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83Moonlight M3lody
Good fic you have here. I'm happy there are still some contributors for this small fandom. If only the second and third game got released too.
83Moonlight M3lodyGood fic you have here. I'm happy there are still some contributors for this small fandom. If only the second and third game got released too.
10/6/2009 c1 55Peach the Hedgehog
I'm going to start by saying that I loved the idea of this oneshot. Etolie seemed more like a rival to Cornet, yet she cared about her more than she ever let on. So deep inside, she really was Cornet's best friend, whether or not she could admit it.
The reason she went on was because Etolie wanted Cornet to be happy... I think that makes sense actually!
Now, you did have a few errors in here and some things didn't flow as well. But I still liked your idea, and I could ignore your errors, actually.
And as you probably guessed, the one guy's name isn't Mommy. His name is Momie. I wouldn't know if the DS version said 'Mommy' for him, as I never played that far. But I'm pretty sure if it did, it's probably not a glitch. It's probably a typo. Those things happen from time to time.
Keep up the good work!
55Peach the HedgehogI'm going to start by saying that I loved the idea of this oneshot. Etolie seemed more like a rival to Cornet, yet she cared about her more than she ever let on. So deep inside, she really was Cornet's best friend, whether or not she could admit it.
The reason she went on was because Etolie wanted Cornet to be happy... I think that makes sense actually!
Now, you did have a few errors in here and some things didn't flow as well. But I still liked your idea, and I could ignore your errors, actually.
And as you probably guessed, the one guy's name isn't Mommy. His name is Momie. I wouldn't know if the DS version said 'Mommy' for him, as I never played that far. But I'm pretty sure if it did, it's probably not a glitch. It's probably a typo. Those things happen from time to time.
Keep up the good work!