for Lost Cause5/18 c26 
4puss-is-in-boots
I love this story so far! i really hope you're going to finish it because id love to read the rest! I was disappointed to find out it was left unfinished
4puss-is-in-bootsI love this story so far! i really hope you're going to finish it because id love to read the rest! I was disappointed to find out it was left unfinished
4/8 c9 cela
carnac the magnificent? johnny carson?
carnac the magnificent? johnny carson?
4/1 c26 Elizabeth keitz
I really like it you should keep going
I really like it you should keep going
2/19 c24 1love bite
I am getting worried here that this whole thing is in her mind, and we are seeing her fantasy life as she escapes mentally from some terrible thing that is happening to her in "real" life. That would suck.
But, I am enjoying this story. Thanks for sharing.
1love biteI am getting worried here that this whole thing is in her mind, and we are seeing her fantasy life as she escapes mentally from some terrible thing that is happening to her in "real" life. That would suck.
But, I am enjoying this story. Thanks for sharing.
2/14 c11 love bite
Perhaps this has already been mentioned, but the term is "scarfed my food" not "scoffed my food." If you are open to constructive feedback, I found the constant use of italics a bit too much.
As always, a wonderful story...makes me want to keep reading!
Perhaps this has already been mentioned, but the term is "scarfed my food" not "scoffed my food." If you are open to constructive feedback, I found the constant use of italics a bit too much.
As always, a wonderful story...makes me want to keep reading!
2/14 c10 love bite
OK I have been naughty and have not reviewed as I have been going along. I absolutely adore this fic and the detail vs. plot development is just perfect. I notice it is not complete and I am REALLY hoping you are still writing it, because I don't deal well with unfinished stories...
OK I have been naughty and have not reviewed as I have been going along. I absolutely adore this fic and the detail vs. plot development is just perfect. I notice it is not complete and I am REALLY hoping you are still writing it, because I don't deal well with unfinished stories...
1/31 c26 brandy
I hope u will continue this story it is wounderfull
I hope u will continue this story it is wounderfull
1/18 c26 Guest
Omg omg omg omg omg omg I'm obsessed please do moreeeeeee
Omg omg omg omg omg omg I'm obsessed please do moreeeeeee
1/9 c26 3abbyweyr
oh no. Esme a better option for talking about abuse. Rosalie will only scare her. Looking forward to more when you post.
3abbyweyroh no. Esme a better option for talking about abuse. Rosalie will only scare her. Looking forward to more when you post.
1/9 c25 abbyweyr
Indeed interesting dreams/memories. Close call with the PA thugs. The previous memories causing problems with her being able to respond more strongly.
Indeed interesting dreams/memories. Close call with the PA thugs. The previous memories causing problems with her being able to respond more strongly.