for This Does Not Compute9/20/2010 c2 
5TheBigMystery
Wah! you have to continue! I love it and am only on the 2nd chapter. If you update, I give you an imaginary cookie! :D
5TheBigMysteryWah! you have to continue! I love it and am only on the 2nd chapter. If you update, I give you an imaginary cookie! :D
8/22/2010 c2 FreeNightFall
Personally, I love crossovers, so your story is pretty high on my likeness list, I think you should make another chapter.
I like how Becca and Kim got separated and found by two different types of people. It does make things more believable, because when people do fall they will not be in the same area.
Just remember to make sure you don't turn into Mary Sue's~
I look forward to seeing more.
Personally, I love crossovers, so your story is pretty high on my likeness list, I think you should make another chapter.
I like how Becca and Kim got separated and found by two different types of people. It does make things more believable, because when people do fall they will not be in the same area.
Just remember to make sure you don't turn into Mary Sue's~
I look forward to seeing more.