for Breaking Dawn: EPOV9/15/2012 c23 Guest
AWESOME
AWESOME
9/13/2012 c25 nicole
lol all i can say wow ;)
lol all i can say wow ;)
8/30/2012 c20 MissDeLys
, understanding somehow that all of these people were hers.
She quite liked the idea.
So did I.
ah...point on the cute factor without it being cheesy..(well greasycheesy)
, understanding somehow that all of these people were hers.
She quite liked the idea.
So did I.
ah...point on the cute factor without it being cheesy..(well greasycheesy)
8/26/2012 c28 ShannTheTwilightAddict
This is a great story :) please update soon :D youre very talented :)
This is a great story :) please update soon :D youre very talented :)
7/21/2012 c28 Guest
good
good
7/21/2012 c28 Guest
i loved all of the chapters they were so interesting and i couldnt take my eyes of the pages it kept me wanting to no more and see whats going to happen i really hope there will be more chapters and well done to the author ther really talented
i loved all of the chapters they were so interesting and i couldnt take my eyes of the pages it kept me wanting to no more and see whats going to happen i really hope there will be more chapters and well done to the author ther really talented
7/6/2012 c28 Guest
Nice, nice, nice, nice... Holy crap, this is so good. But this is the last chapter. :(
Finish it, please.
Nice, nice, nice, nice... Holy crap, this is so good. But this is the last chapter. :(
Finish it, please.
6/22/2012 c28 
4loveryou187
I absolutely LOVE this story! It is so hard to find a well written Edward in so many details. I just wish that the story was completed. I really do hope that you find time someday to keep working, I know how life gets in the way of writing.
4loveryou187I absolutely LOVE this story! It is so hard to find a well written Edward in so many details. I just wish that the story was completed. I really do hope that you find time someday to keep working, I know how life gets in the way of writing.
6/14/2012 c27 cynthia24cat
Amazing! Thanks so much...I am enjoying it more than the original which feels sacreligious to say. But without the original it wouldn't be as good so I am grateful for both!
Amazing! Thanks so much...I am enjoying it more than the original which feels sacreligious to say. But without the original it wouldn't be as good so I am grateful for both!
6/10/2012 c1 Against CU
If anyone is interested, the leader of Critics United is an hypocrite, he/she reports fic for sexual content, but he/she has a lot of them, and with very strong sex. If you want to fight fire with fire, start reporting his/her fics too, to show what it feels to have your fics removed.
The name of the leader is DarkSacredJewelXoX, and his/her profile is www. / u / 2098970
Report his/her fics for being such an hypocrite, and see if he/she likes to have them removed for the same reasons he/she is getting fics banned
If anyone is interested, the leader of Critics United is an hypocrite, he/she reports fic for sexual content, but he/she has a lot of them, and with very strong sex. If you want to fight fire with fire, start reporting his/her fics too, to show what it feels to have your fics removed.
The name of the leader is DarkSacredJewelXoX, and his/her profile is www. / u / 2098970
Report his/her fics for being such an hypocrite, and see if he/she likes to have them removed for the same reasons he/she is getting fics banned
5/15/2012 c28 Sara
Amazing! Love it! Please please write more thnx :) 3
Amazing! Love it! Please please write more thnx :) 3