for Naruto: Rinnegan Chronicles5/4 c21 
1Madaraisbeast
"You kill innocent people and think you can get away with it?"
I was totally expecting Deidara to be like the joker (Dark Knight) and go: "Yeah"
Awesome story btw
1Madaraisbeast"You kill innocent people and think you can get away with it?"
I was totally expecting Deidara to be like the joker (Dark Knight) and go: "Yeah"
Awesome story btw
4/30 c36 Guest
i **ing hate you bastard
i **ing hate you bastard
4/27 c3 Your story sucks
Is shinra tensei the only move that naruto knows?
Try and get some new moves like pretapath asura path or go crazy instead of just using deva path
Is shinra tensei the only move that naruto knows?
Try and get some new moves like pretapath asura path or go crazy instead of just using deva path
4/27 c1 Bane
Try to write prodigy better it's not progeny but prodigy
Try to write prodigy better it's not progeny but prodigy
4/27 c7 9Wolfone10
HUH?! Naruto WITH the rinnegan, and a ANOTHER biju container along with TWO sannin couldn't kill Orochi OR kabito? Yeah right! That's a gotta be a joke!
9Wolfone10HUH?! Naruto WITH the rinnegan, and a ANOTHER biju container along with TWO sannin couldn't kill Orochi OR kabito? Yeah right! That's a gotta be a joke!
4/27 c5 Wolfone10
Um, it takes TWO akatski to take down 1 biju, if they were confronted with 2?! It's a no-brainer, the akatuski would lose HANDS DOWN.
Um, it takes TWO akatski to take down 1 biju, if they were confronted with 2?! It's a no-brainer, the akatuski would lose HANDS DOWN.
4/21 c42 3HalfwayParanoid
This...was...AWESOME! I cannot believe it took me so long to find something like this! I am so glad I chose to keep reading. You did beautifully.
3HalfwayParanoidThis...was...AWESOME! I cannot believe it took me so long to find something like this! I am so glad I chose to keep reading. You did beautifully.
4/2 c41 Guest
So if everyone pain killed will return, then they better get ero-sennin before he drowns again.
So if everyone pain killed will return, then they better get ero-sennin before he drowns again.
4/2 c42 ghstomahawks
I don't review stories terribly often, but this one practically demanded that I chime in when I was done reading it. At 120k words it managed to be novel length, neither too short and rushed nor a tedious epic dragging on forever. It also managed to develop an overpowered Naruto without making it too easy for him and thus trivialize the conflict. We instead got a kick*** Naruto in a well plotted, well paced story with well developed characters. To the author I can only say thank you. Seriously overpowered stories are something of a guilty pleasure of mine, but there was no guilt here as this story surpassed all the usual pitfalls of such stories and was as well written as any I've read. I highly recommend this story to any fan of Naruto stories.
I don't review stories terribly often, but this one practically demanded that I chime in when I was done reading it. At 120k words it managed to be novel length, neither too short and rushed nor a tedious epic dragging on forever. It also managed to develop an overpowered Naruto without making it too easy for him and thus trivialize the conflict. We instead got a kick*** Naruto in a well plotted, well paced story with well developed characters. To the author I can only say thank you. Seriously overpowered stories are something of a guilty pleasure of mine, but there was no guilt here as this story surpassed all the usual pitfalls of such stories and was as well written as any I've read. I highly recommend this story to any fan of Naruto stories.
3/18 c1 Awinarock
Off to a very rocky star, even with the rewrite. Chapter 1 is plain boring and since it's the introductory chapter, arguably the chapter that makes or breaks a story, the situations pretty bad. What you have here is a crappy rewrite of Canon with the exception of the Kumo delegation, not to mention the pacing is all over the place.
Off to a very rocky star, even with the rewrite. Chapter 1 is plain boring and since it's the introductory chapter, arguably the chapter that makes or breaks a story, the situations pretty bad. What you have here is a crappy rewrite of Canon with the exception of the Kumo delegation, not to mention the pacing is all over the place.