for Kiss and Kill6/18/2010 c1 
16numb-butt
lame-o. That was great (as always). And puh-lease, who wouldn't enjoy teasing Squall, he's practically begging for the attention, he just doesn't know it yet. ;) Except us, yeah. Just us.
16numb-buttlame-o. That was great (as always). And puh-lease, who wouldn't enjoy teasing Squall, he's practically begging for the attention, he just doesn't know it yet. ;) Except us, yeah. Just us.
3/30/2010 c1 3FirstClassAngel
Hahahahaha That was hysterical! Aw Squally don't be such a sourpuss that was cute! I love how you portrayed both characters and I'll be sure to add this to the list of my favorites that make me giggle like a mad fangirl.
3FirstClassAngelHahahahaha That was hysterical! Aw Squally don't be such a sourpuss that was cute! I love how you portrayed both characters and I'll be sure to add this to the list of my favorites that make me giggle like a mad fangirl.
1/1/2010 c1 17Spark the Clairvoyant
I actually like this. The two are... mostly in character, if slightly exaggerated to a caricature, but I would not be surprised to find Zidane doing that (Granted, I've seen Zidane as bi since I played IX way back when, but that's neither here nor there)in a moment with no Manikins.
My only real issue was the usage of the fan term "Glomp" by Squall and Zidane using "Chibi Look Of Doom." But seriously, those two bits of terminolgy were what bothered me the most, seeing as how despite my desire to deny Zidane loves playing "How can I annoy this person the most?" is ridiculous and I know he's done it with Steiner and possibly Amarant.
I enjoyed it, made me laugh, which is a rare thing in these days.
17Spark the ClairvoyantI actually like this. The two are... mostly in character, if slightly exaggerated to a caricature, but I would not be surprised to find Zidane doing that (Granted, I've seen Zidane as bi since I played IX way back when, but that's neither here nor there)in a moment with no Manikins.
My only real issue was the usage of the fan term "Glomp" by Squall and Zidane using "Chibi Look Of Doom." But seriously, those two bits of terminolgy were what bothered me the most, seeing as how despite my desire to deny Zidane loves playing "How can I annoy this person the most?" is ridiculous and I know he's done it with Steiner and possibly Amarant.
I enjoyed it, made me laugh, which is a rare thing in these days.
12/14/2009 c1 Aya
:D That was really cute. You have some real talent, they were both in character perfectly, and I hope and wish that maybe you'll write more zidaneXsquall? 3 3 3 Please? It's an underloved fandom.
:D That was really cute. You have some real talent, they were both in character perfectly, and I hope and wish that maybe you'll write more zidaneXsquall? 3 3 3 Please? It's an underloved fandom.
11/4/2009 c1 D
Aint a fan of slash, only read it bc, the "Touch me and die" in the explanation...but it is something that Zidane would potentially do, if just to annoy Squall. And It doesn't surprise me he was having to dodge a heel crush. It also wouldn't surprise me to see a rough divide or even renokozuken.hehe
'Touch me and die' something I could very much see squall saying to Zidane.
Well written
Aint a fan of slash, only read it bc, the "Touch me and die" in the explanation...but it is something that Zidane would potentially do, if just to annoy Squall. And It doesn't surprise me he was having to dodge a heel crush. It also wouldn't surprise me to see a rough divide or even renokozuken.hehe
'Touch me and die' something I could very much see squall saying to Zidane.
Well written
9/27/2009 c1 51Expressive Dissonance
oh god, this is so wrong, and yet so hilarious. I cracked up so HARD. poor squall, having to endure the little annoyance. XD
51Expressive Dissonanceoh god, this is so wrong, and yet so hilarious. I cracked up so HARD. poor squall, having to endure the little annoyance. XD
9/27/2009 c1 4Evil raccoon
How adorable ^^
But come on, Squall, it's not like you can fool anyone pretending you didn't like it ;D
4Evil raccoonHow adorable ^^
But come on, Squall, it's not like you can fool anyone pretending you didn't like it ;D
9/26/2009 c1 Ink-Me-Up
Haha, I love these two together. They're like a teenage version of The Odd Couple. Adorable fic 3
Haha, I love these two together. They're like a teenage version of The Odd Couple. Adorable fic 3