for My Brother,My Keeper11/16/2012 c2 
5Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom
This is a good story so far, are you going to continue it?
-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.
5Pearl Bramble of WillowbottomThis is a good story so far, are you going to continue it?
-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.
10/18/2009 c2 1Aslan is love
I love this chapter but i'm little confused on the timeline didn't you say that this Story was going cover Pre Narnia though The last battle? because this chapter seems to take place after LWW not sure if you intended it to be before or after LWW. but I love it all the same I espaclly want to see them interact during SC and LB.
1Aslan is loveI love this chapter but i'm little confused on the timeline didn't you say that this Story was going cover Pre Narnia though The last battle? because this chapter seems to take place after LWW not sure if you intended it to be before or after LWW. but I love it all the same I espaclly want to see them interact during SC and LB.
10/14/2009 c2 Opera Dove
LOL. Good ole' math...
I remember the days. I passed college algebra with a "C" and was quite elated...
LOL. Good ole' math...
I remember the days. I passed college algebra with a "C" and was quite elated...
10/14/2009 c2 5Queen Lani Kaulitz the Hyper
that chapter was cute. update again soon!
~Queen Lani Kaulitz the Hyper :D
5Queen Lani Kaulitz the Hyperthat chapter was cute. update again soon!
~Queen Lani Kaulitz the Hyper :D
10/14/2009 c2 69LucyCrewe11
good chapter, I enjoyed reading it. I hadn't expected that much time to have passed from the first chapter to the second, it surprised me. It was still a fun read, though. It looks like a few words are missing in here-like they got accidently deleted or something-but other than that, I didn't notice any mistakes.
Please update again soon.
BTW: Chapter 3 of "The silver pocket watch" is now up.
69LucyCrewe11good chapter, I enjoyed reading it. I hadn't expected that much time to have passed from the first chapter to the second, it surprised me. It was still a fun read, though. It looks like a few words are missing in here-like they got accidently deleted or something-but other than that, I didn't notice any mistakes.
Please update again soon.
BTW: Chapter 3 of "The silver pocket watch" is now up.
10/9/2009 c1 5Queen Lani Kaulitz the Hyper
That was a cute first chapter. This story has great potential
Cant wait for your next update!
~Queen Lani Kaulitz the Hyper :D
5Queen Lani Kaulitz the HyperThat was a cute first chapter. This story has great potential
Cant wait for your next update!
~Queen Lani Kaulitz the Hyper :D
10/9/2009 c1 69LucyCrewe11
Aw, this seems like it's going to be a really sweet story. I love how you are starting it with them as little kids. Very cute. Also this chapter made me chuckle more than once, LOL. You write little kids very well. Sometimes it reminds me of my own little (Well, they're not little anymore, but they USED to be little) cousins and how they used to fight with each other growing up. Ah, good times, good times. Okay, setimental moment over. Anyway, great chapter, please update again soon.
BTW: I have a new story up, it's called, "The silver pocket watch" do you think you could review it if you have some free time?
69LucyCrewe11Aw, this seems like it's going to be a really sweet story. I love how you are starting it with them as little kids. Very cute. Also this chapter made me chuckle more than once, LOL. You write little kids very well. Sometimes it reminds me of my own little (Well, they're not little anymore, but they USED to be little) cousins and how they used to fight with each other growing up. Ah, good times, good times. Okay, setimental moment over. Anyway, great chapter, please update again soon.
BTW: I have a new story up, it's called, "The silver pocket watch" do you think you could review it if you have some free time?