for 0830 Hours6/17/2003 c1 Choc
An excellent concept for a story and capably written. Enjoyable throughout.
To it's slight detrement...it hits a few spots of almost cringe-inducing mush...which isn't to say that mush is bad, but the extent of it...just don't go overboard.
If you're a fan of shooters at all, I would LOVE to see an Ikaruga story from you...
An excellent concept for a story and capably written. Enjoyable throughout.
To it's slight detrement...it hits a few spots of almost cringe-inducing mush...which isn't to say that mush is bad, but the extent of it...just don't go overboard.
If you're a fan of shooters at all, I would LOVE to see an Ikaruga story from you...
8/25/2002 c1 
2Tennion Pantharus
Wow... I love the game and that was by far the best thing I've ever read in my life. If you tried, you could write a book. Write more of these
2Tennion PantharusWow... I love the game and that was by far the best thing I've ever read in my life. If you tried, you could write a book. Write more of these
2/16/2002 c1 14Vick Pena
there is nothing better for a good battle game than a good intro story and let me tell you, ma'friend, this is an excellent one for an excellent game, kepp on writing
14Vick Penathere is nothing better for a good battle game than a good intro story and let me tell you, ma'friend, this is an excellent one for an excellent game, kepp on writing
2/15/2002 c1 animemaster
WOW that was full of detail I loved it. keep writing you deserve more reviews if not better ones like this one. A+
WOW that was full of detail I loved it. keep writing you deserve more reviews if not better ones like this one. A+