for pokeharvest2/21/2010 c4 
9Kokoro no Hana
here's my OC
name: Whitney
gender: female
age: 16
hometown: Forget-me-not valley, Magic farm
Looks: has long gold hair in a pony tail and blue eyes. wears fingerless black gloves, a yellow jacket, black jeans and red and white trainers.
Personality: Kind and caring but can get angry easily.
likes: summer, the forest, animals and Gratin
Dislikes: Rainy days, Injections, Deserts and Curry rice.
Pokemon:
Mira - an eevee with a white tail. crushes Justice
moves: Transfrom and metrenome
Level 57
Gender: Female
Justice - A Mystrille Skarmory.
Moves: Fly, Aerial ace, Earthquake and growl.
level 60
Gender: male
background: Mother died from an unknown illness and father drowned when whitney was 13.
trainer: Breeder
opinion: They are ok, likes ryan best.
other:
9Kokoro no Hanahere's my OC
name: Whitney
gender: female
age: 16
hometown: Forget-me-not valley, Magic farm
Looks: has long gold hair in a pony tail and blue eyes. wears fingerless black gloves, a yellow jacket, black jeans and red and white trainers.
Personality: Kind and caring but can get angry easily.
likes: summer, the forest, animals and Gratin
Dislikes: Rainy days, Injections, Deserts and Curry rice.
Pokemon:
Mira - an eevee with a white tail. crushes Justice
moves: Transfrom and metrenome
Level 57
Gender: Female
Justice - A Mystrille Skarmory.
Moves: Fly, Aerial ace, Earthquake and growl.
level 60
Gender: male
background: Mother died from an unknown illness and father drowned when whitney was 13.
trainer: Breeder
opinion: They are ok, likes ryan best.
other:
1/10/2010 c4 4Quizy
Wow, it looks like you got your inspiration now, and I see you gave Seaweed a few parts and Aaron seems like an interesting person to bring into the story
As for a theme song, I really was never that great at this thing, but if I had to pick one, I guess it'd be... "Pokémon XD: Gale of Darkness- Wild Pokemon Battle"
It's perfect, a combination of Pokemon and Country, but unfortunately it's just background music so I don't know if it would work
4QuizyWow, it looks like you got your inspiration now, and I see you gave Seaweed a few parts and Aaron seems like an interesting person to bring into the story
As for a theme song, I really was never that great at this thing, but if I had to pick one, I guess it'd be... "Pokémon XD: Gale of Darkness- Wild Pokemon Battle"
It's perfect, a combination of Pokemon and Country, but unfortunately it's just background music so I don't know if it would work
1/8/2010 c4 bookworm6892
Nice, the spelling and punctuation's getting better and it makes the story easier to read. I'll send you a pm right away to help you out with that one shot. Nice job btw
Nice, the spelling and punctuation's getting better and it makes the story easier to read. I'll send you a pm right away to help you out with that one shot. Nice job btw
12/27/2009 c1 2TND
Name:freddy myers
Gender:male
Age:15
Hometown:safron city
Looks:black mohawk blue eyes pale white skin wears a white shirt jeans
Personality: he's the kind of guy that stays so quite that people don't know that he's around but the only time he talks is when someone needs advice which he gives because he's very wise
Likes:forests, the ocean, and people who aren't jerks
Dislikes:people who steal pokemon
Pokemon:grovyle male attacks bullet seed, extreme speed, solar beam, and leaf blade
Background: comes from the streets after running away from home with grovyle
Type of trainer: trainer
Opinion on my characters:he thinks they're alright kids
2TNDName:freddy myers
Gender:male
Age:15
Hometown:safron city
Looks:black mohawk blue eyes pale white skin wears a white shirt jeans
Personality: he's the kind of guy that stays so quite that people don't know that he's around but the only time he talks is when someone needs advice which he gives because he's very wise
Likes:forests, the ocean, and people who aren't jerks
Dislikes:people who steal pokemon
Pokemon:grovyle male attacks bullet seed, extreme speed, solar beam, and leaf blade
Background: comes from the streets after running away from home with grovyle
Type of trainer: trainer
Opinion on my characters:he thinks they're alright kids
12/15/2009 c3 4Quizy
Ya, awesome. Yeah, I guess there wasn't a lot going on in this chapter, however I did like the Gengar story. I thought it was interesting!
4QuizyYa, awesome. Yeah, I guess there wasn't a lot going on in this chapter, however I did like the Gengar story. I thought it was interesting!
12/14/2009 c3 8Sage of Emeralds
Hm, this chapter was alright, but you need to work on your grammar and spelling a bit. You need to capitialize at the beginning of a sentence, and put periods at the end of sentences. If you use Microsoft Word, spell check will help. Anyway, it wasn't bad.
8Sage of EmeraldsHm, this chapter was alright, but you need to work on your grammar and spelling a bit. You need to capitialize at the beginning of a sentence, and put periods at the end of sentences. If you use Microsoft Word, spell check will help. Anyway, it wasn't bad.
12/14/2009 c3 bookworm6892
hey thanks for using my oc, sarah is going to get a bit more screentime next chapter right? either way i can't wait to read more
hey thanks for using my oc, sarah is going to get a bit more screentime next chapter right? either way i can't wait to read more
12/14/2009 c3 9yuki-neechan
yay you used sai-kun ^.^ nya he's happy now...he is the vary first person who i made ^.^
9yuki-neechanyay you used sai-kun ^.^ nya he's happy now...he is the vary first person who i made ^.^
12/3/2009 c2 yuki-neechan
hehe nice i liked it well i want to out in an OC please use it,
name:Sai Yamagershi.
sex:male.
age:13.
home town:vilstone.
looks:black hair,blue/gray eyes,black shirt and blue jeans.
personality:nice,sweet,kind,loving,trustes easly.
likes:mostly anything.
dislikes:mean or evil people.
pokemon:espeon(female)psychic,psybeam,swift,confusion.
background:loving home,no dad basakly like ash but also different because his mom didnt want him to leave because she didnt want him to vanish.
type of trainer:pokemon trainer
other;he's blind so he has his espeon to help him though stuff but he can scnes other people by air perser
(sorry that i cant spell T.T)
hehe nice i liked it well i want to out in an OC please use it,
name:Sai Yamagershi.
sex:male.
age:13.
home town:vilstone.
looks:black hair,blue/gray eyes,black shirt and blue jeans.
personality:nice,sweet,kind,loving,trustes easly.
likes:mostly anything.
dislikes:mean or evil people.
pokemon:espeon(female)psychic,psybeam,swift,confusion.
background:loving home,no dad basakly like ash but also different because his mom didnt want him to leave because she didnt want him to vanish.
type of trainer:pokemon trainer
other;he's blind so he has his espeon to help him though stuff but he can scnes other people by air perser
(sorry that i cant spell T.T)
12/2/2009 c2 bookworm6892
Name: Sarah Wolfe
Gender: female
Age: 14
Hometown: eterna city (old chateau)
Looks: Pretty muscular and really light skin with some faint scars, green eyes and black hair with purple bangs tied in a ponytail, black stud earrings and a necklace of a wolf head that has a small diamond where the eye should be. She has on a plain gray t-shirt on under a beaten up black hoodie,(hood up so you can't see her face too well) old black jeans, a black belt with a knife and one of those petrifying blasters pokemon hunters have on it, fingerless gloves, and purple vans.
Personality: Not the nicest person around and doesn't trust easy, she takes her work pretty seriously and doesn't like telling others about herself. She's always nervous in sunlight or open spaces because she could be spotted easily. She perfers fight alongside her pokemon in pokemon battles if she can and always trains alongside her pokemon.
Likes: ghost/dark pokemon, mugging drunks, wolves, forests, freedom
Dislikes: smoking, alcahol, adults, sunlight, fancy things, abuse of any kind, authority of any kind, law enforcers
Pokemon:Skull, houndour, male, serious, only attacks after he's attacked, moves: fire fang, crunch, shadow ball, dark pulse
Spirit, spiritomb, male, careful, always attacks on his own, moves: dark pulse, shadow ball, psychic, will-o-wisp
Creeper, haunter, female, bold, likes scaring people at night, moves: night shade, shadow ball, poison jab, shadow claw
Nevermore, murkrow, male, rash, only attacks when he feels threatened, moves: mean look, roost, psychic, dark pulse
Background: She grew up with an abusive drunk for a father in saffaron city until she finally cracked and killed him(she still has the knife)and ran away when she was 10. She started stealing for a living eventually stole a pokemon egg from a drunk in slateport city that eventually hatched into her fisrt pokemon.(skull) A pokemon collector saw her steal the egg and offered her a job as a pokemon hunter, which she accepted and got spirit as a reward. Since then, Sarah became an official pokemon hunter and got a hideout in the old chateau, (where she caught her other two pokemon) and is currently wanted by the police in orre, jhoto, hoenn, and sinnoh. She had to go to forget-me-not valley because the cops were about to discover her hideout at the old chateau.
Type of trainer: pokemon hunter
Other: She once caught the rotom at old chateau, but let it go into the global trade network computer so that it can travel around the world freely. The rotom still feels in debt to her.
I hope you use her, keep up with the story, I want to read more! XD
Name: Sarah Wolfe
Gender: female
Age: 14
Hometown: eterna city (old chateau)
Looks: Pretty muscular and really light skin with some faint scars, green eyes and black hair with purple bangs tied in a ponytail, black stud earrings and a necklace of a wolf head that has a small diamond where the eye should be. She has on a plain gray t-shirt on under a beaten up black hoodie,(hood up so you can't see her face too well) old black jeans, a black belt with a knife and one of those petrifying blasters pokemon hunters have on it, fingerless gloves, and purple vans.
Personality: Not the nicest person around and doesn't trust easy, she takes her work pretty seriously and doesn't like telling others about herself. She's always nervous in sunlight or open spaces because she could be spotted easily. She perfers fight alongside her pokemon in pokemon battles if she can and always trains alongside her pokemon.
Likes: ghost/dark pokemon, mugging drunks, wolves, forests, freedom
Dislikes: smoking, alcahol, adults, sunlight, fancy things, abuse of any kind, authority of any kind, law enforcers
Pokemon:Skull, houndour, male, serious, only attacks after he's attacked, moves: fire fang, crunch, shadow ball, dark pulse
Spirit, spiritomb, male, careful, always attacks on his own, moves: dark pulse, shadow ball, psychic, will-o-wisp
Creeper, haunter, female, bold, likes scaring people at night, moves: night shade, shadow ball, poison jab, shadow claw
Nevermore, murkrow, male, rash, only attacks when he feels threatened, moves: mean look, roost, psychic, dark pulse
Background: She grew up with an abusive drunk for a father in saffaron city until she finally cracked and killed him(she still has the knife)and ran away when she was 10. She started stealing for a living eventually stole a pokemon egg from a drunk in slateport city that eventually hatched into her fisrt pokemon.(skull) A pokemon collector saw her steal the egg and offered her a job as a pokemon hunter, which she accepted and got spirit as a reward. Since then, Sarah became an official pokemon hunter and got a hideout in the old chateau, (where she caught her other two pokemon) and is currently wanted by the police in orre, jhoto, hoenn, and sinnoh. She had to go to forget-me-not valley because the cops were about to discover her hideout at the old chateau.
Type of trainer: pokemon hunter
Other: She once caught the rotom at old chateau, but let it go into the global trade network computer so that it can travel around the world freely. The rotom still feels in debt to her.
I hope you use her, keep up with the story, I want to read more! XD
11/28/2009 c1 4Quizy
Awesome. I love Pokemon AND Harvest Moon. This is just the thing for me!
Name: Sebastian Turgerlo (People call him SeaWeed sometimes)
Gender: Male
Age: 12, but he acts like an 8 year old
Hometown: Pacifidlog Town
Looks: He's got black-blue hair, but you can only see the bangs because he always wears a large, navy blue hat with a golden Wingull on the front. He has incredibly large Dark Blue eyes that seemingly pierce into your soul, but actually don't. His skin is a brown-white color that makes him look like an Indian. He's not generally fit, but he's not out of shape. He's short and underweight, but he can swim better than anyone he knows though. He can even withstand ocean currents. He wears a button down shirt that looks like a captain's shirt and a plain pair of dark red swim shorts that go below his knees because he can't last more than a day without jumping in the water. He also doesn't wear shoes so he mostly just rides on his Vaporeon.
Personality: He acts like an eight year old, but an innocent one. In fact he doesn't even know what drugs, alcohol, or even murder are as they never had them at Pacifidlog. He never asks for a battle except on rare occasions, but he will never refuse one (except on rare occasions). He never takes battle seriously as when he does he and his Pokemon will normally dance around cheerfully.
Likes: He LOVES ice cream, meeting new people and pokemon, and swimming, but especially swimming. He couldn't live without it. He also likes giving people gifts and being happy.
Dislikes: Hot places and rude people. Especially rude people, but he'll be indifferent about them either way later. He also dislikes junk food (excluding ice cream) and out of shape/careless people (unless they're nice)
Pokemon: Leafy, Marshtomp, Male, Calm, Indifferent to everything except Ice Cream, Mud, and Water. Never lies. All his Orange Spots are replaced with Dark Blue. Moves: Muddy Water, Protect, Counter, Rollout
Ashton, Castform, Female, Naughty, Likes to play pranks, has a small fang that can't be used in battle. Moves: Sunny Day, Rain Dance, Weather Ball, Attract
Emerald, Vaporeon, Male, Shy, Doesn't really like talking to people, has a green tail. Moves: Surf, Aqua Ring, Brine, Fake Tears
Background: He was born in a cave and lived in an extremely poor family. His dad died in a storm while trying to catch their dinner. His mom remarried and mysteriously died later as well as the Lapras that his mother was planning on giving him for his birthday. His step dad was rude to him and bought him a mudkip so he'd leave, but Sebastian didn't have enough money for a boat so he stayed. His step dad hit him once and after that he would spend nights in the cave he was born in with Leafy. Eventually he was so miserable that he swam the current and made it to Slateport city where he received a Castform for helping out a traveling weather researcher. And eventually he befriended the Captain who bought him a cheap home in the country and drove him there on his boat. He also received his Eevee by helping out some ship-owners.
Type of trainer: Coordinator/ Farmer
Other: When Sebastian "helps someone out" this can be anything from saving their lives to a big favor. Anything else doesn't really count much for him. His favorite flavor of ice cream is all of the flavors. He's too poor to afford pokeballs or potions and such. His favorite things to do are favors, compete in contests, swim, and sleep under a tree. His only talents are swimming and coming up with attack combinations.
Happy Writing! ;P
4QuizyAwesome. I love Pokemon AND Harvest Moon. This is just the thing for me!
Name: Sebastian Turgerlo (People call him SeaWeed sometimes)
Gender: Male
Age: 12, but he acts like an 8 year old
Hometown: Pacifidlog Town
Looks: He's got black-blue hair, but you can only see the bangs because he always wears a large, navy blue hat with a golden Wingull on the front. He has incredibly large Dark Blue eyes that seemingly pierce into your soul, but actually don't. His skin is a brown-white color that makes him look like an Indian. He's not generally fit, but he's not out of shape. He's short and underweight, but he can swim better than anyone he knows though. He can even withstand ocean currents. He wears a button down shirt that looks like a captain's shirt and a plain pair of dark red swim shorts that go below his knees because he can't last more than a day without jumping in the water. He also doesn't wear shoes so he mostly just rides on his Vaporeon.
Personality: He acts like an eight year old, but an innocent one. In fact he doesn't even know what drugs, alcohol, or even murder are as they never had them at Pacifidlog. He never asks for a battle except on rare occasions, but he will never refuse one (except on rare occasions). He never takes battle seriously as when he does he and his Pokemon will normally dance around cheerfully.
Likes: He LOVES ice cream, meeting new people and pokemon, and swimming, but especially swimming. He couldn't live without it. He also likes giving people gifts and being happy.
Dislikes: Hot places and rude people. Especially rude people, but he'll be indifferent about them either way later. He also dislikes junk food (excluding ice cream) and out of shape/careless people (unless they're nice)
Pokemon: Leafy, Marshtomp, Male, Calm, Indifferent to everything except Ice Cream, Mud, and Water. Never lies. All his Orange Spots are replaced with Dark Blue. Moves: Muddy Water, Protect, Counter, Rollout
Ashton, Castform, Female, Naughty, Likes to play pranks, has a small fang that can't be used in battle. Moves: Sunny Day, Rain Dance, Weather Ball, Attract
Emerald, Vaporeon, Male, Shy, Doesn't really like talking to people, has a green tail. Moves: Surf, Aqua Ring, Brine, Fake Tears
Background: He was born in a cave and lived in an extremely poor family. His dad died in a storm while trying to catch their dinner. His mom remarried and mysteriously died later as well as the Lapras that his mother was planning on giving him for his birthday. His step dad was rude to him and bought him a mudkip so he'd leave, but Sebastian didn't have enough money for a boat so he stayed. His step dad hit him once and after that he would spend nights in the cave he was born in with Leafy. Eventually he was so miserable that he swam the current and made it to Slateport city where he received a Castform for helping out a traveling weather researcher. And eventually he befriended the Captain who bought him a cheap home in the country and drove him there on his boat. He also received his Eevee by helping out some ship-owners.
Type of trainer: Coordinator/ Farmer
Other: When Sebastian "helps someone out" this can be anything from saving their lives to a big favor. Anything else doesn't really count much for him. His favorite flavor of ice cream is all of the flavors. He's too poor to afford pokeballs or potions and such. His favorite things to do are favors, compete in contests, swim, and sleep under a tree. His only talents are swimming and coming up with attack combinations.
Happy Writing! ;P
11/17/2009 c1 Sage of Emeralds
Ginnifer Kennedy Hart or Ginny for short
Gender:female
Age:10
Hometown:Slateport city
Looks:Average height,slim, shoulder length purple hair, and evergreen eyes, and pale skin
Clothes:Green vest over long sleeved purple shirt, sunglasses, jeans, and high tops
Personality:Ginny can be very serious when you first meet her and a little stiff, but once you get to know her she's very cool. Guys find her to be very pretty and smart.All in all, shes a clever, resourceful girl who loves to tinker with things
Likes:choclate, all pokemon,Ryan, and computers
Dislikes:Isolated towns(no technology),people who steal, Team Galactic
Background:When she was 7, Ginny's older brother joined Tem Galactic. Her parents divorced, and Ginny lives with her father,uncle, and two sisters in Slateport city. Ginny is trying to find and stop Team Galactic to save her older brother.
Job:Coordinater\scientist\mechanic
Pokemon:Minun,Marlin(stays out of pokeball) Torchic, Farley.
Future Pokemon:Shroomish, Kelly.Buizel,Spencer.And Piplup,Piper
Other stuff:Let me know ifyou are using her! Her greatest fear is the dark(no electric lights)
Ginnifer Kennedy Hart or Ginny for short
Gender:female
Age:10
Hometown:Slateport city
Looks:Average height,slim, shoulder length purple hair, and evergreen eyes, and pale skin
Clothes:Green vest over long sleeved purple shirt, sunglasses, jeans, and high tops
Personality:Ginny can be very serious when you first meet her and a little stiff, but once you get to know her she's very cool. Guys find her to be very pretty and smart.All in all, shes a clever, resourceful girl who loves to tinker with things
Likes:choclate, all pokemon,Ryan, and computers
Dislikes:Isolated towns(no technology),people who steal, Team Galactic
Background:When she was 7, Ginny's older brother joined Tem Galactic. Her parents divorced, and Ginny lives with her father,uncle, and two sisters in Slateport city. Ginny is trying to find and stop Team Galactic to save her older brother.
Job:Coordinater\scientist\mechanic
Pokemon:Minun,Marlin(stays out of pokeball) Torchic, Farley.
Future Pokemon:Shroomish, Kelly.Buizel,Spencer.And Piplup,Piper
Other stuff:Let me know ifyou are using her! Her greatest fear is the dark(no electric lights)