for Emori Kimidori11/26/2012 c3 Dafaq
After all that and Kyon just got a peck in the cheek? Now thats just cheap man... He should have gotten more at the end there... If you now what i mean.
After all that and Kyon just got a peck in the cheek? Now thats just cheap man... He should have gotten more at the end there... If you now what i mean.
8/1/2011 c3 
43Alex McM
Well that was unexpected. But bloody hell this story was hilarious. Thanks so much for writing this.
43Alex McMWell that was unexpected. But bloody hell this story was hilarious. Thanks so much for writing this.
8/1/2011 c2 Alex McM
Kimidori's got some issues. I wonder if it was actually her who wrote My Immortal? I wouldn't be surprised. But now it seems the SOS in SOS Brigade will have to take on a different meaning...
Kimidori's got some issues. I wonder if it was actually her who wrote My Immortal? I wouldn't be surprised. But now it seems the SOS in SOS Brigade will have to take on a different meaning...
7/31/2011 c1 Alex McM
Holy ** dude! This was one of the absolute funniest things I have ever read. I decided to check out your stuff after reading your chapter on The Layman's 'Pwnage of HS'. I'm really impressed. I came close to a heart-attack after "So make like a tree and ** off!" That line just made my day.
For a crack fic it is amazingly well written and it's just...awesome.
666 out of 10!
Holy ** dude! This was one of the absolute funniest things I have ever read. I decided to check out your stuff after reading your chapter on The Layman's 'Pwnage of HS'. I'm really impressed. I came close to a heart-attack after "So make like a tree and ** off!" That line just made my day.
For a crack fic it is amazingly well written and it's just...awesome.
666 out of 10!
10/16/2010 c1 1marydaisydinkle
hehe hot topic
i LOVE emiri kimidori! i would buy every chacter song cd, even though i already have 6...
1marydaisydinklehehe hot topic
i LOVE emiri kimidori! i would buy every chacter song cd, even though i already have 6...
6/3/2010 c1 anon
Interesting story. Really liked it. Plot was humorous but it also touched upon a serious topic as well (how to treat people properly/fairly, even the minor ones). It was a pretty extreme School-Days-esque way of teaching morals but I feel that adds well to the humour/irony. Just as you'll never know if your gf may repeatedly stab you with a kitchen knife for cheating, you'll never know if the quiet girl you treat like crap may come after you with a chainsaw... on fire. So better just play it safe and do the right thing. Only suggestion is that the ambiguous ending leaves much to be desired (i.e. do the 'douchebags' get a chance at redemption?). Overall great job!
Interesting story. Really liked it. Plot was humorous but it also touched upon a serious topic as well (how to treat people properly/fairly, even the minor ones). It was a pretty extreme School-Days-esque way of teaching morals but I feel that adds well to the humour/irony. Just as you'll never know if your gf may repeatedly stab you with a kitchen knife for cheating, you'll never know if the quiet girl you treat like crap may come after you with a chainsaw... on fire. So better just play it safe and do the right thing. Only suggestion is that the ambiguous ending leaves much to be desired (i.e. do the 'douchebags' get a chance at redemption?). Overall great job!
10/27/2009 c3 16Green Raven Katt
I find only one fanfic about Emiri Kimidori, and it has an ambiguous ending. I hate it when this happens. Think you could tie up some loose ends? How did the SOS Brigade manage to fight off the Anti-SOS Brigade? What happened when they all finally started being nice to Emiri? I'd really like to know. Maybe you could write another chapter. That'd be great. :)
16Green Raven KattI find only one fanfic about Emiri Kimidori, and it has an ambiguous ending. I hate it when this happens. Think you could tie up some loose ends? How did the SOS Brigade manage to fight off the Anti-SOS Brigade? What happened when they all finally started being nice to Emiri? I'd really like to know. Maybe you could write another chapter. That'd be great. :)
10/4/2009 c3 317MukuroRealm7
I think that the message for this story (if it has one) is be nice to your friends, or "Bit-characters" need love to, or they will turn into psycho emo people who will try to kill you. I think that the funniest part was when Emiri joined the Anti-SOS brigade and tried to kill everyone.
The only thing you should improve on is Nagato's personality, but since this originated from a series of Crackfics, its okay.
Oh, and Emiri is definitely in my top five characters, and all because of her shyness.
317MukuroRealm7I think that the message for this story (if it has one) is be nice to your friends, or "Bit-characters" need love to, or they will turn into psycho emo people who will try to kill you. I think that the funniest part was when Emiri joined the Anti-SOS brigade and tried to kill everyone.
The only thing you should improve on is Nagato's personality, but since this originated from a series of Crackfics, its okay.
Oh, and Emiri is definitely in my top five characters, and all because of her shyness.
10/4/2009 c1 Brendan Rizzo
I remember this fic. Didn't you upload it weeks ago, but for some reason it didn't get posted? Well, you already know what I think of this story, so ciao.
"Good night, and good luck."
-Edward R. Murrow
I remember this fic. Didn't you upload it weeks ago, but for some reason it didn't get posted? Well, you already know what I think of this story, so ciao.
"Good night, and good luck."
-Edward R. Murrow
10/4/2009 c3 3ObsidianWarrior
Nice. If anyone was wondering where the lyrics were from, check The Fight Song, Little Horn, Pretty as a Swastika, Antichrist Superstar, Irresponsible Hate Anthem, and Tourniquet.
The AvTT and ATHF chapters would have made a cool story as well, but this is just as cool. Keep writing!
3ObsidianWarriorNice. If anyone was wondering where the lyrics were from, check The Fight Song, Little Horn, Pretty as a Swastika, Antichrist Superstar, Irresponsible Hate Anthem, and Tourniquet.
The AvTT and ATHF chapters would have made a cool story as well, but this is just as cool. Keep writing!