for Three Revelations9/21/2009 c3 
1Fredricko
“He was my advisor he had every right!”
“Then as soon as I take the throne I shall make Merlin mine!”
I absolutely loved that exchange. Excellent use of foreshadowing! (=
I like to see Arthur actually appeciating Merlin for once, too. Even if it was only after he shot him with a crossbow. XD
Good work. Hope to read that sequal sometime.(=
~Freddie
1Fredricko“He was my advisor he had every right!”
“Then as soon as I take the throne I shall make Merlin mine!”
I absolutely loved that exchange. Excellent use of foreshadowing! (=
I like to see Arthur actually appeciating Merlin for once, too. Even if it was only after he shot him with a crossbow. XD
Good work. Hope to read that sequal sometime.(=
~Freddie
9/3/2009 c3 33MidnightSky101
I love the way you keep referring to Merlin as Arthur's Merlin, it makes him sound very protective and possessive (but not too possessive) of him, very cute! One very small thing, try t remember full stops at the end of sentences and paragraphs. But even with this, the ending is still so sweet! Very well written!
33MidnightSky101I love the way you keep referring to Merlin as Arthur's Merlin, it makes him sound very protective and possessive (but not too possessive) of him, very cute! One very small thing, try t remember full stops at the end of sentences and paragraphs. But even with this, the ending is still so sweet! Very well written!
9/3/2009 c3 15mylife9
excellent! I love the whole story. in the space of a day arthur realized what merlin was to happen but instead of it making it fast paced, you wrote the story so it still seemed as if it was happening in real time as these revelations came to arthur. and the end with uther's reaction to arthur's dismissal to his summons and arthur telling merlin that he did the wrong thing and tried with everything he had in order to save him was so heart warming. superbly written story of arthur learning of merlin's magic. if there is a sequel I will definately check it out.
15mylife9excellent! I love the whole story. in the space of a day arthur realized what merlin was to happen but instead of it making it fast paced, you wrote the story so it still seemed as if it was happening in real time as these revelations came to arthur. and the end with uther's reaction to arthur's dismissal to his summons and arthur telling merlin that he did the wrong thing and tried with everything he had in order to save him was so heart warming. superbly written story of arthur learning of merlin's magic. if there is a sequel I will definately check it out.
9/3/2009 c1 33MidnightSky101
Very good first chapter. I like how it starts off quite happily with them joking and then suddenly, with one action, it all goes wrong. Yes, very good indeed.
D.x
33MidnightSky101Very good first chapter. I like how it starts off quite happily with them joking and then suddenly, with one action, it all goes wrong. Yes, very good indeed.
D.x
9/2/2009 c3 4Grace-san
That was so touching!
Great job! Good charcters, amazing story, and, in my book, an overall hit!
I love how you created the Arthur in your story. That one moment of weakness caused him so much guilt and sadness.
Thank you for writing! I can't wait to read more stories from you!
(And I totally get what you meant earily on about saving the emotional stuff for the end. Great job!)
4Grace-sanThat was so touching!
Great job! Good charcters, amazing story, and, in my book, an overall hit!
I love how you created the Arthur in your story. That one moment of weakness caused him so much guilt and sadness.
Thank you for writing! I can't wait to read more stories from you!
(And I totally get what you meant earily on about saving the emotional stuff for the end. Great job!)
9/1/2009 c3 HeroesBonesSNPB
OMG! beautiful ending to a beautiful story! kudos to you. this chappy was so intense and awesome! i hope you write more merlin fics, ur great at this! :D
OMG! beautiful ending to a beautiful story! kudos to you. this chappy was so intense and awesome! i hope you write more merlin fics, ur great at this! :D
9/1/2009 c3 69Miko Akako
I love this story. I couldn't wait for the third chapter to come out.
A sequal would be amazing! Maybe it could be Merlin's three revelations and take place after this story. Then they could be happy forever and ever and ever. (:
-MikoPony
69Miko AkakoI love this story. I couldn't wait for the third chapter to come out.
A sequal would be amazing! Maybe it could be Merlin's three revelations and take place after this story. Then they could be happy forever and ever and ever. (:
-MikoPony
9/1/2009 c3 Angelfire Hunt
Ok so first of all I am really sorry for not reviewing your second chapter. It was really good and I liked your idea about Arthur using magic to help Merlin. It has a lovely message attached to it and it's ironic. Now for this chapter, I think it was the best out of the three. It was sweet and you have the ability of actually making the reader feel the character's emotions. Plus Arthur's inner turmoil was really good. Oh and thx for not making Uther a heartless person. I liked this view on Uther's past. Anyway thx for a great story!
Ok so first of all I am really sorry for not reviewing your second chapter. It was really good and I liked your idea about Arthur using magic to help Merlin. It has a lovely message attached to it and it's ironic. Now for this chapter, I think it was the best out of the three. It was sweet and you have the ability of actually making the reader feel the character's emotions. Plus Arthur's inner turmoil was really good. Oh and thx for not making Uther a heartless person. I liked this view on Uther's past. Anyway thx for a great story!
9/1/2009 c3 27LadyFromPoland
I love the third revelation! It was so beautiful, so pure, so... just the best! I love the way as Arthur was talking with his father. It was brave move, but he truely couldn't do it another way.
And yes! I want sequel!
27LadyFromPolandI love the third revelation! It was so beautiful, so pure, so... just the best! I love the way as Arthur was talking with his father. It was brave move, but he truely couldn't do it another way.
And yes! I want sequel!
9/1/2009 c3 2Shannara810
Ok, now I cannot feel my heart anymore. This story broke it in many, many, many little pieces. You're cruel ^^
Arthur was beyond beautiful: the guilt, the desire to protect his Merlin, the anger against his father... a dream come true.
I think the show should get new ideas from your story.
And Merlin, oh Merlin. Sweeter than a puppy.
I'd love a sequel, Arthur has yet to confess his feelings to his one true love and I've this little idea... if you want, I'll send it with a privare message.
However to sum up my review: your story is EPIC!
2Shannara810Ok, now I cannot feel my heart anymore. This story broke it in many, many, many little pieces. You're cruel ^^
Arthur was beyond beautiful: the guilt, the desire to protect his Merlin, the anger against his father... a dream come true.
I think the show should get new ideas from your story.
And Merlin, oh Merlin. Sweeter than a puppy.
I'd love a sequel, Arthur has yet to confess his feelings to his one true love and I've this little idea... if you want, I'll send it with a privare message.
However to sum up my review: your story is EPIC!