for I'm Sorry6/9/2010 c5 The Fandom
That was a very good chapter. update soon.
That was a very good chapter. update soon.
5/23/2010 c5 
13CrimsonZero
I enjoyed the split POV's between Yami and Tea, as it was informative on what the other was thinking. It also gives a sort of personal touch to the story, as if Yami and Anzu were telling me this story. I don't know how to describe it but know it's a good thing, haha.
As always, I appreciate your high level of description - I can just see the interactions between the two. I could feel the frustration Yami feels at being unable to tell Tea he loves her.
And you are not mean, haha. With great goals come great adversity. Besides, if you're mean, I must be downright cruel to my characters, haha.
13CrimsonZeroI enjoyed the split POV's between Yami and Tea, as it was informative on what the other was thinking. It also gives a sort of personal touch to the story, as if Yami and Anzu were telling me this story. I don't know how to describe it but know it's a good thing, haha.
As always, I appreciate your high level of description - I can just see the interactions between the two. I could feel the frustration Yami feels at being unable to tell Tea he loves her.
And you are not mean, haha. With great goals come great adversity. Besides, if you're mean, I must be downright cruel to my characters, haha.
5/21/2010 c5 12fantasia-49
oh oh really great chapter and i hope yami will tell her and she will return his feeling! she doesn't belong to jeff (no no no no)
excellent as always my friend
12fantasia-49oh oh really great chapter and i hope yami will tell her and she will return his feeling! she doesn't belong to jeff (no no no no)
excellent as always my friend
4/13/2010 c4 The Fandom
that was a good chapter. update soon
that was a good chapter. update soon
9/11/2009 c3 The Fandom
That was a really good chapter. update soon.
That was a really good chapter. update soon.
9/2/2009 c3 4Super-special-awesome Pirate
yeah i want to know what's up with his parents
and will tea get to know what really happen? oh well she kinda already knows...
i'm rooting for yami all the way though.
i think that was an awesome chapter. psh who cares if its too long?
...pirate
4Super-special-awesome Pirateyeah i want to know what's up with his parents
and will tea get to know what really happen? oh well she kinda already knows...
i'm rooting for yami all the way though.
i think that was an awesome chapter. psh who cares if its too long?
...pirate
8/31/2009 c3 Koragirl
that great Yami is love with Tea . Please email when next chapter up OK. Great work keep it up !
that great Yami is love with Tea . Please email when next chapter up OK. Great work keep it up !
8/31/2009 c3 1ichika7walkure
Oh. This is quite refreshing. I have been reading fanfics whose plot focus both on Tea and Atem. It's refreshing to read that Atem is in love with Tea but can't admit his feelings because of "obstacles". I just hope that the pair wouldn't experience too much hurt/pain. Keep up the good work! I'm gonna subscribe to this story! :D
1ichika7walkureOh. This is quite refreshing. I have been reading fanfics whose plot focus both on Tea and Atem. It's refreshing to read that Atem is in love with Tea but can't admit his feelings because of "obstacles". I just hope that the pair wouldn't experience too much hurt/pain. Keep up the good work! I'm gonna subscribe to this story! :D
8/30/2009 c3 10Princess Of Sorrow
This chapter was awesome!
Let's just say that Yami is like my mom. She haven't gone to a doctor but I think that she has that disorder since she's just like this all the time!
I love how Yami gets mad pretty quick and that's exactly like me. I'm so short tempred and I ** off pretty fast special with my family!
I love it how yami is so over prptective. Man, I wish that Tea would appreciate that more from him. And I was happy when he yelled at that damn neighbor. Really, people that smokes really ** me off. I just hated when dad used to smoke about five years ago.
I just can't believe how much Tea love that ** Jeff. I don't have anything more to say about her.
I wish that I had a wealthy father like yami's. (sigh) here, if I needed anything I would have to beg and beg till my parents buy it for me. Or I have to keep saving money since here in Syria girls can't work till they graduate.
I really laughed at the part with Yugi. He can be so helpless sometimes. Lol. I just hope Yami's advices did work!
And I really can't believe how Tea didn't believe about the sex part. man, she can be blind sometimes. But again, all girls are blind when they're in love.
I really love this story. It's just cool how you put it in two main POV. That's cool. And I like how every chapter seems longer than the last one. I LOVE LONG CHAPTERS! Especialy if I like the story! when I don't like it, I feel bored.
(Sigh). I think I'm done with reviewing. I just feel so depressed to do anything now, and I think I'll just turn the computer off now. See ya
Ps; I wonder what the next update will be..
~Rawan
10Princess Of SorrowThis chapter was awesome!
Let's just say that Yami is like my mom. She haven't gone to a doctor but I think that she has that disorder since she's just like this all the time!
I love how Yami gets mad pretty quick and that's exactly like me. I'm so short tempred and I ** off pretty fast special with my family!
I love it how yami is so over prptective. Man, I wish that Tea would appreciate that more from him. And I was happy when he yelled at that damn neighbor. Really, people that smokes really ** me off. I just hated when dad used to smoke about five years ago.
I just can't believe how much Tea love that ** Jeff. I don't have anything more to say about her.
I wish that I had a wealthy father like yami's. (sigh) here, if I needed anything I would have to beg and beg till my parents buy it for me. Or I have to keep saving money since here in Syria girls can't work till they graduate.
I really laughed at the part with Yugi. He can be so helpless sometimes. Lol. I just hope Yami's advices did work!
And I really can't believe how Tea didn't believe about the sex part. man, she can be blind sometimes. But again, all girls are blind when they're in love.
I really love this story. It's just cool how you put it in two main POV. That's cool. And I like how every chapter seems longer than the last one. I LOVE LONG CHAPTERS! Especialy if I like the story! when I don't like it, I feel bored.
(Sigh). I think I'm done with reviewing. I just feel so depressed to do anything now, and I think I'll just turn the computer off now. See ya
Ps; I wonder what the next update will be..
~Rawan