for What If : A Sailor Moon R Twist12/1/2012 c20 
1Fatecaster
Yet another brilliant story! You've definitely become my favorite SM author with your amazing attention to detail and mastery over the characters. I'm just sad I've almost read all of your stories - what will I have to read when I'm done with your awesome stories ;A;
1FatecasterYet another brilliant story! You've definitely become my favorite SM author with your amazing attention to detail and mastery over the characters. I'm just sad I've almost read all of your stories - what will I have to read when I'm done with your awesome stories ;A;
9/25/2012 c20 SerenityMoon
I looooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it! I really want to finish reading the first season so please continue! You just earned a stalker for all your stories!
I looooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it! I really want to finish reading the first season so please continue! You just earned a stalker for all your stories!
8/12/2012 c20 2Kitsune Jackson
Yahhh just forget allll bout those two sere cuz you got THAT comin in your face and i hope you write a sequel to this
2Kitsune JacksonYahhh just forget allll bout those two sere cuz you got THAT comin in your face and i hope you write a sequel to this
7/18/2012 c20 Guest
Loved it! I loved that there was no black lady-I never liked that part. Excellent job and I look forward to reading ore from you.
Loved it! I loved that there was no black lady-I never liked that part. Excellent job and I look forward to reading ore from you.
7/9/2012 c20 Guest
love it!
you should do a sequel to this!
id love to see how the following seasons would play out with the generals present.
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love it!
you should do a sequel to this!
id love to see how the following seasons would play out with the generals present.
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7/9/2012 c18 Guest
still think his reason for sending those dreams is stupid! and bloody pointless! i mean serena's memory would have come back as they faced a new enemy. and as if he needed to test serena's love for darien or his for her! humph!
great writing though! its so easy to get lost in this story!
still think his reason for sending those dreams is stupid! and bloody pointless! i mean serena's memory would have come back as they faced a new enemy. and as if he needed to test serena's love for darien or his for her! humph!
great writing though! its so easy to get lost in this story!
7/9/2012 c9 Guest
when did darien tell serena about the dreams? it seemed like she knew in the last chapter before the meeting with the girls. hmmm...
when did darien tell serena about the dreams? it seemed like she knew in the last chapter before the meeting with the girls. hmmm...
6/26/2012 c20 4MissSweetB13
Dear PrincessSerenity1976,
i have just finished your story and i must say OH MY LORD! it was absorlutly fantastic! you have a true gift that i am so glad that you didn't keep to yourself! i have been a hardcore fan since the day i first started watching it as a child, and i never thought that i would ever say this ever buuuuut...i wish with every bone in my body that YOUR STORY was what really happened! your plot is not only well thought out but also easier to understand, clear on important details and had a far better ending. (apart from a few tweaks i couldn't even dream a better story plot). I could rave on and on about how the changes you made, created something so brilliant but then i'd have to make a very long list. so i'll just say this, your story is amazing, your words take me by the heart, and i hope you continue to write beautiful stories for the world to see. never doubt your talents and i hope to continue reading your works of art.
all the best with your writing and life
MissSweetB13 3
4MissSweetB13Dear PrincessSerenity1976,
i have just finished your story and i must say OH MY LORD! it was absorlutly fantastic! you have a true gift that i am so glad that you didn't keep to yourself! i have been a hardcore fan since the day i first started watching it as a child, and i never thought that i would ever say this ever buuuuut...i wish with every bone in my body that YOUR STORY was what really happened! your plot is not only well thought out but also easier to understand, clear on important details and had a far better ending. (apart from a few tweaks i couldn't even dream a better story plot). I could rave on and on about how the changes you made, created something so brilliant but then i'd have to make a very long list. so i'll just say this, your story is amazing, your words take me by the heart, and i hope you continue to write beautiful stories for the world to see. never doubt your talents and i hope to continue reading your works of art.
all the best with your writing and life
MissSweetB13 3
6/24/2012 c14 MissSweetB13
boo-yah! thank you soooooo much for putting in that scene with hypnotica! that episode was one of my favourites!
boo-yah! thank you soooooo much for putting in that scene with hypnotica! that episode was one of my favourites!
6/23/2012 c5 MissSweetB13
Hello PrincessSerenity1976,
i am thoughly enjoying this story you have writtien. while i'm sad that serena has lost her memory and is about to briefly lose darien i still find my eyes glued to the screen. i have especially enjoyed that you have made serenas and rinis relationship alot sweeter, their bickering really got on my nerves at times. anyway, keep up the lovely work and don't let stupid comments from idiots discourage you.
MissSweetB13
Hello PrincessSerenity1976,
i am thoughly enjoying this story you have writtien. while i'm sad that serena has lost her memory and is about to briefly lose darien i still find my eyes glued to the screen. i have especially enjoyed that you have made serenas and rinis relationship alot sweeter, their bickering really got on my nerves at times. anyway, keep up the lovely work and don't let stupid comments from idiots discourage you.
MissSweetB13
5/15/2012 c18 Orion
Interestingly, when I hear Endymion's reason for sending nightmares to Usagi in your story, the reason is much more satisfying than when I watch the anime. Probably because I know that you wrote it with better intentions for the couple than whoever was in charge of the anime.
Interestingly, when I hear Endymion's reason for sending nightmares to Usagi in your story, the reason is much more satisfying than when I watch the anime. Probably because I know that you wrote it with better intentions for the couple than whoever was in charge of the anime.
3/18/2012 c20 107Anjirika
I really wasn't going to read this story considering that you're going to re-worked it once you're done your Rekindled version and I really shouldn't have stayed up until past two am to read the remaining chapters when I have to work in the morning but this story was just SOOO good and you are such a gifted writer. You captured their personalities so well, you changed things just enough to keep me guessing while keeping the familiarity of the story that I hold so near and dear to my heart. All I can say is that this is brilliant and I'm sure to be going after your other stories soon enough. This story was jaw-dropping, awe-inspiring, breath-takingly amazing and I cannot thank you enough for writing such a brilliant twist.
107AnjirikaI really wasn't going to read this story considering that you're going to re-worked it once you're done your Rekindled version and I really shouldn't have stayed up until past two am to read the remaining chapters when I have to work in the morning but this story was just SOOO good and you are such a gifted writer. You captured their personalities so well, you changed things just enough to keep me guessing while keeping the familiarity of the story that I hold so near and dear to my heart. All I can say is that this is brilliant and I'm sure to be going after your other stories soon enough. This story was jaw-dropping, awe-inspiring, breath-takingly amazing and I cannot thank you enough for writing such a brilliant twist.