for She's A Lady7/24/2012 c3 unknown
very good too bad it is discontinue
very good too bad it is discontinue
7/24/2012 c1 unknown
i LIKED it :)
i LIKED it :)
2/26/2012 c1 
7Diclonious57
kinda reminds me of gentleman alliance's cross plus volume 5 when takanari and haine go on a date
7Diclonious57kinda reminds me of gentleman alliance's cross plus volume 5 when takanari and haine go on a date
4/8/2011 c3 23Ilovemiax
OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS THE CUTEST STORY I HAVE VERY READ! I SWEAR I COULDN'T STOP SQUEALING! GREAT JOB! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
23IlovemiaxOH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS THE CUTEST STORY I HAVE VERY READ! I SWEAR I COULDN'T STOP SQUEALING! GREAT JOB! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
4/5/2011 c4 34Troublesome Dragon
Oh, it happens. Its human nature to change and grow tired of some of our past loves and interests. Just keep up what you have. They're small one shots I enjoyed. I vote they stay.
I also vote you take down this note once your done tallying because
A its not allowed although some author do so anyway.
B its not very sporting to trick people into thinking there's a new chapter even though labeling it note clears that up quickly.
I know you probably felt guilty but usually people can guess really easily that an author will not get back to a story depending on the amount of time that has passed. Sometimes, there are miraculous returns and sometimes authors will simply leave on their profile if they no longer hold interest in a fandom or fanfic writing in general.
34Troublesome DragonOh, it happens. Its human nature to change and grow tired of some of our past loves and interests. Just keep up what you have. They're small one shots I enjoyed. I vote they stay.
I also vote you take down this note once your done tallying because
A its not allowed although some author do so anyway.
B its not very sporting to trick people into thinking there's a new chapter even though labeling it note clears that up quickly.
I know you probably felt guilty but usually people can guess really easily that an author will not get back to a story depending on the amount of time that has passed. Sometimes, there are miraculous returns and sometimes authors will simply leave on their profile if they no longer hold interest in a fandom or fanfic writing in general.
4/3/2011 c4 melabae
Please don't take them down. Even if you don't up date. These are still sweet short stories. Thanks for at least letting us know. Hate it when all of a sudden a fav story has gone missing.
Please don't take them down. Even if you don't up date. These are still sweet short stories. Thanks for at least letting us know. Hate it when all of a sudden a fav story has gone missing.
1/2/2011 c1 7dqbsurf
actually, Jack is sort of softer around Carly, i think you may have made his character just a tad too mean. Around Carly (after the first season anyway) hes kinda different. esp towards her
7dqbsurfactually, Jack is sort of softer around Carly, i think you may have made his character just a tad too mean. Around Carly (after the first season anyway) hes kinda different. esp towards her
1/24/2010 c3 47My Thyla My Captain
AWESOME! As usual! U rock! Keep writing! Cant wait for the next chapter!
One thing though, yes, Jack was a little out of character in the first couple of chapters, but #3 was great. Totally Jack!
Ta ta toodle loo,
I LOVE JACK ATLAS
47My Thyla My CaptainAWESOME! As usual! U rock! Keep writing! Cant wait for the next chapter!
One thing though, yes, Jack was a little out of character in the first couple of chapters, but #3 was great. Totally Jack!
Ta ta toodle loo,
I LOVE JACK ATLAS
12/10/2009 c1 Kaze
Dont worry, Jack is kinda nicer to Carly. He even crieds or actualy sobs when she dies. I burst into tears on that ep. Oh soory if i killed it for you
Dont worry, Jack is kinda nicer to Carly. He even crieds or actualy sobs when she dies. I burst into tears on that ep. Oh soory if i killed it for you
12/8/2009 c1 FantasyMagicGirl
Aw Jack has such a soft spot for her, and in the end part where he thinks about her hugs was so sweet and cute. =3
Aw Jack has such a soft spot for her, and in the end part where he thinks about her hugs was so sweet and cute. =3