for Lay With Me and Just Forget the World8/21/2010 c1 
3hepburner
wow! kinda sudden ending. I thought draco and hermione would end up together :) awesome story though. ur a really good writer :-D
3hepburnerwow! kinda sudden ending. I thought draco and hermione would end up together :) awesome story though. ur a really good writer :-D
12/11/2009 c1 8Sharlmalfoy
That was really good! Specially how it fits the cannon.
I think you should keep "filling in the gaps along the rest of the book. That would be interesting.
Anyway, great job! ;)
8SharlmalfoyThat was really good! Specially how it fits the cannon.
I think you should keep "filling in the gaps along the rest of the book. That would be interesting.
Anyway, great job! ;)
9/28/2009 c1 Psychotic polony
Merlin! (lol) that was acually very good hey. It would be awesome if you'd write a sequel! Please? I also agree that you should write more on this story. And what happens when they meet again at malfoy manor (Deathly hollows) and how he reacts to what bellatrix does to hermione, they should admit their feelings! Lol im going to shut up now
oh and P.S.. Goodluck on that dramione fic u busy with. Hope to read it soon.. Mwahziepancakes!
Merlin! (lol) that was acually very good hey. It would be awesome if you'd write a sequel! Please? I also agree that you should write more on this story. And what happens when they meet again at malfoy manor (Deathly hollows) and how he reacts to what bellatrix does to hermione, they should admit their feelings! Lol im going to shut up now
oh and P.S.. Goodluck on that dramione fic u busy with. Hope to read it soon.. Mwahziepancakes!
8/24/2009 c1 1Dreamiing-Agaain
wow.
Is this just a one shot?
If it is its great. but it wouldve been better as a actually story. You have a basis for a great fic.
1Dreamiing-Agaainwow.
Is this just a one shot?
If it is its great. but it wouldve been better as a actually story. You have a basis for a great fic.
8/22/2009 c1 2mootifulru
Well written. I like the way it fits into the canon. My only criticism would be that I dont think Draco would use words like 'Honey' and 'Lovely'. Maybe you should do a follow-up from Draco's POV. It would be interesting to see how he feels about it after Dumbledore dies. Loved the smut, you write it well. Thanks for a good read.
2mootifulruWell written. I like the way it fits into the canon. My only criticism would be that I dont think Draco would use words like 'Honey' and 'Lovely'. Maybe you should do a follow-up from Draco's POV. It would be interesting to see how he feels about it after Dumbledore dies. Loved the smut, you write it well. Thanks for a good read.
8/20/2009 c1 691st-daydreamer
the ending is so sad! T^T
i was hoping that they got together in the end, despite draco malfoy being a deatheater and whatnot _o
but still, i loved it :) absolutely amazing!
691st-daydreamerthe ending is so sad! T^T
i was hoping that they got together in the end, despite draco malfoy being a deatheater and whatnot _o
but still, i loved it :) absolutely amazing!
8/17/2009 c1 Spellbound Slave
That was great. An soo sweet
That was great. An soo sweet