for How Chocolate Cauldrons Destroyed the World5/20 c1 Gruffard
Vane-Malfoy. God. Thanks for the read. Interesting spin on the story. This story hints at Harry/Hermione. Like to see your ideas there.
Thanks for the read!
Vane-Malfoy. God. Thanks for the read. Interesting spin on the story. This story hints at Harry/Hermione. Like to see your ideas there.
Thanks for the read!
4/17 c1 Guest
Life debt ... May not have almost died but would have been worse then that ... Hermione could help Draco out with the love potion ... And have saved him from a fate worse then death ... Being married 2 her ... If you have that as apart of the story instead of just a funny thing after the story's over ... ... Hope you get what I'm saying ... I'm not always saying things in a way that other people understand ... ... Like it so far hope you write a sequel ...
Life debt ... May not have almost died but would have been worse then that ... Hermione could help Draco out with the love potion ... And have saved him from a fate worse then death ... Being married 2 her ... If you have that as apart of the story instead of just a funny thing after the story's over ... ... Hope you get what I'm saying ... I'm not always saying things in a way that other people understand ... ... Like it so far hope you write a sequel ...
4/17 c1 Guest
Please write a sequel ...
Please write a sequel ...
3/13 c1 kyoshi711
Good story short but sweet!
Good story short but sweet!
2/4 c1 jimbobagins
This story really could be a sorta' epic tale too. keeping it humorous Hr/L as a team can never fail ! ..think you have something here,,, TY
This story really could be a sorta' epic tale too. keeping it humorous Hr/L as a team can never fail ! ..think you have something here,,, TY
10/1/2012 c1 
5Publicola
This is actually quite clever. The first bit - about Harry willingly taking a love potion simply to experience some form of affection - was sadly plausible given canon, as was Hermione's realization of that fact (and subsequent distraction because of her own suspicions of potioning). The redo of the Ministry battle was also pretty good, especially in having Hermione prompt Harry to anticipate a set-up, and take the impending confrontation more seriously. Seriously, the reason they were going there in the first place was because they thought Voldemort was holding Sirius captive inside the Ministry - how did they NOT expect a trap?
5PublicolaThis is actually quite clever. The first bit - about Harry willingly taking a love potion simply to experience some form of affection - was sadly plausible given canon, as was Hermione's realization of that fact (and subsequent distraction because of her own suspicions of potioning). The redo of the Ministry battle was also pretty good, especially in having Hermione prompt Harry to anticipate a set-up, and take the impending confrontation more seriously. Seriously, the reason they were going there in the first place was because they thought Voldemort was holding Sirius captive inside the Ministry - how did they NOT expect a trap?
4/23/2012 c1 dragonlordrb
Interesting premise. You could have,or still could, go with the Hermione and Luna know the indices's of the future premise. They know the other major problems to come and can push the team toward the "right" path, preventing a lot of other problems (horcruxes, Dumbledor's death and others). and also explore the Harry/Ginny and/or Hermione coupling(s)
Interesting premise. You could have,or still could, go with the Hermione and Luna know the indices's of the future premise. They know the other major problems to come and can push the team toward the "right" path, preventing a lot of other problems (horcruxes, Dumbledor's death and others). and also explore the Harry/Ginny and/or Hermione coupling(s)
4/4/2012 c1 Bladre MKT
well... have ya killed voldy, this could be over! but since he lived, this could move somewhere... where? DUNNO XD its your fic! but nice play there, also amazing ignigo montoya (sorry if misspeled) there i never seen harry pull one, and it fits GREAT! XD
well... have ya killed voldy, this could be over! but since he lived, this could move somewhere... where? DUNNO XD its your fic! but nice play there, also amazing ignigo montoya (sorry if misspeled) there i never seen harry pull one, and it fits GREAT! XD
3/11/2012 c1 bigmac2759
Wow! This story has one of the top 10 all time great lines about Luna:
- Hermione pinched the bridge of her nose wondering yet again if the reason that Luna never got headaches was because she was a carrier instead. -
I had to add this to my favorite stories for this line alone. Thanks for the subtle humor. It really is enjoyable.
Wow! This story has one of the top 10 all time great lines about Luna:
- Hermione pinched the bridge of her nose wondering yet again if the reason that Luna never got headaches was because she was a carrier instead. -
I had to add this to my favorite stories for this line alone. Thanks for the subtle humor. It really is enjoyable.
2/7/2012 c1 Chargone
*facepalms*
terrible pun, man. terrible pun.
ahh well, an amusing little tale this. probably needs expanding and the detail filling in a bit if you were to do anything much more with it though.
*facepalms*
terrible pun, man. terrible pun.
ahh well, an amusing little tale this. probably needs expanding and the detail filling in a bit if you were to do anything much more with it though.
1/4/2011 c1 A Lost Memory
Cute and funny, and crazy, The omake was also particularly funny little one as well! I can actually visualize Pansy getting so fed up and pushing him and him falling off the chair/couch and then still daydreaming about Vane and not even realizing he's on the floor probably! I really enjoyed the bit with Herm and Luna and wish more people would have the two interacting especially where Luna drives her to the brink of madness...hmmm that would be an interesting fic, don't ya think? The madness of Hermoine by Luna...lol
Thanks for sharing and I'd love to read more of this, by anyone really...
Cute and funny, and crazy, The omake was also particularly funny little one as well! I can actually visualize Pansy getting so fed up and pushing him and him falling off the chair/couch and then still daydreaming about Vane and not even realizing he's on the floor probably! I really enjoyed the bit with Herm and Luna and wish more people would have the two interacting especially where Luna drives her to the brink of madness...hmmm that would be an interesting fic, don't ya think? The madness of Hermoine by Luna...lol
Thanks for sharing and I'd love to read more of this, by anyone really...