for The Test Subject4/13 c8 HisStoryLover
That was amazing&intense. I love your style of writing, especially how detailed you make everything. It was brilliant. I love the way you made John resist Snape's legimency attack. As if he almost had the same mind as a wizard without the power. Fantastic.
That was amazing&intense. I love your style of writing, especially how detailed you make everything. It was brilliant. I love the way you made John resist Snape's legimency attack. As if he almost had the same mind as a wizard without the power. Fantastic.
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4expectopadfoot
Wow! just perfect! You did the mental genius of John excellently, and glad that Snape got owned by a muggle.
4expectopadfootWow! just perfect! You did the mental genius of John excellently, and glad that Snape got owned by a muggle.
7/17/2012 c8
1jayswing96
i don't know about you but that was creepy. do you ever think that Harry would ever end up in one of John's games? I 've always wondered about that.
1jayswing96i don't know about you but that was creepy. do you ever think that Harry would ever end up in one of John's games? I 've always wondered about that.
4/29/2012 c8 LittlePondicus
THIS WAS SOOOO GORE AND DESCRIPTIVE. This is such a well-written story that made me flinch and cry and scream.
And my name is Amanda. At the end, when it said "Hello Amanda. You don't know me but… I know you…. I Want To Play A Game…" I literally screamed and started to cry. GREAT JOB! XD
THIS WAS SOOOO GORE AND DESCRIPTIVE. This is such a well-written story that made me flinch and cry and scream.
And my name is Amanda. At the end, when it said "Hello Amanda. You don't know me but… I know you…. I Want To Play A Game…" I literally screamed and started to cry. GREAT JOB! XD
1/29/2012 c8
8Falcon's Jade
Perfect! Snape is the perfect person to be a test subject since JK Rowling never gave us an emo classmate of Harry's that "did not appreciate life". I myself didn't like Snape up until the final book and it was more pity then anything since I always resented the idea of a teacher who could get away with what Snape's been doing. I love the lessons you had Jigsaw teaching and the twists he provides. Great job!
8Falcon's JadePerfect! Snape is the perfect person to be a test subject since JK Rowling never gave us an emo classmate of Harry's that "did not appreciate life". I myself didn't like Snape up until the final book and it was more pity then anything since I always resented the idea of a teacher who could get away with what Snape's been doing. I love the lessons you had Jigsaw teaching and the twists he provides. Great job!
12/29/2011 c8
7SeverusSnapePrincess10
Hey^_^Your story was absolutely brilliant. I'm glad that Snape overall learned his lesson. Dumbledore is quite the sneaky bastard. Anyways, your story was definitely interesting. I really enjoy the Saw movies so having mt favorite Harry Potter character be a test subject of Saw was really great. Thank you so much for a good piece of work to read. I hope you do more saw and Harry Potter stories in the future.
Love SeverusSnapePrincess10:)
7SeverusSnapePrincess10Hey^_^Your story was absolutely brilliant. I'm glad that Snape overall learned his lesson. Dumbledore is quite the sneaky bastard. Anyways, your story was definitely interesting. I really enjoy the Saw movies so having mt favorite Harry Potter character be a test subject of Saw was really great. Thank you so much for a good piece of work to read. I hope you do more saw and Harry Potter stories in the future.
Love SeverusSnapePrincess10:)
2/23/2011 c8
4CarminaxBuranax
I like how you use the last line of every chapter as the first line in the next, it adds to the dramatic effect.
I can't wait until you publish more FanFics, I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
Wishing you well,
CarminaxBuranax
4CarminaxBuranaxI like how you use the last line of every chapter as the first line in the next, it adds to the dramatic effect.
I can't wait until you publish more FanFics, I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
Wishing you well,
CarminaxBuranax
2/23/2011 c4 CarminaxBuranax
Unbelievable. This chapter was just plain genius. I know it sounds a bit creepy, but I could imagine everymoment of what was happening.
At first I was a bit grossed out, but it didn't faze me too much.
I can only imagine if they had put that in the movies . . . .
Unbelievable. This chapter was just plain genius. I know it sounds a bit creepy, but I could imagine everymoment of what was happening.
At first I was a bit grossed out, but it didn't faze me too much.
I can only imagine if they had put that in the movies . . . .
2/23/2011 c3 CarminaxBuranax
Clever, very very clever.
I like that you had Jigsaw say "Everybod deserves a chance" because even though Jigsaw does kill rather harshly, I still don't quite view him as evil.
Can't wait to find out what happens next.
-CarminaxBuranax
Clever, very very clever.
I like that you had Jigsaw say "Everybod deserves a chance" because even though Jigsaw does kill rather harshly, I still don't quite view him as evil.
Can't wait to find out what happens next.
-CarminaxBuranax
2/23/2011 c2 CarminaxBuranax
Creepy...I am a HUGE Saw fan, and I really love what you've done with this. I think Snape could learn a lesson or two.
I also like how you use the words, and how I can clearly imagine the trap. Did you make it up yourself? I haven't seen all the Saw movies yet, so I really wouldn't know.
Keep up the good writing!
-CarminaxBuranax
Creepy...I am a HUGE Saw fan, and I really love what you've done with this. I think Snape could learn a lesson or two.
I also like how you use the words, and how I can clearly imagine the trap. Did you make it up yourself? I haven't seen all the Saw movies yet, so I really wouldn't know.
Keep up the good writing!
-CarminaxBuranax
10/29/2010 c7 Miggs
Holy heckafreakinheck! I covered my eyes during the gory parts of this fic, just as I would when watching the Saw films. One of the best HP crossovers I've read so far. Good job!
Holy heckafreakinheck! I covered my eyes during the gory parts of this fic, just as I would when watching the Saw films. One of the best HP crossovers I've read so far. Good job!
4/22/2010 c8 Not on the Wall
This is probably one of THE BEST crossover HP fics I've read! (And this is a girl who reads fics every single day.) Excellent job and I hope you continue on with writing!
-CaitlynMario;
This is probably one of THE BEST crossover HP fics I've read! (And this is a girl who reads fics every single day.) Excellent job and I hope you continue on with writing!
-CaitlynMario;
1/23/2010 c8 Talionyzero
Fantastic story, I enjoy Harry Potter and love Saw and you incorporated both in a wonderful mix. Great job, I'm glad you published this and didn't just leave this laying around on your computer like some writers do.
Fantastic story, I enjoy Harry Potter and love Saw and you incorporated both in a wonderful mix. Great job, I'm glad you published this and didn't just leave this laying around on your computer like some writers do.
12/10/2009 c8
66RebeccaRoy
That was very good! If Severus ever finds out Dumbledore had anything to do with this he will kill him, I am sure of that! thanks for the mention too!
66RebeccaRoyThat was very good! If Severus ever finds out Dumbledore had anything to do with this he will kill him, I am sure of that! thanks for the mention too!
