couples have kids either way this story was amazing and I'm so glad that you stuck with it and finished the story
12/8/2012 c55 Dagger-Seishin
could've used one more chapter. but awesome story over all. thanks for it btw i needed a good LONG story :) and i mean long in the best of ways. if u have anymore suggestions for kagome/sesshomaru stories please do tell me.
could've used one more chapter. but awesome story over all. thanks for it btw i needed a good LONG story :) and i mean long in the best of ways. if u have anymore suggestions for kagome/sesshomaru stories please do tell me.