for Parody of 30 minutes of Heaven Yaoi version6/8/2011 c1 Guest
Great story.!Like it.! xD
btw kagura is still in the house, ryt.?
i mentioned that bec. kagura questioned sougo 'why is he there' ryt.?
Sooo,where IS kagura.?
Great story.!Like it.! xD
btw kagura is still in the house, ryt.?
i mentioned that bec. kagura questioned sougo 'why is he there' ryt.?
Sooo,where IS kagura.?
4/29/2011 c1 
5sanghee
Hahaha this is AWESOME!
So funny!
I'm hurt that there want many katekyo hitman reborn but gintama is AWESOME!
5sangheeHahaha this is AWESOME!
So funny!
I'm hurt that there want many katekyo hitman reborn but gintama is AWESOME!
4/15/2011 c1 FairyReborn
This is so cool. I liked how you had characters from different mangas but I think this is to many. When is the next chapter coming?
This is so cool. I liked how you had characters from different mangas but I think this is to many. When is the next chapter coming?
12/7/2010 c1 1AIRanimechiic
oh maan. when you mentioned bel being genius who likes killing and sougo being sadist who enjoys torture, i almost expected them to be a pair. looking forward to what happens next. especially lelouch/light, bel/sasuke, agito/ikuto, and tyki/natsuo. espeeecially lelouch/light xDDD
btw lavi is "bookman" not "bookworm". just a tiny correction
1AIRanimechiicoh maan. when you mentioned bel being genius who likes killing and sougo being sadist who enjoys torture, i almost expected them to be a pair. looking forward to what happens next. especially lelouch/light, bel/sasuke, agito/ikuto, and tyki/natsuo. espeeecially lelouch/light xDDD
btw lavi is "bookman" not "bookworm". just a tiny correction
8/22/2010 c1 Seth-Note
LMAO! thats soo funny! =w= i loove it! can you continue it! please? i wanna see what happens in the 30min in heaven!
LMAO! thats soo funny! =w= i loove it! can you continue it! please? i wanna see what happens in the 30min in heaven!
4/2/2010 c1 2evvia
hahaha this would be fun to read but you didn't continue *pout* where's next chap?
2evviahahaha this would be fun to read but you didn't continue *pout* where's next chap?
9/26/2009 c1 2Yuu13
lol ! this story is awesome ! i was wondering about the Otose thing too .. cant wait for the next chapter !
2Yuu13lol ! this story is awesome ! i was wondering about the Otose thing too .. cant wait for the next chapter !
9/19/2009 c1 15MeganekkoTenshi
Mistake spotted:
Shinpachi: Why do I only get two lines to describe myself? Let me continue, I enjoy Otose-sans’s singing, and am going to marr-
Shinpachi like Otsuu's singing not Otose's. Otose is the oldhag who chases Gin for rent every day. Otsuu is the idol... It would be rather disturbing if Shinpachi liked Otose...
15MeganekkoTenshiMistake spotted:
Shinpachi: Why do I only get two lines to describe myself? Let me continue, I enjoy Otose-sans’s singing, and am going to marr-
Shinpachi like Otsuu's singing not Otose's. Otose is the oldhag who chases Gin for rent every day. Otsuu is the idol... It would be rather disturbing if Shinpachi liked Otose...
8/11/2009 c1 1APatchOfSunlight
Lol!
You had the Gintama style down to a tee. All the fourth wall and needless violence.
Despite the unorthodox style of writing I suspect it was far simpler. Once the reader gets used it, it's fine.
Two questions:
Was Colonello in baby form?
Why wasn't Lavi introduced when his name was put down for the game.
Thanks for this.
-Josey
1APatchOfSunlightLol!
You had the Gintama style down to a tee. All the fourth wall and needless violence.
Despite the unorthodox style of writing I suspect it was far simpler. Once the reader gets used it, it's fine.
Two questions:
Was Colonello in baby form?
Why wasn't Lavi introduced when his name was put down for the game.
Thanks for this.
-Josey