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4/16 c1 NeverBeenMerelyPretty
That was a really sweet story! I loved it . . . :)
12/31/2012 c1 2XHaileeX
awwwwww that was so sweet...surprised that it doesn't have more views. I loved the part withe Emmett.
6/30/2012 c1 Guest
it was really great, but i wish i know jessica's reaction in the next day or what will edward do to her. ahhh that disgusting girl, i hate her. but i wish that edward hadn't kiss bella's lips not her soul though. thanks, love: the love we have
11/18/2010 c1 Guest
i absoloutly LOVED it! GREAT story! PLEASE RIGHT A SEQUAL! and it was EXTREMELY wel writtern! WELL DONE! *applause*
4/7/2010 c1 5Bellaislikeme
this was a great story and I loved reading every part of it.
1/5/2010 c1 1DancingInTheRain11
Its good
12/9/2009 c1 4LolittaDeath
Who was the blue light?
12/3/2009 c1 25emmettismymonkeyman
First off, Jessica's hair is not black, it's a dirty blonde shade and it isn't curly either. I am still confused on who is in Bella's body, is it jessica, or was it Jessica in Bella's body, cause even then, Bella doesn't have black hair. And who were at the cullen's, Bella and Jessica's (bodies) or was Bella's body, just there? And if Bella was in Jessica's body, why would she have her mental 'voice'?

Edward was funny, when he was thinking about killing Jessica, in Bella's body. haha. That was pretty funny.

When Edward said he was gonna break up with Bella, was a bad thing. I would've slapped him.

Edward and Emmett's convo about him almost losing control, when he was macking on Bella, or well making out with her, was funny and cute. :) He got a stone boner. haha.

And so the whole thing was made by a 'strange blue light'? That was a weird part.

And i liked the ending, they changing back was pretty sweet.

review4review?
11/16/2009 c1 eytedrfghjiolhg528ddfxcde
loved it hoped it was longer though
10/14/2009 c1 Zynda
Great story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Interesting premise.
10/13/2009 c1 11WishUponAfallenstar
thats was amazing=] great job!
10/8/2009 c1 18excuse.my.muse
Brilliant my friend, brilliant. But now I have to wonder...what would happen if Edward and Mike switched bodies. How would that day look like?

-excusemymuse
10/6/2009 c1 LeahHT
wow, I love this story. great job!
10/6/2009 c1 SimplyAndie
I try to get myself feel the emotions of the characters and I've never expected it to hit me so hard! AWESOME WRITING!

I've been searching most of my morning looking for a good, no, great story to read through here and this caught my attention! I LOVE IT!
10/6/2009 c1 amytaylorson
one word...amazing :) that story is one of the best ive read well done! You should consider writing a few more chapters to explain what happens with jessica and bella at school and who actually made this happen lol my money's on Angela as well ha Im off to read your other stories now thankyou for writing this :D
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