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13S.J. More
Excellent chapter. It seems Kincaid and Scotty are getting closer and I like it! :-)
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13S.J. MoreExcellent chapter. It seems Kincaid and Scotty are getting closer and I like it! :-)
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1/17/2010 c10 24go.suck.on.a.lemon
That Beauregard bitch has another thing coming, and I am decidedly looking forward to it. Fabulously tense chapter.
24go.suck.on.a.lemonThat Beauregard bitch has another thing coming, and I am decidedly looking forward to it. Fabulously tense chapter.
1/17/2010 c3 12EmRose92
All right, I just found this, and I just have to pause in reading to let you know that I LOVE the Scotty/McCoy dynamic. There isn't enough of their friendship written out there! And I love seeing our favorite engineer get a significant role in a story-that doesn't happen often enough either. Can't wait to read more...which is why this review is short. Forgive me!
12EmRose92All right, I just found this, and I just have to pause in reading to let you know that I LOVE the Scotty/McCoy dynamic. There isn't enough of their friendship written out there! And I love seeing our favorite engineer get a significant role in a story-that doesn't happen often enough either. Can't wait to read more...which is why this review is short. Forgive me!
1/17/2010 c9 14Kay Em2
Wow, I hope you don't keep us waiting too long for chapter 10 - I'm on the edge of my sofa here! Great job with building the tension :-)
14Kay Em2Wow, I hope you don't keep us waiting too long for chapter 10 - I'm on the edge of my sofa here! Great job with building the tension :-)
1/16/2010 c9 13S.J. More
Aw, that was a great but horrible ending to this chapter. I don't want anything too serious to happen to kincaid, Scotty would just lose it. I hope everything works out in the end. You have my encouragement to keep writing and as fast as you can manage, say like Warp 5. :-)
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13S.J. MoreAw, that was a great but horrible ending to this chapter. I don't want anything too serious to happen to kincaid, Scotty would just lose it. I hope everything works out in the end. You have my encouragement to keep writing and as fast as you can manage, say like Warp 5. :-)
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1/16/2010 c7 13S.J. More
It's a really good story so far I hope you are continuing it in the future. The situations and adventure is very intriguing and I hope they stay that way. I'm interested to find out what will happen between Scotty and Inspector. As well as between Scotty and Fallon. Might I ask if there is going to be a major situation on board that impresses inspector during a hard mission or heartful connection between Scotty and Fallon soon?
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13S.J. MoreIt's a really good story so far I hope you are continuing it in the future. The situations and adventure is very intriguing and I hope they stay that way. I'm interested to find out what will happen between Scotty and Inspector. As well as between Scotty and Fallon. Might I ask if there is going to be a major situation on board that impresses inspector during a hard mission or heartful connection between Scotty and Fallon soon?
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11/30/2009 c7 EllieB
Yay! An update! Thank you - more soon please!
:-)
Yay! An update! Thank you - more soon please!
:-)
11/30/2009 c7 2Rossi's Lil Devil
Firstly: great story so far. I'm loving it, especially the interaction between Scotty and Kincade. They make a really awesome couple. I also like the sibling commrodery between Ray and Scotty as well.
Secondly: this is the most important thought. If Inspector Beauregard, doesn't cool her heels around Scotty, either he or Fallon is going to lash out at her really really hard.
Great job and story so far. Please add more soon
2Rossi's Lil DevilFirstly: great story so far. I'm loving it, especially the interaction between Scotty and Kincade. They make a really awesome couple. I also like the sibling commrodery between Ray and Scotty as well.
Secondly: this is the most important thought. If Inspector Beauregard, doesn't cool her heels around Scotty, either he or Fallon is going to lash out at her really really hard.
Great job and story so far. Please add more soon
11/29/2009 c6 EllieB
I check every day to see if this story has been updated, but it's been nearly a month now, and I'm beginning to fear you've lost interest.
If you're not going to continue it, could you at least post some bullet points on how you originally intended it to play out? Because I'd really like to know!
Thanks
I check every day to see if this story has been updated, but it's been nearly a month now, and I'm beginning to fear you've lost interest.
If you're not going to continue it, could you at least post some bullet points on how you originally intended it to play out? Because I'd really like to know!
Thanks
11/6/2009 c6 24go.suck.on.a.lemon
Gah! Scotty playing bagpipes may be one of the hottest images ever. Yes, I know I have issues. I play, ok? And I appreciate any story that uses appropriate terminology or just the instrument in general.
24go.suck.on.a.lemonGah! Scotty playing bagpipes may be one of the hottest images ever. Yes, I know I have issues. I play, ok? And I appreciate any story that uses appropriate terminology or just the instrument in general.
11/5/2009 c6 14Kay Em2
Hmm... not sure that the sudden change in Preston and Wilson really works. Having built up the expectation that they are going to do something really stupid, here they are becoming part of Scott's inner circle. Or maybe you're lulling us into a false sense of security! :-)
You have Scotty so right though, and it's great that you don't make the mistake of trying to "write the accent". Hope he and Kincaid make it to the 'next level' soon though - I guess what they need is a catalyst, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with for that one!
14Kay Em2Hmm... not sure that the sudden change in Preston and Wilson really works. Having built up the expectation that they are going to do something really stupid, here they are becoming part of Scott's inner circle. Or maybe you're lulling us into a false sense of security! :-)
You have Scotty so right though, and it's great that you don't make the mistake of trying to "write the accent". Hope he and Kincaid make it to the 'next level' soon though - I guess what they need is a catalyst, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with for that one!
11/1/2009 c5 EllieB
This is great - such a refreshing change to find a decent Scotty story.
Like your other reviewers, I'm wondering when these two are going to get together. I'd also like to see what happens when Kirk gives Scotty the conn (must be due any moment, surely!) - think that would give Kincaid a whole new perspective on him, especially if they're in the middle of a crisis.
Please update soon!
This is great - such a refreshing change to find a decent Scotty story.
Like your other reviewers, I'm wondering when these two are going to get together. I'd also like to see what happens when Kirk gives Scotty the conn (must be due any moment, surely!) - think that would give Kincaid a whole new perspective on him, especially if they're in the middle of a crisis.
Please update soon!
10/27/2009 c5 Kay Em2
I have two minor quibbles -
1 - 'Excalibur' should be spelled with a 'u' before the 'r', not an 'e' (This was the vessel that was attacked by the M-5 unit, btw, killing everyone on board.)
2 - You need to post your updates more frequently :-) The suspense is killing me - hope Scott and Kincaid get together soon!
:-D
I have two minor quibbles -
1 - 'Excalibur' should be spelled with a 'u' before the 'r', not an 'e' (This was the vessel that was attacked by the M-5 unit, btw, killing everyone on board.)
2 - You need to post your updates more frequently :-) The suspense is killing me - hope Scott and Kincaid get together soon!
:-D