for Unlikely Friends V210/20/2010 c4 crimsonmoon08
This is pretty good! I never thought of reading a crossover between house and bones before! Now I have to go see if there are other House/Zach pairing(hope that's the pairing this story ends up with! ^_^)
This is pretty good! I never thought of reading a crossover between house and bones before! Now I have to go see if there are other House/Zach pairing(hope that's the pairing this story ends up with! ^_^)
7/18/2010 c4 mmmmmmmmh
I think this it the longest chapter yet :D keep it up! Can't wait for next chapter.
I think this it the longest chapter yet :D keep it up! Can't wait for next chapter.
7/16/2010 c4 
15iamQuoz
I was beginning to suspect that you'd been abducted by aliens. I even was about to call up the airforce, and demand that they rescue you (JK). Glad your still with us!
15iamQuozI was beginning to suspect that you'd been abducted by aliens. I even was about to call up the airforce, and demand that they rescue you (JK). Glad your still with us!
7/4/2010 c3 Maria
Great chapter :) Cant wait for the next one :D
Great chapter :) Cant wait for the next one :D
4/27/2010 c3 14Nerdz-Will-Rule-The-World
U haven't updated... U need 2! This looks like an interesting plot line but cant tell 4 sure until another chapter is put out! Good Luck. :P and hurry up!
14Nerdz-Will-Rule-The-WorldU haven't updated... U need 2! This looks like an interesting plot line but cant tell 4 sure until another chapter is put out! Good Luck. :P and hurry up!
11/16/2009 c3 14nequam-tenshi
I doubt normal civilians know of Gormagon! The FBI wouldn't create mass panic by announcing there was a cannabalist man eating people!
Good story though.
"King of the Loony Bin."-Zack
14nequam-tenshiI doubt normal civilians know of Gormagon! The FBI wouldn't create mass panic by announcing there was a cannabalist man eating people!
Good story though.
"King of the Loony Bin."-Zack
11/15/2009 c3 Anon
I'll be honest, this story makes me kind of sad. This is such a fantastic idea, but you don't seem to be putting the effort into it. A lot of what you have in your summary in the very first chapter, should be told in the story, not outside of it. Skipping an entire block of what you come right out and say is important conversation is pretty lazy. No one expects you to type out exactly what was said in the show- that's the joy of fan fiction. Make it up. Put it in your own words.
There's a lot of places you can flesh out- add description everywhere, add more dialogue and more interaction per chapter. Like I said, I love the idea. Run with it. Have fun with it.
I'll be honest, this story makes me kind of sad. This is such a fantastic idea, but you don't seem to be putting the effort into it. A lot of what you have in your summary in the very first chapter, should be told in the story, not outside of it. Skipping an entire block of what you come right out and say is important conversation is pretty lazy. No one expects you to type out exactly what was said in the show- that's the joy of fan fiction. Make it up. Put it in your own words.
There's a lot of places you can flesh out- add description everywhere, add more dialogue and more interaction per chapter. Like I said, I love the idea. Run with it. Have fun with it.
11/15/2009 c3 3Greytune
The only problem I see with this fic is that the chapters are too short. But I can deal.
And I think a House/Zack fic would be quite interesting... they start out as friends, but does it evolve into something more?
3GreytuneThe only problem I see with this fic is that the chapters are too short. But I can deal.
And I think a House/Zack fic would be quite interesting... they start out as friends, but does it evolve into something more?
11/11/2009 c2 Fiona
hey
i think this is a really good idea and has a lot of potential. its realy intreging and so far i like it!
i really am looking forward to seeing where this goes so please continue!
hey
i think this is a really good idea and has a lot of potential. its realy intreging and so far i like it!
i really am looking forward to seeing where this goes so please continue!
10/9/2009 c2 2OboeTheres
Hmm, quite an interesting idea.
It feels a little unpolished, but I imagine that that is just from the lack of beta-ing.
I hope you continue, I'm quite interested to see where you take this!
2OboeTheresHmm, quite an interesting idea.
It feels a little unpolished, but I imagine that that is just from the lack of beta-ing.
I hope you continue, I'm quite interested to see where you take this!