for Helpless8/7/2010 c4 
5VioletVermillion
i loved the whole story!
X3
its great, awesome, and I just love the pairing.
XD
One of my favourites!
3
5VioletVermillioni loved the whole story!
X3
its great, awesome, and I just love the pairing.
XD
One of my favourites!
3
7/27/2010 c4 1sarrahi12
I must say that I really loved this story. It's short, yes, but I loved how this situation resembles some of a girl's everyday worries and doubts for the person she loves. I think its really cute the way you made this couple turn out so give yourself an extra pat on the back for that.
1sarrahi12I must say that I really loved this story. It's short, yes, but I loved how this situation resembles some of a girl's everyday worries and doubts for the person she loves. I think its really cute the way you made this couple turn out so give yourself an extra pat on the back for that.
7/26/2010 c4 30Sara Darkotter
Kawai!
Quick note: If you're done with the story, change story status to complete. Otherwise people will get confused.
30Sara DarkotterKawai!
Quick note: If you're done with the story, change story status to complete. Otherwise people will get confused.
9/21/2009 c3 10Princess Of Sorrow
You know what?
Super speacial AWESOME chappie...I loved it!
The way Yami remembers their "date" and all what happened was so great specially that it shows that Yami cares about her so deeply.
And Tea is still avoiding him. Man, she has to tell him sooner or later. I hope she does on the way home..
I just loved how he wrapped his jacket around her and held her hand. That was so sweet of him to do.
Oh well, I'll have to wait and see what will happen.
Update soon.
PS: I had to review the two chapters because it's an awesome fic. If it wasn't, I wouldn't have reviewed at all.
And thanks you consider me a good friend.
~Rawan
10Princess Of SorrowYou know what?
Super speacial AWESOME chappie...I loved it!
The way Yami remembers their "date" and all what happened was so great specially that it shows that Yami cares about her so deeply.
And Tea is still avoiding him. Man, she has to tell him sooner or later. I hope she does on the way home..
I just loved how he wrapped his jacket around her and held her hand. That was so sweet of him to do.
Oh well, I'll have to wait and see what will happen.
Update soon.
PS: I had to review the two chapters because it's an awesome fic. If it wasn't, I wouldn't have reviewed at all.
And thanks you consider me a good friend.
~Rawan
9/21/2009 c3 46Effervescent Dreamer
I really love this story. It's nice to see Yami's protective side being written out since the show really only gave voice to Yugi's thoughts and not the pharaoh's. This story and use of language is done beautifully.
46Effervescent DreamerI really love this story. It's nice to see Yami's protective side being written out since the show really only gave voice to Yugi's thoughts and not the pharaoh's. This story and use of language is done beautifully.
9/21/2009 c3 13CrimsonZero
Another well-written chapter! I loved the way you described Anzu's nervousness and Yami's concern. I guess it's because I've been in similar situations to Anzu (and probably because I'm a girl) but I can really relate to her feelings. I believe I said this in the last chapter review ^^;
In any case, as for the short dialogue, actions (and emotions) speak louder than words. The way Yami held her hands illustrated how much he cares for her while Anzu's warmness depicts her love for him.
Can't wait for more. 3
13CrimsonZeroAnother well-written chapter! I loved the way you described Anzu's nervousness and Yami's concern. I guess it's because I've been in similar situations to Anzu (and probably because I'm a girl) but I can really relate to her feelings. I believe I said this in the last chapter review ^^;
In any case, as for the short dialogue, actions (and emotions) speak louder than words. The way Yami held her hands illustrated how much he cares for her while Anzu's warmness depicts her love for him.
Can't wait for more. 3
9/21/2009 c3 5yami yasi
hey dear you write a nice chapter again ( blink ) .
anzu want say her feeling's to yami ? wo . it must be very hard for her but anzu is brave ...
but it's problem that how she and he must be together .
poor anzu and yami
i think to myself if i was in anzu's place ..when yami come to me and give his coat to me , may be i must faint ( and think he catch me ) ha ha ha ha
it was a beautiful scene .. i love this chapter very much ..
update soon till wa see how anzu will say her feeling's
love you like ever
yasi
5yami yasihey dear you write a nice chapter again ( blink ) .
anzu want say her feeling's to yami ? wo . it must be very hard for her but anzu is brave ...
but it's problem that how she and he must be together .
poor anzu and yami
i think to myself if i was in anzu's place ..when yami come to me and give his coat to me , may be i must faint ( and think he catch me ) ha ha ha ha
it was a beautiful scene .. i love this chapter very much ..
update soon till wa see how anzu will say her feeling's
love you like ever
yasi
9/20/2009 c3 12fantasia-49
hey you!
i love this chapter really! i found it great to read the impressions, feelings that yami had about anzu and the need he hasto know what she has!
good one really and i wait the next chapter with impatience^^
12fantasia-49hey you!
i love this chapter really! i found it great to read the impressions, feelings that yami had about anzu and the need he hasto know what she has!
good one really and i wait the next chapter with impatience^^
9/15/2009 c2 10Princess Of Sorrow
A totally AWESOME chapter!
Yami is really concerned about her, and she's still hiding something.
Is she hiding her feelings; that she's in love with him!
Man, love stinks..!
I loved the chapter and I can't wait to read more of this story.
Great job pirate, absolutely great girl!
~Rawan
10Princess Of SorrowA totally AWESOME chapter!
Yami is really concerned about her, and she's still hiding something.
Is she hiding her feelings; that she's in love with him!
Man, love stinks..!
I loved the chapter and I can't wait to read more of this story.
Great job pirate, absolutely great girl!
~Rawan
9/15/2009 c1 Princess Of Sorrow
OMG! I can't believe that I didn't notice this story of yours. Man, I'm the worst friend ever, I know.
This story is indeed so catchy. I just don't know what is wrong with Anzu. I could say that she is avoiding Yami because she loves him maybe or because she doesn't know what are her feelings towrads him, but she was avoiding the others too.
Hmm, I wonder what is wrong with her?
Great chapter and great start, with an awesome title. You did a great job with this chappie.
I'll go read the next one..
~Rawan
OMG! I can't believe that I didn't notice this story of yours. Man, I'm the worst friend ever, I know.
This story is indeed so catchy. I just don't know what is wrong with Anzu. I could say that she is avoiding Yami because she loves him maybe or because she doesn't know what are her feelings towrads him, but she was avoiding the others too.
Hmm, I wonder what is wrong with her?
Great chapter and great start, with an awesome title. You did a great job with this chappie.
I'll go read the next one..
~Rawan
9/9/2009 c2 12fantasia-49
oh it was so great i love it
excellent at least. A good one really and i love this pairing
12fantasia-49oh it was so great i love it
excellent at least. A good one really and i love this pairing