for Blueberries on the Hill1/2/2011 c8 Hazmatt
Wow! Very intense! So he hurt both of them! I hope they will be okay! I really enjoyed it!
Wow! Very intense! So he hurt both of them! I hope they will be okay! I really enjoyed it!
1/2/2011 c6 Hazmatt
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! Is Mike going to fall for Phoebe, and her for him? That sucks about Mike's family!
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! Is Mike going to fall for Phoebe, and her for him? That sucks about Mike's family!
5/4/2010 c11 
12Hannibal3125
It was great... until the ending. The ending seemed rather rushed in comparison to the rest of the story; perhaps a little expansion of the scene and moving it to its own chapter would be a better fit...
Up until that point, it was great; I was hooked. Keep writing.
12Hannibal3125It was great... until the ending. The ending seemed rather rushed in comparison to the rest of the story; perhaps a little expansion of the scene and moving it to its own chapter would be a better fit...
Up until that point, it was great; I was hooked. Keep writing.
3/17/2010 c10 GakuenJenn
It's good, although I could do with out everything being underlined. Makes me feel better about the story, as I read chapter 9 and thought it was finished for some reason and that made me sad. But now I am happier.
It's good, although I could do with out everything being underlined. Makes me feel better about the story, as I read chapter 9 and thought it was finished for some reason and that made me sad. But now I am happier.
3/16/2010 c10 1jcat30
I'm glad you wrote some more, AND I'm glad Kathryn is still alive! Loving it, more please.
1jcat30I'm glad you wrote some more, AND I'm glad Kathryn is still alive! Loving it, more please.
2/20/2010 c9 Ali Q Mulder Scully
NO
NO