for The Crime10/13/2009 c5 phoevz
Okaay, a couple of things.
First of, how wonderful that you wrote another chapter.
Second...WHY DO YOU LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THIS?
(tries to regain some sort of posture) No seriously, I crave long, concluding chapter/s soon.
Okaay, a couple of things.
First of, how wonderful that you wrote another chapter.
Second...WHY DO YOU LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THIS?
(tries to regain some sort of posture) No seriously, I crave long, concluding chapter/s soon.
10/13/2009 c5 bertiebwriting
Oh My God! What? Why? How?
More, plese!
Sorry, this isn't very constructive. It's the suspense, you know.
Oh My God! What? Why? How?
More, plese!
Sorry, this isn't very constructive. It's the suspense, you know.
3210/13/2009 c1 benaglinney
"it usually took Mr Wooster and his robust young appetite about twenty-three minutes to polish off a good meal. After this time, Jeeves cleared away."
That sentence broke my heart. Truly it did. What a beautifully sad image. Well done.
"it usually took Mr Wooster and his robust young appetite about twenty-three minutes to polish off a good meal. After this time, Jeeves cleared away."
That sentence broke my heart. Truly it did. What a beautifully sad image. Well done.
9/6/2009 c4 froggy
Evil cliffie! Evil, I say! Please, please update soon! This is fascinating, and I can't wait to read what's happened!
Evil cliffie! Evil, I say! Please, please update soon! This is fascinating, and I can't wait to read what's happened!
9/6/2009 c4 Ghostner
This is off to a corking start. The way you treat the attitudes between the classes was very interesting because it wasn't monolithically all "Jeeves, mind your place." That the Inspector (who was probably less than aristocratic) treated Jeeves the worst was interesting too. I also liked that you didn't make Jeeves a nice guy at the beginning. He truly is a bit evil toward Bertie sometimes. Love that it's going to come back and bite him on the butt.
This is off to a corking start. The way you treat the attitudes between the classes was very interesting because it wasn't monolithically all "Jeeves, mind your place." That the Inspector (who was probably less than aristocratic) treated Jeeves the worst was interesting too. I also liked that you didn't make Jeeves a nice guy at the beginning. He truly is a bit evil toward Bertie sometimes. Love that it's going to come back and bite him on the butt.