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4Monki-Neko
are you going to continue this? this world you've created seems a hell of a lot more interesting than the plain old regular naruto verse, a bit more like Inuyasha to be honest, and i'd love to see how they'd take care of the baby-or not.
4Monki-Nekoare you going to continue this? this world you've created seems a hell of a lot more interesting than the plain old regular naruto verse, a bit more like Inuyasha to be honest, and i'd love to see how they'd take care of the baby-or not.
11/12/2012 c2 3deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover
"I'll tie him down and you stab him!" Uzumaki-san hissed.
LOL!Wish their was more but at least there was a second chapter.
3deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover"I'll tie him down and you stab him!" Uzumaki-san hissed.
LOL!Wish their was more but at least there was a second chapter.
9/24/2012 c2 lily flower
MORE! i want to know what happens next! :-)
MORE! i want to know what happens next! :-)
8/15/2012 c2 37BiblioMatsuri
And now I'm imagining the fiasco that will occur when they get back to Konoha... Make that fiascos, plural. *heh heh heh*
37BiblioMatsuriAnd now I'm imagining the fiasco that will occur when they get back to Konoha... Make that fiascos, plural. *heh heh heh*
8/15/2012 c1 BiblioMatsuri
This is why one should never call on strange deities. They'll always manage to twist things around in the most unexpected way. (Seriously, I've read enough folk tales and so to recognized that.)
This is why one should never call on strange deities. They'll always manage to twist things around in the most unexpected way. (Seriously, I've read enough folk tales and so to recognized that.)
3/8/2012 c2 15CaptainFlye
...that's IT? Come ON! It so good, and the writing style is pretty good for the most part. Why aren't you continuing this?
15CaptainFlye...that's IT? Come ON! It so good, and the writing style is pretty good for the most part. Why aren't you continuing this?
2/2/2012 c2 Teucrian
This is a pretty interesting concept, with a very unique setup. Maybe you could come back to it and write some more?
This is a pretty interesting concept, with a very unique setup. Maybe you could come back to it and write some more?
11/22/2011 c2 blackewolfe
Fate: Problem ninjas? *trollface*
More ? I has cookies
Fate: Problem ninjas? *trollface*
More ? I has cookies
10/28/2011 c2 DamionKenley117
Ah! You're perfect! Why don't you write longer stories?
Seriously, I read Will of Foxfire and another one of your oneshots and ... you could expand any one of these
Ah! You're perfect! Why don't you write longer stories?
Seriously, I read Will of Foxfire and another one of your oneshots and ... you could expand any one of these
10/4/2011 c2 1nipnag
this is a really good mini-story! i think you should totally continue on it even though you put it as 'completed'. i'd like to read the process on how minato and kushina develop their relationship from here and raise naruto up!
1nipnagthis is a really good mini-story! i think you should totally continue on it even though you put it as 'completed'. i'd like to read the process on how minato and kushina develop their relationship from here and raise naruto up!
4/1/2011 c2 Dreaming101
Haha!
Jiraiya is a complete idiot when it ones to babies.. xD
I liked the mini backstory to Minato and Kushina's life.
:)
Haha!
Jiraiya is a complete idiot when it ones to babies.. xD
I liked the mini backstory to Minato and Kushina's life.
:)