for Three Revelations11/22/2012 c2 chele the original
I know you are sorry Arthur but the truth of Merlin's injury will be revealed I think.
I know you are sorry Arthur but the truth of Merlin's injury will be revealed I think.
6/25/2011 c3 arthur3gwen
as you can see, i am more of an arthur/gwen shipper. but it was good anyway! :) but um, i dint think you can think of this as deep friendship. just slash! :P
as you can see, i am more of an arthur/gwen shipper. but it was good anyway! :) but um, i dint think you can think of this as deep friendship. just slash! :P
3/31/2011 c4 GoldenVXN
Sometimes it takes almost losing someone to realize how much you care for them. Great job on this story.
Sometimes it takes almost losing someone to realize how much you care for them. Great job on this story.
1/30/2010 c4 
11calileane
I love when destiny is changed. Alf the time, plots from movies, series, books and others, are good to read but leave this hole of regret about some things.
Regrets, fear, dislike, and want for better ending.
Your story as filled a part of that hole. It changed my view about Arthur a great deal.
And I so love when there is this touch of 'magic' that light my day when I read a good fanfiction. Well, here there really was magic at play lol.
11calileaneI love when destiny is changed. Alf the time, plots from movies, series, books and others, are good to read but leave this hole of regret about some things.
Regrets, fear, dislike, and want for better ending.
Your story as filled a part of that hole. It changed my view about Arthur a great deal.
And I so love when there is this touch of 'magic' that light my day when I read a good fanfiction. Well, here there really was magic at play lol.
12/29/2009 c4 Zofonik
OMG, OMG, Merlin/Arthur fan-fiction! I found this by reading your Dragon Age fic, and am so happy that someone else see's the chemistry between A/M as I do (BBC Merlin I mean).
Really looking forward to reading the sequel which I will save for tomorrow :)
OMG, OMG, Merlin/Arthur fan-fiction! I found this by reading your Dragon Age fic, and am so happy that someone else see's the chemistry between A/M as I do (BBC Merlin I mean).
Really looking forward to reading the sequel which I will save for tomorrow :)
10/23/2009 c3 8pageleaf
A little bit of slash? More like a lot of slash! But it's really good, and I like slash! Very nice and subtly slash...y. ;) Truly incredible.
8pageleafA little bit of slash? More like a lot of slash! But it's really good, and I like slash! Very nice and subtly slash...y. ;) Truly incredible.
10/3/2009 c3 27Dianne
I really liked this story. It was very classy and can be taken either way. I don't read slash so I took it as friendship and it worked very well so congratulations on your writing, it worked.
27DianneI really liked this story. It was very classy and can be taken either way. I don't read slash so I took it as friendship and it worked very well so congratulations on your writing, it worked.
10/2/2009 c3 7merlinhelz
This story is excellent, I really enjoyed reading it. I love the third realisation, and the accurate characterisation of all the characters. Thank you for writing this.
The only thing that could improve would be your punctuation, particularly in concern to dialogue. Here are a few examples:
“That is all that can be done sire” Gaius said. Should be “That is all that can be done sire,” Gaius said
Here are a few I've fixed up:
“If he makes it through the night he will make a complete recovery,” Gaius spoke with difficulty, “but he is still very weak and he has lost a lot of blood as well...” Gaius trailed off unable to complete the sentence, Arthur nodded.
“I’ll take him to my chambers,” Arthur commanded.
“He is just a servant. He is NOT your friend.” Uther tried to get his temper under control lest the two of them come to blows.
“You tried to use magic to save me?" Merlin gasped disbelievingly
“I don’t know how you can still look at me,” Arthur replied his voice heavy with sorrow, “but you’re my friend, my soul, my all, my Merlin. Your welcome here as long as you want to stay.”
Once again, thanks for writing such an excellent story. If you want me to go though the whole think and fix up the punctuation, I'd be happy to. :)
7merlinhelzThis story is excellent, I really enjoyed reading it. I love the third realisation, and the accurate characterisation of all the characters. Thank you for writing this.
The only thing that could improve would be your punctuation, particularly in concern to dialogue. Here are a few examples:
“That is all that can be done sire” Gaius said. Should be “That is all that can be done sire,” Gaius said
Here are a few I've fixed up:
“If he makes it through the night he will make a complete recovery,” Gaius spoke with difficulty, “but he is still very weak and he has lost a lot of blood as well...” Gaius trailed off unable to complete the sentence, Arthur nodded.
“I’ll take him to my chambers,” Arthur commanded.
“He is just a servant. He is NOT your friend.” Uther tried to get his temper under control lest the two of them come to blows.
“You tried to use magic to save me?" Merlin gasped disbelievingly
“I don’t know how you can still look at me,” Arthur replied his voice heavy with sorrow, “but you’re my friend, my soul, my all, my Merlin. Your welcome here as long as you want to stay.”
Once again, thanks for writing such an excellent story. If you want me to go though the whole think and fix up the punctuation, I'd be happy to. :)