for Charlie Bone: Next2/7 c9 Guest
I'm waiting, I'm waiting
I'm waiting, I'm waiting
1/31/2011 c9 
41Ivy Devi
Please keep going it is awesome.
You hav'nt updateed in a while
But as far as constructive critisism Ezekiel is not unendowed he is a magician. Anyway please upfate soon
41Ivy DeviPlease keep going it is awesome.
You hav'nt updateed in a while
But as far as constructive critisism Ezekiel is not unendowed he is a magician. Anyway please upfate soon
9/28/2010 c9 6Lady Moe
HAHAHAHA I love Tancred so much...
Update soon please, can't wait to see what happens.
Oh and Ezekiel Bloor is endowed; maybe Lysander just doesn't know that?
-L.M.
6Lady MoeHAHAHAHA I love Tancred so much...
Update soon please, can't wait to see what happens.
Oh and Ezekiel Bloor is endowed; maybe Lysander just doesn't know that?
-L.M.
9/27/2010 c9 nightpwnsj00
Quick question - how exactly is Paton using a flashlight? Surely it would have exploded by now.
Other than that, this is a great story. Interesting plot, and the characters are well written. Keep writing! =)
Quick question - how exactly is Paton using a flashlight? Surely it would have exploded by now.
Other than that, this is a great story. Interesting plot, and the characters are well written. Keep writing! =)
8/8/2010 c8 1trip-over-the-page
Reason number one to continue story: It's correct grammar, spelling, all that great jazz.
Reason number two: It's an interesting story. It's actually got a plot, which is somewhat rare in Fan Fiction stories.
Reason number three: You have people who really like it! Seriously!
1trip-over-the-pageReason number one to continue story: It's correct grammar, spelling, all that great jazz.
Reason number two: It's an interesting story. It's actually got a plot, which is somewhat rare in Fan Fiction stories.
Reason number three: You have people who really like it! Seriously!
5/31/2010 c7 30silverdragoneyes14
at bleast ray is smart in warning them...can't wait for what happens next!
30silverdragoneyes14at bleast ray is smart in warning them...can't wait for what happens next!
5/31/2010 c6 silverdragoneyes14
hmm...how does this have anything to do with the sumwad edowed students who died? but this is interesting and it definetly sounds like something the Bloors would do.
hmm...how does this have anything to do with the sumwad edowed students who died? but this is interesting and it definetly sounds like something the Bloors would do.
5/31/2010 c5 silverdragoneyes14
omg this is getting juicer by the chapter! i'm confused and i love it!
omg this is getting juicer by the chapter! i'm confused and i love it!
5/31/2010 c4 silverdragoneyes14
NOOOOOOOOOOO! why must the good be hypnotized? Tancred was always my favourite, please don't kill him! :(
NOOOOOOOOOOO! why must the good be hypnotized? Tancred was always my favourite, please don't kill him! :(
5/31/2010 c3 silverdragoneyes14
ooo this girl intrigues me! something's telling me that she has been hypnotized...hmm...has she anything to do with the murder cases?
ooo this girl intrigues me! something's telling me that she has been hypnotized...hmm...has she anything to do with the murder cases?
5/31/2010 c2 silverdragoneyes14
good always gets paired with the evil! it make sense, though. if the good/good or evil/evil were paired up, it would be easy for plotting. it's good so far!
good always gets paired with the evil! it make sense, though. if the good/good or evil/evil were paired up, it would be easy for plotting. it's good so far!