for Innocent Love6/10 c17 
24XDXP
This needs to have more reviews! I think you wrote a fantastic story.
The little timeline bits at the beginning of each section were super helpful. I do think your writing style shifted in the last couple of chapters- did you happen to change the direction you were going to take?
Anyways, I hope you end up writing and posting more someday, after your life settles down I guess.
Good luck! Have fun!
24XDXPThis needs to have more reviews! I think you wrote a fantastic story.
The little timeline bits at the beginning of each section were super helpful. I do think your writing style shifted in the last couple of chapters- did you happen to change the direction you were going to take?
Anyways, I hope you end up writing and posting more someday, after your life settles down I guess.
Good luck! Have fun!
5/25 c17 Guest
THAT WAS AWESOME!
THAT WAS AWESOME!
1/12 c1 6Kurai Ummei
A fun sounding premise, but I couldn't get into it. Seems OC to me, as well as having a strange present tense to the writing.
6Kurai UmmeiA fun sounding premise, but I couldn't get into it. Seems OC to me, as well as having a strange present tense to the writing.
12/28/2012 c17 Kim
I like this story. Please make the next chapter soon.
;D
I like this story. Please make the next chapter soon.
;D
11/4/2012 c2 LazyPanda
i love it 100000000000000000% of the way! * hehe i love my new singinture to
i love it 100000000000000000% of the way! * hehe i love my new singinture to
10/21/2012 c17 Raevix
amazing work! congrats! i hop to hear from you soon! update soon! :)
amazing work! congrats! i hop to hear from you soon! update soon! :)
10/16/2012 c17 angelpup9
Who's Gaara's first rival?
Who's Gaara's first rival?
9/8/2012 c17 nevvy
I LOVE THIS FIC! The dose of humor is perfect and the plot is unique and intriguing. I can't wait to see what happens next. At first I wasn't too sure about the whole Odepius Rex thing, but oddly enough, seeing as everyone ELSE seems to be going with the flow- I can too! It is too cute anyways afterall. Uncle Hanky's reaction was particularly priceless. Anywho, I hope you update soon! Cheers
I LOVE THIS FIC! The dose of humor is perfect and the plot is unique and intriguing. I can't wait to see what happens next. At first I wasn't too sure about the whole Odepius Rex thing, but oddly enough, seeing as everyone ELSE seems to be going with the flow- I can too! It is too cute anyways afterall. Uncle Hanky's reaction was particularly priceless. Anywho, I hope you update soon! Cheers
9/3/2012 c17 7Mizuki-chan Uchiha
Amazing! Just... AMAZING! UPDATE SOON! My favorite part though was when Gaara was telling Sakura the story! The whole time I was screaming "Kiss her!" "Kiss her!" in my head, but then I remembered that he was only "14"! Then I got depressed! LOL. But please update soon! By tomorrow, it will be a month since you updated! And yes I did count! xD
7Mizuki-chan UchihaAmazing! Just... AMAZING! UPDATE SOON! My favorite part though was when Gaara was telling Sakura the story! The whole time I was screaming "Kiss her!" "Kiss her!" in my head, but then I remembered that he was only "14"! Then I got depressed! LOL. But please update soon! By tomorrow, it will be a month since you updated! And yes I did count! xD
8/29/2012 c17 123lamiko
oh, I love it ). this is getting better and better plz do continue soon )
oh, I love it ). this is getting better and better plz do continue soon )
8/26/2012 c17 Une Belle Inconnue
Wow thank you for making this story! Congratulations for your first official permanent job! But I'm still hoping that I can read the continuation of this story, though. Because a little Gaara is something we all can't resist, can we? ;)
Wow thank you for making this story! Congratulations for your first official permanent job! But I'm still hoping that I can read the continuation of this story, though. Because a little Gaara is something we all can't resist, can we? ;)
8/23/2012 c17 Black Emeralds
I like how you make Orochimaru and Kabuto funny and un-villainous here, it kinda makes them seem like good guys! ...kinda. And Sasuke 'outgoing' pffffft. Gaara beat him up for Mommy! Poor Itachi though, all sulky because he was denied of enjoying the festival and eating Ichiraku Ramen xD
It's cute that Gaara loves Sakura, and slightly weird how he still calls her mother, even though we know his feeling's way beyond that ;D I'm not disturbed though, hehe. It's adorable. And I feel for ShikaTema! 3 They're lovable here, even with the drama, hahaha. Hope they resolve it soon, I guess.
I love the story, so I hope you update soon! :D
I like how you make Orochimaru and Kabuto funny and un-villainous here, it kinda makes them seem like good guys! ...kinda. And Sasuke 'outgoing' pffffft. Gaara beat him up for Mommy! Poor Itachi though, all sulky because he was denied of enjoying the festival and eating Ichiraku Ramen xD
It's cute that Gaara loves Sakura, and slightly weird how he still calls her mother, even though we know his feeling's way beyond that ;D I'm not disturbed though, hehe. It's adorable. And I feel for ShikaTema! 3 They're lovable here, even with the drama, hahaha. Hope they resolve it soon, I guess.
I love the story, so I hope you update soon! :D
8/22/2012 c17 BlindSaya
I want more now that Sasuke is back and the new progress? of Sakura and the more than a vampire Gaara :P
I want more now that Sasuke is back and the new progress? of Sakura and the more than a vampire Gaara :P