for Kumogakure Ninja5/7 c1 
9Swirlycloud
Wow, I think this is an interesting idea. I love the interaction between Naruto and his Bee-occhan in canon, and seeing this Kirabi with little Naruto is no less cute... :D
9SwirlycloudWow, I think this is an interesting idea. I love the interaction between Naruto and his Bee-occhan in canon, and seeing this Kirabi with little Naruto is no less cute... :D
4/27 c27 Ten no kaitou
nice chapter this story is pretty good one of the first ones i read where naruto grows up outside the village so not much to compare to but still is pretty good in my opinion can't wait to see results of the finals especially with hari up against negi hari seems really strong but i wonder how he will manage to beat negi not so worried about naruto's first match other than her figuring his parenting out but with yugito against a kaguya seems she will have an easier time since sasuke beat him with lightning
nice chapter this story is pretty good one of the first ones i read where naruto grows up outside the village so not much to compare to but still is pretty good in my opinion can't wait to see results of the finals especially with hari up against negi hari seems really strong but i wonder how he will manage to beat negi not so worried about naruto's first match other than her figuring his parenting out but with yugito against a kaguya seems she will have an easier time since sasuke beat him with lightning
4/26 c21 2Sebastian-kun
Your other stories are most likely better than this one, but it would be very nice of you to update when possible. I know you're a law student, but about 10.000 people want you to update, so update soon please. :)
2Sebastian-kunYour other stories are most likely better than this one, but it would be very nice of you to update when possible. I know you're a law student, but about 10.000 people want you to update, so update soon please. :)
4/26 c20 Sebastian-kun
I'm happy naruto easily beat neji, I mean considering his development it should be easy for him to beat neji,
I'm happy naruto easily beat neji, I mean considering his development it should be easy for him to beat neji,
4/25 c15 Sebastian-kun
So wonderfull. To my full understanding Naruto could now beat the Genin Nine without a sweat. Unless the genin nine in konoha have grown as much it shouldn't be possible. Naruto at this point is in my view almost Jounin. If he so much as needs to break a sweat against the likes of that dog inuzuka I'll be dissapointed, anyways great chapter!
So wonderfull. To my full understanding Naruto could now beat the Genin Nine without a sweat. Unless the genin nine in konoha have grown as much it shouldn't be possible. Naruto at this point is in my view almost Jounin. If he so much as needs to break a sweat against the likes of that dog inuzuka I'll be dissapointed, anyways great chapter!
4/25 c12 Sebastian-kun
So I absolutely liked the fact that naruto beat that older genin. It would be ridiculous to say naruto is not on chuunin level. If the genin in konoha are the same as in cannon, naruto will have no probram stomping them all. uamUhahahahaha
So I absolutely liked the fact that naruto beat that older genin. It would be ridiculous to say naruto is not on chuunin level. If the genin in konoha are the same as in cannon, naruto will have no probram stomping them all. uamUhahahahaha
4/25 c11 Sebastian-kun
I vaguely remember this story. Not sure if I have ever read it before.
Anyways, I'm a short guy, 5 foot 6 and the short jokes are getting to me, lol...
I vaguely remember this story. Not sure if I have ever read it before.
Anyways, I'm a short guy, 5 foot 6 and the short jokes are getting to me, lol...
4/25 c10 Sebastian-kun
To be honest, it's too much fighting. I guess Uzumaki descendant is more to my liking, non the less, beautifull story, will finish reading if possible. :)
To be honest, it's too much fighting. I guess Uzumaki descendant is more to my liking, non the less, beautifull story, will finish reading if possible. :)