for Random Thoughts of a Chaotic Mind5/15 c100 sekmarcspn
I really want to know what was the final straw for Naruto and if he will ever open his island kingdom to others. Good job!
I really want to know what was the final straw for Naruto and if he will ever open his island kingdom to others. Good job!
5/14 c77 sekmarcspn
This was fun! I have to ask though, would there be any difference in Itachi other than him obeying his 'owner'? I think it would be fun to see how people would react to Naruto using his 'Ninjamon' as replacements for the instructor Kakashi is not. What do you think?
This was fun! I have to ask though, would there be any difference in Itachi other than him obeying his 'owner'? I think it would be fun to see how people would react to Naruto using his 'Ninjamon' as replacements for the instructor Kakashi is not. What do you think?
5/14 c62 sekmarcspn
I don't think I've ever seen Naruto as a samurai but, if you wanted to expand on this, I would love to see how he deals with the noble class. Well done.
I don't think I've ever seen Naruto as a samurai but, if you wanted to expand on this, I would love to see how he deals with the noble class. Well done.
5/14 c19 sekmarcspn
Well done. While I wouldn't mind reading more of 'The Many Shades of Naruto', I think this left off at a good spot. I would love to find out what becomes of Naruto's district as well as how his 'acting career' effects his ninja career. I hope you decide to come back and continue this story someday.
Well done. While I wouldn't mind reading more of 'The Many Shades of Naruto', I think this left off at a good spot. I would love to find out what becomes of Naruto's district as well as how his 'acting career' effects his ninja career. I hope you decide to come back and continue this story someday.
5/14 c13 sekmarcspn
Waaay over-estimating the size of 'summons'. I could see 60 and 100 'meter' sized summons for the larger and boss summons, but 100 'mile' long summons? That's just ridiculous. Even so, I'm enjoying 'The Many Shades of Naruto'.
Waaay over-estimating the size of 'summons'. I could see 60 and 100 'meter' sized summons for the larger and boss summons, but 100 'mile' long summons? That's just ridiculous. Even so, I'm enjoying 'The Many Shades of Naruto'.
5/14 c30 sekmarcspn
While enjoyed reading 'Kirin House', I think bringing in so many characters from other fandoms was a kind of overkill. Especially when each group had at least one heavy-hitter. Unless you had planned to make the members of House Kirin go out and revolutionize the world, there just didn't seem to be much point in including so many people from so many fandoms. Regardless, I enjoyed reading the story anyway.
While enjoyed reading 'Kirin House', I think bringing in so many characters from other fandoms was a kind of overkill. Especially when each group had at least one heavy-hitter. Unless you had planned to make the members of House Kirin go out and revolutionize the world, there just didn't seem to be much point in including so many people from so many fandoms. Regardless, I enjoyed reading the story anyway.
5/14 c1 sekmarcspn
I liked this piece. I wouldn't mind seeing it expanded on. I would especially like to see what a fully trained magical Naruto could unleash on Konoha.
There are a couple of issues you might want to take a second look at when your writing. Specifically, improper word usage. While using the 'examine' instead of 'exam' or 'examination' for the 'genin exams' could be passed off as a matter of local linguistics, using 'forum' in place of 'form' in 'order form' is clearly a mistake. Also the following sentence, as it is written just does not make sense.
"Since when can the empathize move from the jutsu potion of the test?"
I will assume it was meant to read as something like the following:
"Since when has the emphasis moved from the jutsu portion of the test?"
There is a clear difference in the phrasing and, to me at least, the second makes much more sense. With that said, I'm off to read piece you have posted here.
I liked this piece. I wouldn't mind seeing it expanded on. I would especially like to see what a fully trained magical Naruto could unleash on Konoha.
There are a couple of issues you might want to take a second look at when your writing. Specifically, improper word usage. While using the 'examine' instead of 'exam' or 'examination' for the 'genin exams' could be passed off as a matter of local linguistics, using 'forum' in place of 'form' in 'order form' is clearly a mistake. Also the following sentence, as it is written just does not make sense.
"Since when can the empathize move from the jutsu potion of the test?"
I will assume it was meant to read as something like the following:
"Since when has the emphasis moved from the jutsu portion of the test?"
There is a clear difference in the phrasing and, to me at least, the second makes much more sense. With that said, I'm off to read piece you have posted here.
5/13 c68 
4the DragonBard
Funny thing is that Willow didn't start her magic training until Season 3, except for working on the soul curse IIRC.
4the DragonBardFunny thing is that Willow didn't start her magic training until Season 3, except for working on the soul curse IIRC.
5/13 c19 the DragonBard
Think you went slightly overboard on the characterizations of Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke. At least a little bit.
Though the kage bunshin/henge combo was pretty cool.
Think you went slightly overboard on the characterizations of Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke. At least a little bit.
Though the kage bunshin/henge combo was pretty cool.
4/26 c19 The Holy Kanga
I think you should re-post The Many Shades of Naruto on the main page, It's sort of hidden where it is. A sequel would be nice too :)
I think you should re-post The Many Shades of Naruto on the main page, It's sort of hidden where it is. A sequel would be nice too :)
3/24 c61 12AbZHz101
So what ever happened to the rest of this? I at least partially remembering a scene where Takato as a Yami, Guilmon's human form which you gave a name to, and Renamon were all in the same place discussing something. Then there's the fact that there are so many loose ends left, are you planning on continuing this?
12AbZHz101So what ever happened to the rest of this? I at least partially remembering a scene where Takato as a Yami, Guilmon's human form which you gave a name to, and Renamon were all in the same place discussing something. Then there's the fact that there are so many loose ends left, are you planning on continuing this?
3/12 c162 2myrddin767
These are awesome lol, though I would definitely like to see more the The List. Can't wait for the next! :D
2myrddin767These are awesome lol, though I would definitely like to see more the The List. Can't wait for the next! :D