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2miloriclarion
Ok that was the best 55 chapters I have ever read on fanfic, and the funniest two minutes of my life was,
"You know that's why I love you right?"
"What, I thought you loved me because life is like a stream!"
Lol that was superb and completely hilarious.
2miloriclarionOk that was the best 55 chapters I have ever read on fanfic, and the funniest two minutes of my life was,
"You know that's why I love you right?"
"What, I thought you loved me because life is like a stream!"
Lol that was superb and completely hilarious.
1/9 c55 FireLily25
I wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved this story and had to add it to my favorites. I thought this idea was epic even though I'm with you in not liking the books and thinking the movie was alright. I liked that you combined two different worlds in a way that still called back to the LWW books but changed it with wonderful plot twists.
And I loved how Edmund and Lucy and Peter and Susan were together in this AU. Lucy was innocent and brightness to Edmund's seriousness and non-innoncent about his mother's plans, and Susan was logic to Peter's emotional state( Sometimes any- life is like a stream will now always crack me up).
I was sorta sad that they are living in two different worlds but it calls back to PC when the older two were told there were two old, but that the younger two could still come back.
Thank you for the wonderful fanfiction that made a better story than Pullman's books with the wonderfulness of CS Lewis mixed in.
I wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved this story and had to add it to my favorites. I thought this idea was epic even though I'm with you in not liking the books and thinking the movie was alright. I liked that you combined two different worlds in a way that still called back to the LWW books but changed it with wonderful plot twists.
And I loved how Edmund and Lucy and Peter and Susan were together in this AU. Lucy was innocent and brightness to Edmund's seriousness and non-innoncent about his mother's plans, and Susan was logic to Peter's emotional state( Sometimes any- life is like a stream will now always crack me up).
I was sorta sad that they are living in two different worlds but it calls back to PC when the older two were told there were two old, but that the younger two could still come back.
Thank you for the wonderful fanfiction that made a better story than Pullman's books with the wonderfulness of CS Lewis mixed in.
3/25/2012 c55 kimjledford
I've read the entire story over the last couple of weeks, and I just have to thank you for it! I loved being able to experience Pullman's book again in a different way, and with other characters that I love. You captured both authors' styles. The bond of relationship between human and daemon was awesomely evident. Cliffhanger ending seems the perfect way to end it. Lots of action. The only things I was confused about were that people are embarrassed around their daemons? And how close the story was to the original. So, thank you!
I've read the entire story over the last couple of weeks, and I just have to thank you for it! I loved being able to experience Pullman's book again in a different way, and with other characters that I love. You captured both authors' styles. The bond of relationship between human and daemon was awesomely evident. Cliffhanger ending seems the perfect way to end it. Lots of action. The only things I was confused about were that people are embarrassed around their daemons? And how close the story was to the original. So, thank you!
11/3/2011 c30 Yyunesprith
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Well, now. Blonde Caspian and rapid introduction of a really lovely Star's Daughter. I think you just got brownie points in my mind.
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Well, now. Blonde Caspian and rapid introduction of a really lovely Star's Daughter. I think you just got brownie points in my mind.
11/3/2011 c1 Yyunesprith
Alright. First off, I have only read up to Chapter 27 so far, so I have not finished forming an opinion.
Normally I find in-Pevensie-family pairings to be... disturbing, to say the least. But that is based upon the moral and medical implications of incest and the low psychological probability of sibling-love such as is seen between those four changing into the erotic kind. Seeing an AU 'verse where they are not siblings in the first place, where, in fact, Su and Ed are practically different characters in the same bodily appearence and with personality parallels to there originals, I am finding that I actually sort of like the results. OK, I'm still wondering how you got hooked on the idea, but you're a pretty good writer, and you've had a whole lot of fun plot-twists along the way.
By the way, I LOVE that Rabadash's daemon is a scorpion! :)
And I look forward greatly to seeing how Aslan works in this 'verse, and to what extent you have a different take from Pullman on the Dust...
Alright. First off, I have only read up to Chapter 27 so far, so I have not finished forming an opinion.
Normally I find in-Pevensie-family pairings to be... disturbing, to say the least. But that is based upon the moral and medical implications of incest and the low psychological probability of sibling-love such as is seen between those four changing into the erotic kind. Seeing an AU 'verse where they are not siblings in the first place, where, in fact, Su and Ed are practically different characters in the same bodily appearence and with personality parallels to there originals, I am finding that I actually sort of like the results. OK, I'm still wondering how you got hooked on the idea, but you're a pretty good writer, and you've had a whole lot of fun plot-twists along the way.
By the way, I LOVE that Rabadash's daemon is a scorpion! :)
And I look forward greatly to seeing how Aslan works in this 'verse, and to what extent you have a different take from Pullman on the Dust...
7/21/2011 c4 PearlAisy246
"She'll freeze her whole behind off." at first I didn't get that but then I ended up with "Hhahahahahahahh!" lol!
"She'll freeze her whole behind off." at first I didn't get that but then I ended up with "Hhahahahahahahh!" lol!
7/19/2011 c55 MewMahiNia
Well I like the story, you know the way you describe everything and the plot is really good!
But maybe a little more romance between Lucy and Edmund...
Well I like the story, you know the way you describe everything and the plot is really good!
But maybe a little more romance between Lucy and Edmund...
12/23/2010 c5 Lianda
hmm... as i thought, your story is quite cool. but maybe because i cna't use english well, it's a little bit hard to understand. plus, this story has 55 chapter. allright thanks to write this great fic!
hmm... as i thought, your story is quite cool. but maybe because i cna't use english well, it's a little bit hard to understand. plus, this story has 55 chapter. allright thanks to write this great fic!
11/8/2010 c55 24WriterFreak101
Praise for The Silver Pocket Watch! I was extremely impressed by this story. What one might have considered impossible has just been done. This HDM/Narnia crossover was the best crossover I've read so far. A masterpiece, written in the same styles as C.S. Lewis and Philip Pullman. Drawing the reader into a crossover fantasy epic. Truly amazing. Beautiful, sensational. The characters so beautifully crafted, the sequences so amazingly described, it made one feel as though they were really in the action. I was disappointed when the end finally came because there was nothing else to read! Regardless, we will be checking in on the sequel.
~WriterFreak101~:)
24WriterFreak101Praise for The Silver Pocket Watch! I was extremely impressed by this story. What one might have considered impossible has just been done. This HDM/Narnia crossover was the best crossover I've read so far. A masterpiece, written in the same styles as C.S. Lewis and Philip Pullman. Drawing the reader into a crossover fantasy epic. Truly amazing. Beautiful, sensational. The characters so beautifully crafted, the sequences so amazingly described, it made one feel as though they were really in the action. I was disappointed when the end finally came because there was nothing else to read! Regardless, we will be checking in on the sequel.
~WriterFreak101~:)
8/30/2010 c55 Guest
I love the story I had to read it 2 time, cause I love the story so much
I am now reading the 2nd book to this, Alethiometrist's silver, and I love both of the books
I love the story I had to read it 2 time, cause I love the story so much
I am now reading the 2nd book to this, Alethiometrist's silver, and I love both of the books
8/8/2010 c7 32Blonde Pickle Mule
*Screams* E-Eustace w-was taken? *hyperventilates* Oh that's bad. Oh that's VERY VERY bad! Holy fudge muffins...oh fudging newt eyes I hope he's alright...but of course he isn't! By the sounds of things he had his deamon CUT! Oh rat tails...not my poor Eustace! No no no...that can't have happened! It's just...not possible...*closes eyes*
And I have a feeling Peter turning up in the middle of it won't help either. He doesn't have a deamon- that's just going to make the people at Bolvanger think their experiments will work! Oh sheesh...
32Blonde Pickle Mule*Screams* E-Eustace w-was taken? *hyperventilates* Oh that's bad. Oh that's VERY VERY bad! Holy fudge muffins...oh fudging newt eyes I hope he's alright...but of course he isn't! By the sounds of things he had his deamon CUT! Oh rat tails...not my poor Eustace! No no no...that can't have happened! It's just...not possible...*closes eyes*
And I have a feeling Peter turning up in the middle of it won't help either. He doesn't have a deamon- that's just going to make the people at Bolvanger think their experiments will work! Oh sheesh...
6/24/2010 c55 25A Hopeful Voice
That was a great story! I read the entire thing today! When I started this morning, I was watching/listening to the Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, and it took that plus two Pirates of the Caribbean movies, AND dinner time to finish this. Thank goodness I'm home alone for the day and it's summer. Haha :) Anyway, this was a great story. The entire time I was like, she is a GENIUS coming up with all those ways to throw in Narnia characters with the HDM characters. Now, I just started reading The Golden Compass and I saw the movie for the first time yesterday (Thank you, YouTube), but since you said this would follow the movie, it worked well. Anyway, thanks for writing this super awesome story! :D
25A Hopeful VoiceThat was a great story! I read the entire thing today! When I started this morning, I was watching/listening to the Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe, and it took that plus two Pirates of the Caribbean movies, AND dinner time to finish this. Thank goodness I'm home alone for the day and it's summer. Haha :) Anyway, this was a great story. The entire time I was like, she is a GENIUS coming up with all those ways to throw in Narnia characters with the HDM characters. Now, I just started reading The Golden Compass and I saw the movie for the first time yesterday (Thank you, YouTube), but since you said this would follow the movie, it worked well. Anyway, thanks for writing this super awesome story! :D
6/2/2010 c15 12BookObsesserNumberOne
So, Edmund has to steal the watch? Lucy better not let it out of her sight...but will Edmund actually do it?
12BookObsesserNumberOneSo, Edmund has to steal the watch? Lucy better not let it out of her sight...but will Edmund actually do it?
4/19/2010 c14 BookObsesserNumberOne
So Susan and Peter finally admitted to each other that they loved each other. I hate it when writers overcomplicate things for the sake of drama, and you kept it realistic. Nice job.
So Susan and Peter finally admitted to each other that they loved each other. I hate it when writers overcomplicate things for the sake of drama, and you kept it realistic. Nice job.