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23Asj Johnson
Heh. Poor James. Severus thought he was doing something quite clever, but told him so by saying it was Slytherin-like. Also, I kind of hope Tobias will say something to Henry to get him to reconsider drinking.
23Asj JohnsonHeh. Poor James. Severus thought he was doing something quite clever, but told him so by saying it was Slytherin-like. Also, I kind of hope Tobias will say something to Henry to get him to reconsider drinking.
5/19 c25 Asj Johnson
Can’t Severus just make the braces invisible?
Hmm... I wonder why Severus would want to rearrange or remove information from a person’s mind...
Can’t Severus just make the braces invisible?
Hmm... I wonder why Severus would want to rearrange or remove information from a person’s mind...
5/19 c24 Asj Johnson
Yes, odd for a woman to talk about her son’s girlfriend while in labor. Kind of interesting, though.
Hmm... I suppose Snape’s solution to the screaming baby problem was better than what I would have suggested - making it so her screams were muted.
...I wonder if Severus realizes that without a Harry Potter, Voldemort may be a bigger problem for a longer time.
Yes, odd for a woman to talk about her son’s girlfriend while in labor. Kind of interesting, though.
Hmm... I suppose Snape’s solution to the screaming baby problem was better than what I would have suggested - making it so her screams were muted.
...I wonder if Severus realizes that without a Harry Potter, Voldemort may be a bigger problem for a longer time.
5/19 c22 Asj Johnson
So that’s what caused the wreck. Originally, Lily had gone to the recital and they didn’t get ice cream because she doesn’t like it. (also, I wonder if Severus will end up getting in some long-term trouble for wanting to make something of himself.)
Hopefully Severus will win the race. It'd be bad for him to be overconfident and lose.
So that’s what caused the wreck. Originally, Lily had gone to the recital and they didn’t get ice cream because she doesn’t like it. (also, I wonder if Severus will end up getting in some long-term trouble for wanting to make something of himself.)
Hopefully Severus will win the race. It'd be bad for him to be overconfident and lose.
5/16 c58 Mage
I read this all in 48 hours. Best fanfic EVER. Please update soon!
I read this all in 48 hours. Best fanfic EVER. Please update soon!
5/15 c40 9excessivelyperky
-That's neat about Flamel!
"Just what do you think you two are doing?"
-Like she doesn't know already, but I suppose the forms must be obeyed. I can see why Severus would have a really hard time keeping a straight face, snicker.
9excessivelyperky-That's neat about Flamel!
"Just what do you think you two are doing?"
-Like she doesn't know already, but I suppose the forms must be obeyed. I can see why Severus would have a really hard time keeping a straight face, snicker.
5/5 c58 3Corvireo
oh, wow. this story is just- wow. Its amazing. So happy for Sev. Even if he decides to do nothing amazing with the rest of his life, he is still someone important in the wizarding world. He'll even be famous once they get past the legal hurdles. His future is secure. And especially happy for Remus. Lycanthropy has dominated his life for so long, I bet he has a lot to get used to. And Remus actually has a chance for a better future now. Hes going to have to rethink his options now that there is nothing holding him back from doing whatever he wants to do with his life now. The best part is that Remus and Severus don't need Dumbledore at all now. And Walburga no longer has anything to hold over their heads. Awesome story, update soon!
3Corvireooh, wow. this story is just- wow. Its amazing. So happy for Sev. Even if he decides to do nothing amazing with the rest of his life, he is still someone important in the wizarding world. He'll even be famous once they get past the legal hurdles. His future is secure. And especially happy for Remus. Lycanthropy has dominated his life for so long, I bet he has a lot to get used to. And Remus actually has a chance for a better future now. Hes going to have to rethink his options now that there is nothing holding him back from doing whatever he wants to do with his life now. The best part is that Remus and Severus don't need Dumbledore at all now. And Walburga no longer has anything to hold over their heads. Awesome story, update soon!
4/26 c14 23Asj Johnson
...after him upsetting Lily the first time, I'd think he'd learn his lesson. But apparently not.
23Asj Johnson...after him upsetting Lily the first time, I'd think he'd learn his lesson. But apparently not.
4/26 c12 Asj Johnson
Wow, Severus gave quite a speech. Good for him. Maybe it’ll get through to Potter.
Wow, Severus gave quite a speech. Good for him. Maybe it’ll get through to Potter.
4/26 c11 Asj Johnson
Looks like magic isn’t too good with spinal injuries.
Hopefully Potter won’t cause problems with his beliefs. ...hopefully he’ll get over what Severus had said to him earlier, too.
Looks like magic isn’t too good with spinal injuries.
Hopefully Potter won’t cause problems with his beliefs. ...hopefully he’ll get over what Severus had said to him earlier, too.
4/26 c10 Asj Johnson
Hmm... If the accident was because of the recital, then was Lily in the car the first time around?
Can magic help Petunia?
Hmm... If the accident was because of the recital, then was Lily in the car the first time around?
Can magic help Petunia?
4/26 c8 Asj Johnson
The beer thing is still amusing. Perhaps it’s from hearing his side of it now. Hmm... also, it sounds like he thinks she messed with the drinks, but the potion messed with his tasting it, right? So... did he not think to try buying a beer and drinking it on the spot? Or can he just not understand it?
Heh, poor Petunia. Severus seems to have gotten used to his haircut and stuff by now. He didn’t seem to notice Petunia looking at him oddly.
Hmm... Maybe if Petunia can think of it, she could ask Severus about getting a makeover (at least something to do with her hair, the way Snape got a different kind of shampoo). Heh, a girl wanting to be fatter. How odd.
Looks like most of the kids have thought about Severus. He might end up having some busy summers in the future.
Wow... Does his father Want him to have a baby? It sounded like his talk was kind of detailed. Hmm... I wonder if it’s normal for parents to talk like a sex-ed teacher. Seems like they mention ‘the talk’ on TV a lot. For me, I knew quite a bit around 7 from watching TV, but it wasn’t until I was around 10 or 11 that a girl at school told me the actual tools were the same things you use the bathroom with (and thought I was kind of stupid for not knowing). I had just thought that it involved foreplay and kissing to exchange chromosomes, and that women had c-sections, before that. Though, Severus is older here than I was when I found out, and I’d always thought I’d learned quite late.
The beer thing is still amusing. Perhaps it’s from hearing his side of it now. Hmm... also, it sounds like he thinks she messed with the drinks, but the potion messed with his tasting it, right? So... did he not think to try buying a beer and drinking it on the spot? Or can he just not understand it?
Heh, poor Petunia. Severus seems to have gotten used to his haircut and stuff by now. He didn’t seem to notice Petunia looking at him oddly.
Hmm... Maybe if Petunia can think of it, she could ask Severus about getting a makeover (at least something to do with her hair, the way Snape got a different kind of shampoo). Heh, a girl wanting to be fatter. How odd.
Looks like most of the kids have thought about Severus. He might end up having some busy summers in the future.
Wow... Does his father Want him to have a baby? It sounded like his talk was kind of detailed. Hmm... I wonder if it’s normal for parents to talk like a sex-ed teacher. Seems like they mention ‘the talk’ on TV a lot. For me, I knew quite a bit around 7 from watching TV, but it wasn’t until I was around 10 or 11 that a girl at school told me the actual tools were the same things you use the bathroom with (and thought I was kind of stupid for not knowing). I had just thought that it involved foreplay and kissing to exchange chromosomes, and that women had c-sections, before that. Though, Severus is older here than I was when I found out, and I’d always thought I’d learned quite late.
4/26 c7 Asj Johnson
Hmm... Interesting about Mr. Snape seeming different. Seems there’s been a lot of changes with people. Not really sure if, if someone could go back in time like that, that people would change that drastically from a few small things, or if it would take a lot more than that. But, it’s kind of interesting to think that things could turn out a lot different from one changed decision and such. (oh, also, it’s nice that Severus gets to have some advanced work. Though... I think if I could go back and change my childhood, I wouldn’t feel as proud for achievements as I would have the first time. Kind of like cheating this way... Though, if I could just go back for a few minutes at a time a few times, and have both sets of memories afterward, it would be pretty nice if I could use the information that was pretty much kept from me, to get some more advanced classes than I did.)
Oh, poor Severus. And his extra years probably only dulled the sight a little. ...at least he didn’t see that when he really was young.
Oh, I like how Severus is talking to his parents like they’re teenagers or something, telling them to keep the activity isolated to their bedroom. ...I thought he should say something along those lines to them, but I was thinking more like a request... But, I think it’s funny the way he’s telling them.
...Did she do something to him? Well, I think I may have wondered if she could have done something to help with getting him to stop drinking, but... now I wonder, since Severus has just asked.
Heh. Now That is a good potion. Hmm... I wonder why she did it this time. And, I guess all he needed was to get away from the liquor. ...so, he wasn’t upset with her over it?
So he kept trying for a couple weeks, huh? Poor guy. I guess the stuff I’d wondered about was answered pretty quickly.
Hmm... Interesting about Mr. Snape seeming different. Seems there’s been a lot of changes with people. Not really sure if, if someone could go back in time like that, that people would change that drastically from a few small things, or if it would take a lot more than that. But, it’s kind of interesting to think that things could turn out a lot different from one changed decision and such. (oh, also, it’s nice that Severus gets to have some advanced work. Though... I think if I could go back and change my childhood, I wouldn’t feel as proud for achievements as I would have the first time. Kind of like cheating this way... Though, if I could just go back for a few minutes at a time a few times, and have both sets of memories afterward, it would be pretty nice if I could use the information that was pretty much kept from me, to get some more advanced classes than I did.)
Oh, poor Severus. And his extra years probably only dulled the sight a little. ...at least he didn’t see that when he really was young.
Oh, I like how Severus is talking to his parents like they’re teenagers or something, telling them to keep the activity isolated to their bedroom. ...I thought he should say something along those lines to them, but I was thinking more like a request... But, I think it’s funny the way he’s telling them.
...Did she do something to him? Well, I think I may have wondered if she could have done something to help with getting him to stop drinking, but... now I wonder, since Severus has just asked.
Heh. Now That is a good potion. Hmm... I wonder why she did it this time. And, I guess all he needed was to get away from the liquor. ...so, he wasn’t upset with her over it?
So he kept trying for a couple weeks, huh? Poor guy. I guess the stuff I’d wondered about was answered pretty quickly.
4/26 c3 Asj Johnson
Ooo, this fic sounds interesting so far. Everything seems to be going really well so far, too. ...I really need to be working on something, though I'm quite tempted to keep reading.
Ooo, this fic sounds interesting so far. Everything seems to be going really well so far, too. ...I really need to be working on something, though I'm quite tempted to keep reading.