for Crash9/2/2009 c1 
29Ms.GrahamCracker
Oh the joys of insomnia! A new story from ALEO!
Ouch! Poor Don, really took a beating and now Troy wants to shoot him to satisfy some sick adolescent fantasy!
So, I'm glad David has help coming, but obviously it won't be soon enough. How is he going to get out of this?
When I said Ouch, I meant it. The writing was so good - the descriptions so detailed, I felt every punch. Great job, as usual. I love the way you whump Don.
Hope to see chapter two real soon.
29Ms.GrahamCrackerOh the joys of insomnia! A new story from ALEO!
Ouch! Poor Don, really took a beating and now Troy wants to shoot him to satisfy some sick adolescent fantasy!
So, I'm glad David has help coming, but obviously it won't be soon enough. How is he going to get out of this?
When I said Ouch, I meant it. The writing was so good - the descriptions so detailed, I felt every punch. Great job, as usual. I love the way you whump Don.
Hope to see chapter two real soon.
9/2/2009 c1 2Terrorkruemel
wow as always a great new story from you. good on ya ;-) can't wait to see what will happen next to don. hopefully some more whump :-)
2Terrorkruemelwow as always a great new story from you. good on ya ;-) can't wait to see what will happen next to don. hopefully some more whump :-)