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3/31 c20 sballLuvr5
Yeah that's super awkward hearing about your future mother-in-law's sexual adventures lol. At least Renee wasn't there. Talk about mortifying. Anyway, great chapter :):)
Kristi
3/31 c19 sballLuvr5
Aww I knew he was getting the ring. I didn't know he got the swans though, that's so sweet. Loved this chapter :)
Kristi
3/31 c18 sballLuvr5
Ahh I actually have tears in my eyes! What a perfect moment for the swans to show up. It was like Edward planned it that way lol. I'm guessing his business trip was to get the ring, maybe? So sweet! Loved it! :):)
Kristi
3/31 c17 sballLuvr5
Hmm what's Edward's epiphany? Lol I hope he builds Bella her dream house. Great chapter :)
Kristi
3/30 c16 sballLuvr5
Well I'm glad Bella got all of that off her chest. Edward needed to realize he was being crazy lol. Loved this chapter :)
Kristi
3/30 c15 sballLuvr5
Edward better start grovling lol. Men are so stupid sometimes. Poor Bella is so sweet and tries so hard. She doesn't deserve his crap.
Kristi
3/30 c14 sballLuvr5
Way to be an insensitive ** Edward. He really needs to relax. I feel like Charlie should yell at him for making his baby girl cry lol. Great chapter :)
Kristi
3/30 c11 jess 'twilight matrix
I knew it! I knew that that's what happened. Wow! Now I know exactly why all the tension. That was an interesting twist. I love this story so far. I've already recommended it to one of my friends.
3/30 c13 sballLuvr5
Aww I'm so glad Edward's letting Bella finish her credentials. I would've been so mad at him if he said no. Great chapter :):)
Kristi
3/30 c12 sballLuvr5
I actually feel really bad for Alice because she can't have children. That's so sad :( I can see Alice's side of things, but she should have broken it off with Edward as soon as she realized she had feelings for Jasper. Anyway, great chapter :):)
Kristi
3/30 c11 sballLuvr5
So the Alice/Jasper thing is what I expected, but it still sucked to hear. Alice really strung him along for a really long time. I don't know why she didn't just break up with him. It didn't seem like they were strictly following the Cannabean way, so breaking it off wouldn't have been as scandalous as being caught with your fiancées brother. That really is messed up. Anyway, I'm glad Bella knows about it now. Great chapter :):)
Kristi
3/30 c10 sballLuvr5
Well finally! Carlisle's right, Edward was being pretty ridiculous. Now to see what actually happen between Edward/Jasper/Alice. Great chapter! :)
Kristi
3/30 c9 sballLuvr5
Aww Bella! Poor thing. Edward went all caveman. It sucks that no one ever tells Bella what's going on. Now I'm super curious as to what Edward has against Alice. I was thinking it was because he maybe was going to court her, but Jasper did instead? Idk.. Great chapter!
Kristi
3/30 c8 sballLuvr5
Edward is so adorable. That sucks that Bella can't wear flip flops lol. Great chapter!
Kristi
3/30 c7 sballLuvr5
Aww poor Bella's so confused. That would really suck to never know what's going on. Edward's such a sweetheart though. Great chapter :):)
Kristi
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