for Disenchanted10/7/2012 c19 Guest
please write more, I was really enjoying it and I want to know where it is going
please write more, I was really enjoying it and I want to know where it is going
10/1/2012 c11
6Smizzlemort
I was actually re-reading this entirely the other day (does that make sense?) and I can't believe the bits that i have missed, or rather, the parts that do not stick out in my mind when they should! But still, everything just reiterates how much i love this story!
"You're making my life frightfully grueling by not immediately being transfixed by my presence." That's actually really, really, really funny. Reminds me of some sort of pompous school prefect or something! Tom is quite the comedian even if he doesn't mean to be!
6SmizzlemortI was actually re-reading this entirely the other day (does that make sense?) and I can't believe the bits that i have missed, or rather, the parts that do not stick out in my mind when they should! But still, everything just reiterates how much i love this story!
"You're making my life frightfully grueling by not immediately being transfixed by my presence." That's actually really, really, really funny. Reminds me of some sort of pompous school prefect or something! Tom is quite the comedian even if he doesn't mean to be!
8/5/2012 c19
8Mrs. C. N. Riddle
I just stumbled upon this story, and couldn't help but read all the way through in the last couple of hours! I think your characterization of Tom is beautiful; exactly how I have always pictured and wrote him myself. The plot is very engaging, and your style is easy to follow without being unskilled. I do hope you update soon because I am very fond of this story!
8Mrs. C. N. RiddleI just stumbled upon this story, and couldn't help but read all the way through in the last couple of hours! I think your characterization of Tom is beautiful; exactly how I have always pictured and wrote him myself. The plot is very engaging, and your style is easy to follow without being unskilled. I do hope you update soon because I am very fond of this story!
7/29/2012 c19
10crizarah
I KNEW IT! O_o You're one of the writers who names their characters according to their personalities and practically hands the readers the general outline of that character's role in the story in the instance you give them their names! Well, really good work there. And the whole fic is really very interesting - it's the right blend of dark, fluff, and technical in the wizarding aspect that it suits Tom and your Maeve very much!
I do hope you continue with this. Even if I just found it, I'm really interested to read it until the end.
crizarah
P.S. I can't bribe you with cyber cookies and Tom plushies, can I?:p
10crizarahI KNEW IT! O_o You're one of the writers who names their characters according to their personalities and practically hands the readers the general outline of that character's role in the story in the instance you give them their names! Well, really good work there. And the whole fic is really very interesting - it's the right blend of dark, fluff, and technical in the wizarding aspect that it suits Tom and your Maeve very much!
I do hope you continue with this. Even if I just found it, I'm really interested to read it until the end.
crizarah
P.S. I can't bribe you with cyber cookies and Tom plushies, can I?:p
5/26/2012 c19
3UseTheForce3434
Holy cow I can not explain to you just how much I adore this story. I've been reading it the past two days and I'm just so attached. I just love it! It's almost impossible to find a Tom riddle story that is exactly the way that I wanted it to be. I will be very sad when it concludes but right now I just wanted to tell you excellent work!
3UseTheForce3434Holy cow I can not explain to you just how much I adore this story. I've been reading it the past two days and I'm just so attached. I just love it! It's almost impossible to find a Tom riddle story that is exactly the way that I wanted it to be. I will be very sad when it concludes but right now I just wanted to tell you excellent work!
5/25/2012 c19
6Smizzlemort
Hey! i actually did know about this and i really reviewed and everything, but it hasn't turned up in your reviews! SO WEIRD! anyway, yeah. whatever is fine with you as long as you don't abandon this! i actually looked up rafe's name ages ago and i thought it was cool how you linked his name to his death eater mark! very clever. but it's great how you actually take care with your characters and try to get them right to the tee! anyway, i did know you updated as such, but for some reason...oh, and thanks for reviewing In Another Lifetime!
hope this review actually shows up! :)
6SmizzlemortHey! i actually did know about this and i really reviewed and everything, but it hasn't turned up in your reviews! SO WEIRD! anyway, yeah. whatever is fine with you as long as you don't abandon this! i actually looked up rafe's name ages ago and i thought it was cool how you linked his name to his death eater mark! very clever. but it's great how you actually take care with your characters and try to get them right to the tee! anyway, i did know you updated as such, but for some reason...oh, and thanks for reviewing In Another Lifetime!
hope this review actually shows up! :)
5/23/2012 c19 Guest
and here i was thinking it was an update! no matter, no matter. I actually love the amount of effort you've put in; every bit is detailed and true to the canon! i actually had looked up rafe's name and i thought it was cool that his mark was a wolf, when his name has a lead on to 'wolf'. so very connected and well thought out! anyway, whenever suits you; god knows life always gets in the way of writing! :)
and here i was thinking it was an update! no matter, no matter. I actually love the amount of effort you've put in; every bit is detailed and true to the canon! i actually had looked up rafe's name and i thought it was cool that his mark was a wolf, when his name has a lead on to 'wolf'. so very connected and well thought out! anyway, whenever suits you; god knows life always gets in the way of writing! :)
5/22/2012 c19 lania26
Yes, update soon please!
Yes, update soon please!
5/22/2012 c19 Twilight016
Yes, please continue updating this story. You've put in too much work (so much detail!) to stop now!
Yes, please continue updating this story. You've put in too much work (so much detail!) to stop now!
5/22/2012 c19
39Falconflight
No rotten cabbage. I enjoy this story, which means I shall be patient in case you do decide to update. You might want to update your profile too. The name-thing is interesting, and I admit that I never noticed it. I really hope you decide to update; I am looking forward to reading more of this.
39FalconflightNo rotten cabbage. I enjoy this story, which means I shall be patient in case you do decide to update. You might want to update your profile too. The name-thing is interesting, and I admit that I never noticed it. I really hope you decide to update; I am looking forward to reading more of this.
2/5/2012 c5 anomynous
how come you use irish names ?
i'm just curious cause im irish great story by the way you should defo finished it.
how come you use irish names ?
i'm just curious cause im irish great story by the way you should defo finished it.
7/25/2011 c18
6Smizzlemort
Oh my god, you finally updated! I was wondering if you ever would! Great update though. So wait, am I getting this right; Megaera had a fling with Tom Riddle Sr. back in the day? And is Arria the result of said fling? If so, doesn’t that make Arria, Tom’s half sister? But isn’t it kind of weird, that Maeve, being Arria’s sister, is dating Tom who is Arria’s half sister? Anyway...good update! By the way, this is Salazar Slytherin. But I got an account (as I am writing a story myself at the moment. And for the first time too!) And so, I had to get a new name because I couldn’t use the one i used to use. Just so you know.
6SmizzlemortOh my god, you finally updated! I was wondering if you ever would! Great update though. So wait, am I getting this right; Megaera had a fling with Tom Riddle Sr. back in the day? And is Arria the result of said fling? If so, doesn’t that make Arria, Tom’s half sister? But isn’t it kind of weird, that Maeve, being Arria’s sister, is dating Tom who is Arria’s half sister? Anyway...good update! By the way, this is Salazar Slytherin. But I got an account (as I am writing a story myself at the moment. And for the first time too!) And so, I had to get a new name because I couldn’t use the one i used to use. Just so you know.
