for 10 things I hate about You Twi style5/10/2011 c1 
5Midge 1012
good start =]
try to right more in paragraphs though
i think you've chosen the characters well,
and i like that its bella whos the new girl instead of a new guy =]
keep writin
5Midge 1012good start =]
try to right more in paragraphs though
i think you've chosen the characters well,
and i like that its bella whos the new girl instead of a new guy =]
keep writin
11/2/2010 c1 7TiffersStar1989
i would have to say it was good. and remember this is fanfiction you can change up the story line a bit having different characters changes the story...loved Mrs Perky's POV...cant wait to read more...remember if people have seen the movie your story can be predictable if you go strait off the movie storyline
7TiffersStar1989i would have to say it was good. and remember this is fanfiction you can change up the story line a bit having different characters changes the story...loved Mrs Perky's POV...cant wait to read more...remember if people have seen the movie your story can be predictable if you go strait off the movie storyline
4/18/2010 c1 AlysRose161
I really like the idea of using the Twilight writing style to narrate 10 Things, but to actually change the names kind of ruined the effect for me. I'd be interested to see more of this but if it stayed true to the movie.
I really like the idea of using the Twilight writing style to narrate 10 Things, but to actually change the names kind of ruined the effect for me. I'd be interested to see more of this but if it stayed true to the movie.
3/10/2010 c1 2tazzieee
omg this is awesome wow so funny haha, your great writer love it i am so telling my friends aobut this one :D
2tazzieeeomg this is awesome wow so funny haha, your great writer love it i am so telling my friends aobut this one :D
1/23/2010 c1 kate
this is literally THE worst thing i have ever read. first of all, you're taking a horrible, horrible book and meshing it with one of the best movies ever made. and it does. not. work. second of all, you're using way too much from the movie and that'll get you sued. third, there are so many typos and errors here, i'm not sure you should even be mingling with the english section of this website. my advice to you? stop. just stop. you're defacing an amazing movie with that stupid vampire crap. what is the world coming to?
this is literally THE worst thing i have ever read. first of all, you're taking a horrible, horrible book and meshing it with one of the best movies ever made. and it does. not. work. second of all, you're using way too much from the movie and that'll get you sued. third, there are so many typos and errors here, i'm not sure you should even be mingling with the english section of this website. my advice to you? stop. just stop. you're defacing an amazing movie with that stupid vampire crap. what is the world coming to?
12/12/2009 c1 Claire Jasper Lover
it was awsome and hilarious
it was awsome and hilarious
12/3/2009 c2 2Czy4mnk1254
I love Twilight and 10 things I hate about you! I have watched them both a million times ^-^ Please update soon!
2Czy4mnk1254I love Twilight and 10 things I hate about you! I have watched them both a million times ^-^ Please update soon!
11/25/2009 c1 8Tatiana Ekaterina
The start's ok, but can you break up the typing at the dialogue? It's really hard to read and distracting. And right now you've just substituted Twilight characters into the 10 Things script. Let the characters influence the scenes a bit. How would it be different if it WAS Bella? Stuff like that.
8Tatiana EkaterinaThe start's ok, but can you break up the typing at the dialogue? It's really hard to read and distracting. And right now you've just substituted Twilight characters into the 10 Things script. Let the characters influence the scenes a bit. How would it be different if it WAS Bella? Stuff like that.
8/25/2009 c1 1hollyb.loves.sparkly.edward
omg! wow bratwurst lol very...different POV from mrs perky lol whats her first name? lol cant wait loved the movie, love this 2 xx
1hollyb.loves.sparkly.edwardomg! wow bratwurst lol very...different POV from mrs perky lol whats her first name? lol cant wait loved the movie, love this 2 xx