for First Encounters4/16 c1 Guest
Good job. I like so far. Write more!
Good job. I like so far. Write more!
1/14 c1 Guest
how come all the good storys stop its not cool
how come all the good storys stop its not cool
11/22/2012 c1 Sunflower37149
I luvs it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooo much! You have to write more! You have to! I'll die if you don't! (not really, but I really want to read more of this story)
I luvs it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooo much! You have to write more! You have to! I'll die if you don't! (not really, but I really want to read more of this story)
9/1/2011 c1 cami
OMD you got to finish it's really good!:D
OMD you got to finish it's really good!:D
8/27/2011 c1 ratherbereading125
for a cross over it was actually pretty good, most cross overs that i read are hot messy train wrecks, this was actually decent. and i think it would make a good story. i'm not saying i'm demanding one, but if you did make it into a story i would most definitely read it .
for a cross over it was actually pretty good, most cross overs that i read are hot messy train wrecks, this was actually decent. and i think it would make a good story. i'm not saying i'm demanding one, but if you did make it into a story i would most definitely read it .
7/6/2011 c1 
1Renee 213
Some constructive criticism, figure out if you want to write in first person or third. I don't care which but your back and forth is driving me crazy. No offense.
Hope you keep updating. :)
1Renee 213Some constructive criticism, figure out if you want to write in first person or third. I don't care which but your back and forth is driving me crazy. No offense.
Hope you keep updating. :)
5/22/2011 c1 1Starcrossedmoon
this is so bood you we readers need you to do more pleas it is just so good pleas do more woth this story pleas
1Starcrossedmoonthis is so bood you we readers need you to do more pleas it is just so good pleas do more woth this story pleas
1/21/2011 c1 2baileybarbie
Love it! Is there more or is that it? If there is more UPDATE SOON...please!
2baileybarbieLove it! Is there more or is that it? If there is more UPDATE SOON...please!
8/28/2010 c1 Echo
Go Chloe and Derek!
Go Chloe and Derek!