11/10/2010 c1 Guest
i cant remember the name of the episode but i remember what happens they get a distress signal and so do the klingons they were drawn together by an alien that feeds on anger

1/19/2010 c1 4janiemanie1993
i just wanted to say that i'm glad you got everything in the right timezone. i really do like it. two thumbs up!

9/25/2009 c1 9kobez2.0
I am by no means a sonic fan and I'm not a Trekki, although I did enjoy the recent Star Trek movie and the old Sonic cartoon from over a decade ago, but I really enjoyed this fic. I had almost no idea what it is based on, cuz like I said I was only ever familiar with the cartoon that was based on the game. Not much of a review but I will definately look not more of your Sonic stuff when I get the alerts.

Peace, and have a good weekend.

-Kobez-

9/25/2009 c1 12Lord Kelvin
Addiction to weirdness.

I'm going to assume you smoke. That's a fine excuse for making an erroneous attempt at witty writing. Shadow and Maria are taken completely out of their element.

This is more like a lecture or a gospel. You have not only missed the point of a true Sonic fan fiction and forgot to label it as a crossover, but you've included the most uninteresting and annoying subjects. The bright side is that you haven't spoken about environmentalism.

Usually such cracked fics have a totally amazing ending. A metaphor or an important message most writers pull off. Your message lingered about in several lines and your final words brought nothing new.

Nothing new. When you retell a movie in the wrong category, you take a huge risk. Before deciding this another time, I suggest evaluating whether you add value and whether your value would be precious to more people than you.

Either you're liberal with English, or your quotes like being backwards. Sometimes a standard is friendlier to read.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.